krakis Posts

Im back now, and I'm really happy that this is going so well. FreakyChan and BlackShogunFox, you guys are doing really well on the drawings. It's coming out, just like I imagined it. I find that the new layout is really working well, and it's looking great in page 7. I took SAM's advice (thanks a lot for it btw :)) and I wrote up some descriptions of the characters. Tell me what you think. I'm still working on the scripts and il be posting them by the end of the weekend, latest.
Guy:

Girl:
Best Friend:

Wow, those are some really great drawings!
Thanks for the encouragement again!
Btw i won't have regular access to a computer for the next week so i wont be on as much but il try my best to when I can

For the flashback, I didn't think of that, but it's a really great idea and I'm sure that like you said, the audience would like to see the explication in drawing.
Thanks for encouragement, and I will try my best to make it as hot as possible

If you wanna make it in color, that sounds like a great idea. Do whatever you can that you think will make it look nice.
Do you want me to "direct" the sexual positions?

That's pretty good. Keep it up :)

Thanks alot and it's possible because I haven't cleaned it up yet. I was just trying to make him relatable.



That sounds really harsh! Be sure to relax and not overdo it :)

I think its pretty good but maybe the girl should be walking in instead. Besides that, it's very good.



I really liked it. The only problem now, is that I can't wait to see the next part

I wouldn't mind doing it, since i would enjoy it, but since you are the artist, if it makes it easier for you to do it yourself, go ahead.

We could possibly do it as another one, but I would like to hear it just for fun also, because now im curious.



You nailed it, that's what I was thinking.

Thanks alot for the help :)

Small update for all of you!

here's the script I have so far, il fix it up later but this is so you have something to work with.


Page 1 Feel free to add names, but for now they’l be guy, girl and girl #2 Also, everything that is in capitals is about the setting and where the people are or doing.
GUY IS AT HIS LOCKER OPENING IT, TALKING TO HIMSELF IN HIS HEAD.
guy: You know what I don’t understand, why I can’t get a girlfriend. I just find it so stupid that girls never want a nice guy. I guess I should stop beating myself about it, because it †˜s not going to help.
Page 2: OPENS HIS LOCKER, AND SEES GIRL COMING UP. STILL THINKING IN HIS HEAD.
guy: oh it’s girl, she’s so beautiful, i really wish she could be my girlfriend instead of her stupid jerk of a boyfriend but I doubt that’s ever going to happen. Just stay cool and don’t say anything stupid
the next few pages: REALISES GIRL IS CRYING AND APPROACHES HER TO SEE WHAT’S WRONG.
guy: hey girl
girl: hey guy (SOBBING)
guy: what’s wrong, why are you crying
girl: my stupid jerk of a boyfriend just broke up with me for another stupid slut
guy: aww, that’s horrible, I can’t understand why anyone would break up with you.
girl: ya, and I even gave him everything
guy: what do you mean?
girl: I let him fuck me so many times, whenever he wanted. I even let him make tapes of me while we were having sex. I literally did all the kinky stuff he wanted.
guy: That’s horrible, I can’t believe that pig. GUY THINKING IN HIS HEAD: “Lucky bastard”
girl: I know, but I lied to you. The real reason he broke up with me, was because I didn’t want to have sex at school with him and his friends.
guy: I seriously can’t believe that guy! I you were my girlfriend, I would treat you like a princess and would never make you do something like that
girl: your so sweet, but im sure you don’t mean that, and think that im just some slut now.
guy: No, no, not at all. IN HIS HEAD: “Maybe a little”. NO LONGER IN HIS HEAD:In fact, I never told you this, but I’ve always had a crush on you, because of how beautiful and perfect you are.
girl: your so amazing, why aren’t there more nice guys like you around?
guy: well, its because we get tired of getting rejected and the jerks getting the girls
girl: where can I find a good guy like you
guy: well, why don’t you look in front of you
girl: you know, your right, and I’m going to reward you for it LEANS IN TO KISS HIM
guy: I don’t want to take advantage of you though
girl: you’re not, I just want to give you what you deserve STARTS UNBUTTONING HER SHIRT.
guy: I don’t feel right about this though. AS HE’S SAYING THIS, HE GET’S A BONER FROM SEEING HER UNBUTTON HER SHIRT.
girl: that’s not what your dick is telling me. it looks quite happy. GRABS IT
guy: IN HIS HEAD: “What the hell, why not” Ok, you know what, I think I will take the reward. But let’s do it in the staircase, so no one sees us.
girl: Great, Il show you a time you’ll never forget.

That's perfect!

Agreed! Btw, are the nipples on your avatar innies or outies?

Honestly, I was just thinking what a great drawing that was even before i read your comment. I think it would fit very well with the theme, especially since i like oppai, like you can probably tell from my avatar.

Il try to get some of it done for monday and post it here, so that you have something to work with. This will come out great! Good luck with your work, sounds really harsh

Sounds great and I was thinking to do exactly that, and it's no problem since I love to write. Then @rottenpeanuts will do the typesetting. What do you think of my idea, do you want to do it?

I can't speak for freakychan, but I would love to have your help, so that we can make it look as good as it can be. As for the length, il make the text and dialogue based on how much freakychan wants to draw.
Thanks, I thought so too.
I think you're right about that too.



Thanks, il keep that in mind :)

How about this: a guy is at his locker getting his stuff and all of a sudden, a girl comes to her's but she is sobbing, so the guy tries to console her. Her boyfriend just broke up with her, she's feeling vulnerable and seeing how nice the guy is being to her, she decides to reward him. At first, the guy is resistant and doesn't want to take advantage of her, but eventually goes with it. As they're doing it, the girl's best friend finds her in the middle of it after looking for her. The girl asks her best friend to join in so it could help her forget her troubles. Being such a good friend, she decides to do it and help out. They do it in the school staircase,finish drenched in cum and sweat and in a great mood. As an extra, we could maybe add them almost getting caught or something like that
Any opinions or criticism are welcome

I would love to help as I love to write and have always wanted to do this, but can't draw at all. I had a great idea the other day but I let go of it since I remembered I couldn't draw. I have lots of free time so I should be able to contribute alot. Just give me a little to remember it
btw, do you want it to be vanilla?

Small update: