Cinia Pacifica Posts

Posting on a dedman's thread.

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terrific idea

yuri stuff

wat

Nah.

goodluckwiththat

Not until you get 999 pages here.

He didn't tell Waar to not ban you. He literally left the final say to Waar.

EDIT: lel ninja'd

Thought you'd stop paying attention to someone like that by now.

The word limit is a challenge. It doesn't mean that you should deduct what you shouldn't.

It means that you have to include every bit of necessary details while keeping the limit in mind. The author should try to be brief, but not so much that it ruins the story. He couldn't add details which would flesh out the incident more that the story features? Well, yeah, that's the weakness of this entry.

This is a pretty good example of an entry that is good yet far from perfection.

Either way; it was a good read.

How's that a problem?

If you kept wondering about the big picture which is left out of the entry for obvious reasons, he's pretty successful as the author.

Yeap, you probably forgot all about the quotation mark for a bit there. We're all lazy as hell when it comes to re-checking. What a pain? Right? I'm not being sarcastic here; I just know this feel.


Anyway, I don't know what in the name of flying fuck I just read. Too many names randomly popping up. I didn't think it was actually bad, just too random, and I had no idea what anything or everything in this was about... until I read 'mech'. Then I got the gist of it. You don't do that when you have a word limit waiting for you to challenge it.

I'm sorry, but I stopped reading somewhere mid-way, thought I'd comment regardless. I do believe all the criticism people provided will prove to be quite beneficial though.

Is it me or anyone hasn't pointed this little thing out?




Anyway, this was a good read. Glad that I took a few minutes off for this.

Also;



I didn't find it unnecessary at all. It adds more weight to the incident described in the story; more background details. Which is essential.

I felt that readers would want to know not just what the fuck is going on, but also why the fuck is it going on. He could have made something more simple than all the vampire stuff, but then this wouldn't be as unique a story it is.

Dreams about owning my estate.

Taimanin Asagi <333

Nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.

Exactly! <3

We'll see about that. Kinda unlikely that I'll read anything anytime soon (first exam on 10th derp). But I'll make some comments here and there I guess.

Been a while since he got on I think.

I doubt one character works though. It at least has to have two main female characters.

Oh god, the evil glomp-ish thing. Cute though.

I like this one here:



It was made by Katsu.