Summer Writing Contest 2012 - In Her Nature

In Her Nature


Nox settles at the foot of a large oak. He takes a deep breath, inhaling the scent of the sunlight upon the green leaves above and the soft damp earth underneath. It feels good to be in the shade, away from the frenzy of colors and sounds of the outside world that usurp the quiet oases such as these.

As Nox is lulled asleep by the creak of the canopy swaying in the gentle breeze, he suddenly awakens. A sweet nectar that swirls in the air around him ignites his senses. His body tingles with anticipation though he can’t pinpoint the source of this intoxicating aroma. Through the woods emerges the most beautiful form he has ever seen. Her naked body glows with the color of sage as she strides toward him, her long supple legs unhindered by the rocks and thicket. There is an aura of danger about her, a pinprick in the back of his neck warning him to act with caution but he cannot look away from something so astonishing. Maybe it is the danger itself that excites him.

“Who… are you?” He manages to whisper, a slight tremble to his voice.
Her voice is delicate and silken but she speaks with command. “I am Vermina. And you are mine.”

She embraces his strong, tan body that vibrates with longing. Nox gazes into her large, green eyes that shine so brilliantly he can see his own hazel eyes in their reflection. Any resolve he may have had melts under the pressure of temptation and he willingly submits to her trance. He presses his body against her.

“I must have you. Right here and now.” Nox’s own words flow like a dream, hardly able to believe they came from his own mouth.

Vermina lies upon the warm ground with only the soil for a bed. Nox slides into her from behind and she inhales sharply at the pressure within. He groans with pleasure as her body tightly envelops him. Savoring the indulgence, Nox pushes into her deeply at a slow, even pace. She murmurs, her words dripping like honey, that she wants more. His mind is driven into a frenzy of ecstasy as he thrusts deep into her, punishing her for this spell that has driven him mad with lust. Vermina cries out, pushing back against him in tandem with each savage thrust. The pleasure is unbearable. Between gasps, Nox exclaims that he’s about to cum. Vermina simply responds by letting out a loud moan, her legs shaking. Driven over the edge, he cries out as he fills her, his entire being shuddering with bliss. They stay in that position for a few moments, panting, while they catch their breath.

Nox slowly withdraws and slumps onto the ground, lying on his back. He never knew romance in his life and to have an affair such as this, and so unexpectedly, his mind is giddy with activity. Vermina crawls on top of him, lightly pecking his face. Where she kisses, he feels a tingling sensation. The tingling then starts to feel more like a dull burn but does little more than cause a slight discomfort due to the miasma of desire still encircling his thoughts. Vermina nips his neck.

“Ouch! Take it easy,” he says with a wary chuckle.
Vermina doesn’t answer and he, thinking she was just a little overzealous with her kiss, dismisses it. She bites his cheek, hard.
“Hey! That hurt! Why are you-?”
“I am so very hungry,” she breathes.

She pins him to the ground and sinks her mandibles into the side of his head. Nox screams, struggling to get away but she easily overpowers him. She rips out a chunk of his flesh, devouring it with fervor. His cries of agony go unheard- as they always do. The birds continue chirping their merry song, a nearby butterfly lazily stretches its wings, undisturbed as his bodily fluids become part of nature. He screams until there is no longer anything left to scream with, just a stump where his head used to be like a piece missing from a gory puzzle. Even so, he still tries to escape, his six legs trying in vain to shove the vile murderess away.

She smiles to herself, the only remnants of Nox’s identity now staining her face. Her voracious appetite sated having had more head than a Fakku video, Vermina unfolds her wings and flits off into the woods. She has no guilt for her actions for it is only the romance of nature. Such are the lives of the praying mantis.

Huh...kinda gruesome... In any case, it certainly is interesting, if not random. I...I'm actually at a loss of words on just how to describe it. Give me a moment while my stomach settles back down...

Ha ha! Either way, I must take it as a compliment. Thanks for reading!

Okay, I think I've regained my- *barf* Wait, no I haven't. Anyway, I do have to say that this story totally threw me for a loop. For a moment, I thought this was a fan fiction of Star Ocean 3 and treated it as such up until the very end. The action leading up to all of this is great and what a climax. The ending resolution did a great job to bring all of this together. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to finish emptying out my stomach.

Hahahahaha! I love you, Blaze. Yeah, I didn't realize it could be taken as a Star Ocean fan fic until after I posted it (Nox, my avatar Albel Nox) but I actually got the name "Nox" from "noxious" whiiiiiich sounds like a word you're well acquainted with, at the moment. ;) I very much appreciate your comments. Happy haunting, friend.

Congratulations on winning this competition! I had a mind to write parodies of the better entries upon the end of the competition but this entry is perfect! I can't parody this!

Very gruesome! Anyone who is reading this expecting some sleazy action will be more than disappointed and that fills me with schadenfreude, the best feeling in this world because I am just a twisted person with a bone in his brain.

Haha! Is this the pre-announcement announcement? I am super stoked!
I'm flattered you want to parody this. Go ahead, if you like. One can't have too many carnivorous insects, right?
You might want to do something about that bone in your brain. I recommend poking it with a sharp, pointed object. ...Or maybe that's what you're not supposed to do. Hmm...

You need to pay more attention to this forum. Look at the new sticky thread announcing the winners. ;)

Nice man! I never honestly expected you to win though.(not that I expected mine to win either) It's a wonderful (gruesome) work in itself, very unique. I just never expected a non H would win in this kingdom of perverts.

P.S. You might have misunderstood my definition of non-h. Monster girl just isn't normal H for me

Well, perverted entries usually don't seem to win. The perverted entry that won for the first time - I believe - is our third winner on this contest.

Some of the other winners had slight sexual elements, but that was about it.

To be honest the story was too bland to be taken seriously but I gotta admit though, the sentence structure was so well done! I had learned ALOT of new things from you.

Though your an awesome writer, I still wonder. How did you won when
1. It is not connected to Fakku
2. It has no connection to Summer

I don't mind if you think my story was bland, I just want to know in what way so that I may improve in the future. Also, I'm pleasantly surprised my writing could teach. It's the first time I've gotten the courage to submit something I've written.

To answer your question about the connection to Fakku and Summer, the requirements stated that it could be Summer, Vacation or Romance- any of the three. I decided on romance and just took it in a different direction. Also, it said it must contain something related to Fakku in some way such as a cameo or reference to the site, which is also included. Since those were requirements, I don't think I would have been able to be a participant had they not been met.

Thanks, I appreciate your feedback!

Thank you for the feedback! I fully expected to raise some eyebrows and not just because of what I wrote. I tend to fly under the radar (as I'm sure you can see from my lack of posts). Maybe I'll peek my head out more often now. :)

You shouldn't double post, please refrain from doing so as it is against the rules. You can still quote more than one person in a single post by right-clicking on the quote button and opening the page in a new tab of the posts that you want to quote; upon opening those pages in other tabs, cut and paste the text from the pages and paste all in only one posting page. After that, just write below each quote... I wonder if I have made any sense, lol.

Oh and please do become an active member if you can in here!

I learned a LOT of things from you as well. It's a bit shameful to say this, but I really wanted someone else to win. But I really do LOVE your work, I just never got to read it before. I might have like this as well if I had read it in the first place before the judging. You can't like what you don't know.

I'm going for a non-H next time, but heck whatever.

P.S. Are there gonna be writing contests side from the winter and summer?

Such a question should be asked on a place like the winners' thread or the main thread of the Summer Writing Contest or maybe the Writers' Lounge.

But anyway... beats me. Waar and I were talking about a Halloween contest at one point. But I don't know if people even wants that. More so, we'd have to ready some actual prizes to encourage competition and people to join.

i wasnt the only person who wrote about girls being insects :D


totally deserved the win.

Well contrary towards the popular opinion I could somehow expected how the ending finally turns out lol, I don't know if I should feel bad because I laughed when it come towards the end hahaha, it was a good ending nonetheless and left out a good impact on me, it intrigues me how it sets this piece from the usual vanilla stories by the development~

Anyways I think the description and attention-to-detail given in this piece is simply wonderful thus making it an enjoyable read for all of us, the sleazy scenes made myself tingling with joy and the twist made me burst in laughter, I don't know if it's the right reaction though. Yeah, last but not least congratulations for winning the contest~

I felt the same way too High. If I were to write a short story that does not involve monologues, that would be what I would like to write. An unhappy ending that is anti-climatic that you'd be left thinking whether the writer is fooling around with you.

There are too many good endings. Not that I am against good endings in general, but I am against or don't feel comfortable with good endings that don't come about realistically or come about too easily without sacrifice or hard work. My taste for writing is more towards fiction attempting to imitate reality. And it fails to do that, then it ought to be a comedy.

Yup yup, although I tend to let myself wonder and just write whatever that came to mind though, I don't like to stick around with genres and a specific way to write things~

Comedy or a satiric parody of reality to be exact? I also like stuff because :

1. I find these interesting
2. A bit untypical
3. Cock juices
4. The third point is a joke