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AwdBawl
6 years ago
Just a fair warning to any would-be purchasers: notice the "light novel" tag. The few pictures you see there in the sample thumbnails are just about all you'll see in the book. An okay read, but a bit of a trap for those expecting the standard Fakku store entry. My $10 spent to save yours.
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sjtiernan
5 years ago
I should have read this first...sadness
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oldgrouch
Cat of Time
5 years ago
I was looking forward to reading this but the only download is an epub file which is useless to me. Looks like I wasted my money on this one.
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5 years ago
So, I just finished reading and I have to say that while I was interested in the premise of the novel, especially after reading the bonus story, I was still left feeling a bit disappointed in execution.
This title just had the misfortune to feel like a short erotic novella that was extended by repeatedly using the fate that Chris and Olivis are so in love with each other and constantly keep having sex with one another that it kind of got to be a bit too much. Plus, not only did it feel like so much was happening without a lot of detail, it also had some various grammatical errors and near the end got a bit confusing because of the lack identifying who the speaker was.
Ultimately, if the author hadn't focused so much on getting from Point A to Point B and the sex, but added some content to add more depth to both the characters and the world it would of been a bit better in my opinion. Although, I'm still interested to see how the story unfolds so I'll be looking forward to the next release.
This title just had the misfortune to feel like a short erotic novella that was extended by repeatedly using the fate that Chris and Olivis are so in love with each other and constantly keep having sex with one another that it kind of got to be a bit too much. Plus, not only did it feel like so much was happening without a lot of detail, it also had some various grammatical errors and near the end got a bit confusing because of the lack identifying who the speaker was.
Ultimately, if the author hadn't focused so much on getting from Point A to Point B and the sex, but added some content to add more depth to both the characters and the world it would of been a bit better in my opinion. Although, I'm still interested to see how the story unfolds so I'll be looking forward to the next release.
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