WHOOOOOSSSSSHHHHH!
Now we wait with varying degrees of patience to find out what happens next (DUN-DUN-DUNNN).
Last Modified Fri May 30, 2025, 12:44 am
Unless there's a sequel or continuation where FMC gets her act together, the last thing I'll say before moving on is: "Better you than me, MC."
Last Modified Thu May 29, 2025, 2:58 pm
Seriously, though; I wish infinite patience and stamina unto MC (Tomo-kun) as he embarks on protecting FMC (Ushio-chan), first from herself, and then from the world.
He's Gonna Need It.
Last Modified Thu May 29, 2025, 12:51 am
Insert drum rimshot here.
..... I'll just leave this here on my way out.
Last Modified Wed May 28, 2025, 11:38 am
This time around, that's all that needs to be said.
Last Modified Tue May 27, 2025, 11:25 pm
Now Mai-san is free and hooked up with a caring younger lover (clearly Yamashita-kun proved himself indisputably to be a Man Of Culture for being attracted to such a Sexy Onee-san).
Final Conclusion: "Perfectly Balanced, As All Things Should Be."
Last Modified Tue May 27, 2025, 11:11 am
In The End, There Can Be Only One Conclusion: "Well Isn't That Cute? ..... BUT IT'S RIGHT!"
Last Modified Mon May 26, 2025, 11:40 pm
But In The End, that hurdle seems to have been overcome.
NOICE one, Tianoblue-sensei!
Last Modified Mon May 26, 2025, 7:09 pm
CAN U DIG IT, SUCKA?
Last Modified Mon May 26, 2025, 2:10 pm
IT WAS "SUPER-EFFECTIVE!"
Last Modified Sun May 25, 2025, 7:42 pm
"DAAAYYYUUMMM!!!"
Last Modified Sun May 25, 2025, 7:15 pm
It's still a pleasant enough Debut Work, so I'll look to see what this artist delivers in the future.
Last Modified Sun May 25, 2025, 11:09 am
Multi-person wingman squad? Could be, could be.
Whatever the particulars were, it lead to a Most Excellent Vanilla-Flavored consumation of a new relationship .....
"AND IT WAS GLORIOUS!"
Last Modified Sat May 24, 2025, 11:30 pm
IMHO, it smells like a one-way trip to "Death By Snu-Snu"!
EDIT: Even more disturbing is the possibility that the one who reaches the chest thinks they have won the quest and are now enjoying a life of riches, power, pleasure, etc., when in actuality, ..... They Are Already Dead.
"DAAAAAYYYYYUUUUUMMMMM!!!!!"
Last Modified Sat May 24, 2025, 9:43 pm
As for their debut work here, I say:
(Insert sound of toilet flushing, such as was once made popular by a certain 1990s comedy TV series featuring a shoe salesman as the MC)
Say-No-More.
Last Modified Sat May 24, 2025, 12:17 pm
"I had a dream, But it turned to dust
What I thought was love That must have been lust"
From my p.o.v., there's no love (or at least now right now) ..... it's pure teenage lust on overdrive.
But they both like it that way, so ..... I'LL ALLOW IT!
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Perhaps later, I'll add more to this comment.
Last Modified Fri May 23, 2025, 1:23 am
As for this story, a follow-up chapter might be needed to (so-to-say) "seal the deal" for these siblings.
Go For It, Touma-senseu
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