artcellrox Posts

Copy-paste it onto a notepad.

Bass?! BAAASSSSSSS!!!!

I CHALLENGE YOU!

https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=72108

Beat me to it! DX

Mizuha Miyama from Magic Users Club

You never beat the original. End of discussion.

Oh hey, you're Naoto-s husbando.

... nope...

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1004793

Pros

The descriptions. My God, man. THE DESCRIPTIONS! I actually pictured the whole thing exactly while I was reading it, not later during my afterthought! I also felt that class that I definitely expected from the likes of you and Jerry. Grammar was top-notch, as usual, and the feelings definitely hit home. Sucks to be cheated on, let's face it. Also, it's interesting how, despite given themes like "summer" and "romance", you managed to take those two and still dish out something depressive, but powerful. Good job.

Cons

I'll be honest... I actually did a double take when I noticed the tenses. Took me a while to figure out that you were actually changing perspectives. Quite frankly, you did OK with it, but it was confusing for a moment. That's really the only con I can get out of this, though.

Final Thoughts

Seriously?! You thought my entry could have beaten THIS?! Z, you are on a class of your own with this entry. It's like... to do this justice, you'd need Morgan Freeman or Patrick Stewart to narrate it. Mine could easily be done by... well, me, I suppose, since that's the voice I was always hearing. >__>

But anyway, this was an excellent piece. Would definitely come back to it again.



Fun Facts

Due to Jerry always using that avatar, I pictured him as Joseph Gordon-Levitt in this. XD

Welcome to Fakku's forums. Don't post stupid, and you'll fit in famously.

Care to share anything about yourself?

Nagase First Time?

My ideal is a mix of forced and vanilla.

You just answered your own question. In my case, I read a couple of yaoi-trap doujins from time to time as well, but I don't even get aroused to them, let alone fap. It's just to kill time. IRL, I am still attracted to females, with the exception of some very effeminate transsexuals, like Bailey Jay. I call that being a Kinsey 1.

Anti-bug post

What do you mean, "theoretical"?

POV of whom, in this case? :|

Definitely garterbelts. Anything to accentuate dem legs and that ass.

Eh, it's fine. This was mainly put up for laughs anyway. I'd rather I get criticism on my writing style as it is now, because I'm sure you may have gathered from my entry, I'm not the same writer as I was back then.

I PMed it soon after I posted and found the song myself.

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