luckydog001 Posts
Cat-ness wrote...
Don't know about the last point both did end with established relationships of some form.
Another key point in both stories is the protagonist being unable to cum. In Tokoharu the story end on a note that the manager is the only one that can make him cum. In a Straight Line in chapter 6 the protagonist also is unable to cum until the main female confesses her feelings for him.
I completely agree with you that both stories ended with what the MC's role is with the girls completely defined. To me it's once again about the minuscule details:
- In Tokoharu he has the childhood friend, the Kouhai who loves him, the Tsundere, the Onee-chan, the one who is a closet pervert, and the one who is pure, and all those girls have the reservation schedule, but the manager his only love gets him whenever, no reservation needed. I don't remember him and her saying that they want to be "exclusive", but it's been a while since I read it.
- in Straight Line the way I saw it Kanade and he clearly announce that they will go out, and even though the other girls still wanna get it in, they respect the relationship.
I forgot about the lack of being able to ejaculate similarity, makes me wonder if that is something Gunma likes to put in all the stories. I feel like I heard someone say there are 2 other books out there.
It is still there just go into your settings then go to your user preferences and switch "show controversial content", from "No", to "Yes".
That particular story has a forced tag that is why it falls under "controversial content".
That particular story has a forced tag that is why it falls under "controversial content".
meme50superfan wrote...
Dear god, this book has so much text. Also, does any one else feel that all Gunma works follow a similar plot structure? A virgin guy gets surrounded by girls, but the one he wants does't want to fall in love with him. Then he goes on a sex rampage and eventually gets the girl, which ends up culminating in an orgy. I enjoyed the book, but I think it could have used a little different of a structure for the sake of variety.Definitely agree with you on the heavy text, personally I found that quite pleasant, I would always prefer a lead up to action rather then just being tossed into it.
I have only read Tokoharu Apartments and Straight Line from Gunma and I agree that on the surface that definitely is the basic plot. I feel that it is the minuscule details that make or break Gunma's stories:
- In Tokoharu the girl that the MC wanted, wanted him back but she had no choice but to be "everyone's girl" for the sake of the apartments VS. in Straight Line the girl the MC wanted had a bad first impression of him and later fell to his "charms" before realizing she wanted him.
- In Tokoharu he was seduced and "forced", into intercourse by girls who have always had feelings for him VS. in Straight Line they mostly just wanted his package, and didn't care about any sort of relationship...just the package.
- Both did end in an orgy, however in Tokoharu, he never really got the girl in my opinion, he stayed in the apartments as the resident "stress reliever", and even though he ended with the harem that don't mean he got the girl VS. in Straight Line he did get the girl, yes there is still a Harem but he is exclusively going out with the girl...he just isn't exclusively sleeping with her.
First: Thank You
Second: I am hoping that since this is part of a series the first two books are hopefully still on the table?
Second: I am hoping that since this is part of a series the first two books are hopefully still on the table?
I'm really jazzed about this book, but I am kinda Hentai burned out so imma take a break till the pre-orders come out for this book, then catch up on all the Sub updates. Going by the 3 weeks guideline I take it the pre-order should start Thursday April 28, 2016.
I really enjoyed this book, and that was mostly due to the fact that it was one straight storyline from beginning to end just like Hanafuda. I became more invested in the story and the characters with every single chapter (even though in my head I kept thinking this is a prequel to the residents of Tokoharu Apartments, I mean in Tokoharu they were in College here they are in high school...but I digress).
It was fairly difficult for me to pick out one particular chapter to call my "favorite", since it was all revolved around the Seikodo tournament arch, and I was counting it all as one giant story rather then individual chapters. The chapter that left the biggest impression on me was Chapter 2. That mostly lies in the fact that in this chapter Kiyosato refused to let Hotaka be paired up with anyone else (even though he had an orgy), and after he had gallantly induced Asama into an ahegao blackout he still went straight up to Hotaka to finish inside her.
Aside from that chapter the Bonus short chapters were icing on the cake, and was a very nice surprise. The book itself had a lot of comedy scattered throughout and I did find myself literally laughing out loud.
Finally on a last note I just wanted to say best girl is Kiryuu Azumi Sensei.
It was fairly difficult for me to pick out one particular chapter to call my "favorite", since it was all revolved around the Seikodo tournament arch, and I was counting it all as one giant story rather then individual chapters. The chapter that left the biggest impression on me was Chapter 2. That mostly lies in the fact that in this chapter Kiyosato refused to let Hotaka be paired up with anyone else (even though he had an orgy), and after he had gallantly induced Asama into an ahegao blackout he still went straight up to Hotaka to finish inside her.
Aside from that chapter the Bonus short chapters were icing on the cake, and was a very nice surprise. The book itself had a lot of comedy scattered throughout and I did find myself literally laughing out loud.
Finally on a last note I just wanted to say best girl is Kiryuu Azumi Sensei.
GODsHandOnEarth wrote...
There is!
It's called "Kakushi Dere" but as it seems it's not a wani book so the chances that we'll get this book are quite low at the moment (although you find it completely scanlated by googleing the name, but come on, that's not the quality we are aiming for...).
Not that this would stop me from complaining about it not being already released by fakku...
Thanks guess I will just play the wait and see game and hope they pick it up in a few years.
GODsHandOnEarth wrote...
All in all I would say the book is a must have and if I had to point out something bad about book or author, it would be that we only have this one book from him ( @jacob we need the other one, please make it happen)
Their is a second book? Sorry but do you happen to have a link to that book.
iolita wrote...
