As the title suggests, these four chapters are mostly buildup, though I think they're pretty enjoyable. Those waiting for action should look forward to the following chapters though, especially chapter 22.
As promised the slow burn continues as the characters have yet to stick any shafts into any holes. But in these chapters we can see the art getting lewder and lewder as what in earlier chapters might have been just a silhouette of a rod is now a highly detailed cock only slightly obscured by basically transparent fabric. And by the 16th chapter we are basically looking at a fully naked throbbing dick. Hopefully this trend continues as the series gets more and more lewd and eventually we will get some hole action. We in it for the long game. Let's goooo.
The further into the series you go, the more erotic the content becomes. But its still on the borderline of 'ecchi' hentai instead of actual hentai.
The art is still stellar and erotic, it just needs to have more than teasing and flashes.
They sure as hell drop a bomb on you with that last page lol. I wish the first full reveal was a bit slower and more deliberate. Still a great book tho, and very cool to see ecchi spun like this.
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