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I Took My Eyes Off My Childhood Friend for Two Seconds...
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Parody
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22 pages
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Memory... corrupted? ♥
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10
1 year ago
The fundamental problem with this story is that it never establishes a tone to guide the reader's emotions. The major points of the story just fall flat because the character reactions and art don't show that those moments are important. The MC showed more emotion that the FMC he liked was flunking out of college than learning she has been run through by who knows how many men. It's not really clear what the MC felt at any point in the story.
It's really weird to see a story fail on tone because manga is generally excessive on tone. This is good artwork, but it's not conveying the emotion such a story deserves.
It's really weird to see a story fail on tone because manga is generally excessive on tone. This is good artwork, but it's not conveying the emotion such a story deserves.
Last Modified Fri May 3, 2024, 2:30 am
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gammenon
Story Junkie
1 year ago
Looks like Misogyny and doublestandards still reign supreme.
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Thepucon2020
Horny can be deep!
1 year ago
You are all mad to the girl for having all the hookups in that club.
Guys she went by total accident, she's had sex with other people by mistake! And even if she went back there in the end, she's not some basic NTR gal that throws everything away in the name of sex!
Seriously, she says the mc isn't as good at doing sex as the hookup guys, but she decides to be with him because she cares more about the relationship and real feelings she has with the MC than all of that. She places her heart in first place instead of her pussy's delight.
Also, i will be leaving you with this question: is it better to having a girl that stays with you only because she's only had you in your life and doesn't have anyone to compare with you, or a girl that had everyone, but STILL decides to be with you because she has found something in you that makes her stay?
Guys she went by total accident, she's had sex with other people by mistake! And even if she went back there in the end, she's not some basic NTR gal that throws everything away in the name of sex!
Seriously, she says the mc isn't as good at doing sex as the hookup guys, but she decides to be with him because she cares more about the relationship and real feelings she has with the MC than all of that. She places her heart in first place instead of her pussy's delight.
Also, i will be leaving you with this question: is it better to having a girl that stays with you only because she's only had you in your life and doesn't have anyone to compare with you, or a girl that had everyone, but STILL decides to be with you because she has found something in you that makes her stay?
Last Modified Tue May 7, 2024, 1:38 pm
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HoloOnMyDick
Wolf-girl husbando
1 year ago
Barring insane chemistry out the gate, sex with people you’ve known for a longer period of time is always better.
Until we meet again, He-man!
Until we meet again, He-man!
Last Modified Thu May 2, 2024, 11:40 pm
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1 year ago
I have a different complaint than everyone else: underage drinking. 6 months after graduating high school means you MIGHT be 19, and the legal age for drinking in Japan is 20.
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623
FAKKU QA
1 year ago
lol I actually thought that the first time I read it too. I suppose the alcohol was a plot device but I thought it was a little weird that the boy just went along with it no questions asked.
Last Modified Fri May 3, 2024, 12:39 am
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Stanri010
H-King
1 year ago
Admittedly, it wasn't 2 seconds. It was 6 months...
Last Modified Thu May 2, 2024, 7:55 pm
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1 year ago
I will always find it funny when y'all get mad at the girl for sleeping with other people when not dating the MC, keep it up this is entertaining
Last Modified Thu May 2, 2024, 5:31 pm
10
1 year ago
My issue is that the author didn't have the balls to commit making it incoherrent. I had to reread page 6-7 to make sure it wasn't the MC's fantasy or something. It also made tagging and classification misleading, the vanilla flag triggered a couple of people for sure.
Last Modified Thu May 2, 2024, 9:58 pm
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1 year ago
To be fair, I'd also be mad at the male MC if he'd been sleeping around with a bunch of women despite supposedly being in love with a girl. No double standards here. If you love someone, tell them and don't just go around banging a bunch of people without finding out whether the feeling is mutual. Otherwise, you must not have loved 'em very much.
Last Modified Thu May 2, 2024, 8:02 pm
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MHM-Dono
Person Of Culture
1 year ago
Once in a while, dem "two seconds" make a world of difference regarding whether osananajimis undergo a Relationship Upgrade.
And in this instance, ..... IT WAS JUST RIGHT!
And in this instance, ..... IT WAS JUST RIGHT!
Last Modified Thu May 2, 2024, 11:12 am
Edit: To clarify, I just feel a little blindsided here by the vanilla tag when the girl is literally saying how all the men she's been hooking up with ALL THE TIME for the past 6 months are so much better than the mc. What is this shit?
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