I keep seeing the pettanko tag for this book, the only problem is I never see it in the chapter example pictures D: is their truly pettanko in this book? If so I will gladly purchase, thankyou!The first chapter definitely has 1 pettanko girl however in the first chapter she literally appears in 3 frames.
The 2nd chapter the same girl is sort of the main girl for most of it but she never actually takes her shirt off and I want to avoid spoilers so let's just say she doesn't remain the main girl throughout the whole 2nd chapter.
3rd chapter is with a new pettanko girl but just like the 2nd chapter shirt never comes off. (Not sure if you are looking specifically for that just including all the info available)
4th chapter has 2 pages of pettanko same girl as chapter 3 again shirt always on (or swimsuit whatever)
5th chapter full pettanko confirmed
6th chapter is the same description I gave for chapters 2 and 3 and 4.
Extra chapter: Fair amount of pettanko all with shitprts on.
Also all the pettanko girls in this book look like full grown women, in my opinion it is very unique cause with all the subscription chapters available on FAKKU the pettanko characters mostly seem like teenagers or younger. However with this book they look like fully grown women with flat chests. However that is just my opinion, nothing wrong with that, just something I noticed.
Likhos01 wrote...
luckydog001 wrote...
Awesome pickups I hope I can go to a con FAKKU is at one day. I just wanted to ask is that a Hanafuda poster next to the henreader deck or is it an actual physical book?
I don't think it's the book.
The book is supposed to be artbook sized, this one in the picture is too small.
I thought so too, but I wanted to verify. Even if it's just a poster I would wanna have it. Especially at that size.
Brittany wrote...
GODsHandOnEarth wrote...
3D cover. You know, like those mousepads with the boobs. You know you want that...
Mike and I cried enough trying to get the effects on the Shoujo Material cover working right for the printer. That idea alone makes me weep in the thought of print prepping that.
May I just say I just got Shoujo Material today, and that you and Mike did an over the top amazing job on the effects. This is without a doubt the highest quality book I have ever purchased, and it really classes up my manga shelf.
Awesome pickups I hope I can go to a con FAKKU is at one day.
I just wanted to ask is that a Hanafuda poster next to the henreader deck or is it an actual physical book?
I just wanted to ask is that a Hanafuda poster next to the henreader deck or is it an actual physical book?
animefreak_usa wrote...
luckydog001 wrote...
I was literally inside an Appl.... I skip the next line on this word.
Sorry Animefreak i will think about buying Windows next time...maybe
I was literally inside an Apple Store and when the employee helping me went to grab my order i just wanted to check FAAKU for sub updates, and i see this book go up for pre-order, I then proceeded to sign in added to cart and checked out all while hoping she doesn't check what i am doing on my phone, while she was ringing me up.
Now that Pandemonium has been fully uploaded I did what I always do after a new book is finished. I go back and read it once again from beginning to end, and I pick it apart to find my favorite chapter and add it to my Favorite Book Chapters Collection. While going through it again it was really hard to pick a top spot for me, and overall I would definitely rank this in my top 5 FAKKU books released so far. Starting off with some much needed monster girl love, and going forward into heavy vanilla territory, with just the right amount of cheating to keep the spice alive really kept the story from being repetitive. Additionally for me personally the abundant pettanko material was one of the greatest treats ever.
Lastly the chapter that stood out the most to me was Called Over, and I wanna give a huge nod to Vacation . When I first read "Vacation", I pretty much already decided this would be my top chapter when I first read it, and then I read "Called Over", and something about it really stuck to me. The fact that Sae (heroine), countinued to spiral into a deep chasm filled with lust, and nothing else. That she knew she was acting like putty in his hands, but she still went through it all to quench her own carnal desires. Finally when she admitted to herself that she was the one who was "no good", I was sold on Sae and was happy to call this my favorite chapter.
Lastly the chapter that stood out the most to me was Called Over, and I wanna give a huge nod to Vacation . When I first read "Vacation", I pretty much already decided this would be my top chapter when I first read it, and then I read "Called Over", and something about it really stuck to me. The fact that Sae (heroine), countinued to spiral into a deep chasm filled with lust, and nothing else. That she knew she was acting like putty in his hands, but she still went through it all to quench her own carnal desires. Finally when she admitted to herself that she was the one who was "no good", I was sold on Sae and was happy to call this my favorite chapter.
meme50superfan wrote...
Sounds about right, but Jacob said in another thread that there will now be two books per month.You are right, but with the current amount of announced titles we would be just shy of getting 2 full releases A month until they announce new titles at AX 2016, and that is if they decided to release NTR2 in the following 3 months, doubtful to say the least (and I say that hoping I am wrong). However depending on the number of books they announce at AX2016 starting in August going forward I think that would solidify a more abundant release schedule, allowing us to get 2 full releases a month. Then aside from the new title announcements they have planned and any other new surprises I really want to hear an update about the Kickstarter.
meme50superfan wrote...
So is "Lets do it" the second book for April, or will that be "Afterschool Vanilla" ? Can someone confirm?Only Gunma's will be dropping in April. If I have to guess at a release schedule it would be the following:
April: It's a straight line Once you Fall in Love.
May: Key's After School Vanilla
June: Saitom's Lets do it
July: in another post Jacob had said that he believes Gujira's A Bitch a Gal and a Whatnot will drop around or even during AX 2016.
I am basing this list on the fact that no new books will be announced for the next two months. However in the end it's all just a guess on my part.
Additionally:I am guessing NTR2 will drop on February 30