Summer NTRetreat

I respect the humor of Freedom Prophet greatly, so this was an instant buy. "It's humorous, so that should soften the NTR blow," I thought.

Good lord this dude cannot catch a break! I didn't expect to feel so sorry for the poor guy! I won't ruin the ending, but this dude doesn't quite go home completely defeated.

Still, imagine you're about to enjoy some sweet vanilla ice cream on the perfect day. The sun is shining, there's a cool breeze, and all the elements are aligned to enjoy your sweet, sweet vanilla, the purest of ice cream flavors. Then, all of a sudden, a gust of wind knocks your ice cream over. You try to salvage it by taking what hasn't touched the floor, but then you find the ants have already made their move. Feeling defeated, you dust yourself off and try to enjoy the cone, but then it turns out someone's accidentally stepped on it, crushing it into ruined pieces. THAT is what this story is like.

That being said, it's Freedom Prophet. All the art is solid and there are parts that get a genuine chuckle. I always get a kick of how Freedom Prophet draws the nerdy characters, with their funny looking lips and whatnot.

Decent story, progressive plot, builds to something. I just wish it had a couple more pages.

Normally the schlubby nerd is the odd man out, but this time its the nerds getting it on and the good-looking guy who is left high and dry. As usual, Freedom Prophet does the repeated defeat and loss well, while finding ways to keep it original.