Escalation of the scenario essentially said: "Warp Factor 8 (or something like it)!"

WHOOOOOSSSSSHHHHH!

Now we wait with varying degrees of patience to find out what happens next (DUN-DUN-DUNNN).

Last Modified Fri May 30, 2025, 12:44 am

"Vanilla" Tag?, ..... "AW HELL, NO!"

Unless there's a sequel or continuation where FMC gets her act together, the last thing I'll say before moving on is: "Better you than me, MC."

Last Modified Thu May 29, 2025, 2:58 pm

"The story you have either just read, or are about to read, is true ... the names have been changed to protect the innocent."

Seriously, though; I wish infinite patience and stamina unto MC (Tomo-kun) as he embarks on protecting FMC (Ushio-chan), first from herself, and then from the world.

He's Gonna Need It.

Last Modified Thu May 29, 2025, 12:51 am

6 months ago
Considering this artist's usual M.O. (relative to what has been posted here to date), the single word I can use to describe this work is ..... SCENT-sational.

Insert drum rimshot here.

..... I'll just leave this here on my way out.

Last Modified Wed May 28, 2025, 11:38 am

Sexy Onee-san Osananajimi F.T.W.!

This time around, that's all that needs to be said.

Last Modified Tue May 27, 2025, 11:25 pm

7 months ago
Just based on story content, I have virtually no sympathy or empathy for Mai-san's ex-husband, so I'll say no more about him (@?$%^! idiot).

Now Mai-san is free and hooked up with a caring younger lover (clearly Yamashita-kun proved himself indisputably to be a Man Of Culture for being attracted to such a Sexy Onee-san).

Final Conclusion: "Perfectly Balanced, As All Things Should Be."

Last Modified Tue May 27, 2025, 11:11 am

7 months ago
Both the film crew (a.k.a. Wingman Squad) and the discerning reader could SMELLLLLLL, what the lovey-dovey couple (Hirano and Saitou) Was Cookin'. And the (relatively-speaking) slow burn gradually increased in temperature until Page 8 ... Ignition Point!

In The End, There Can Be Only One Conclusion: "Well Isn't That Cute? ..... BUT IT'S RIGHT!"

Last Modified Mon May 26, 2025, 11:40 pm

7 months ago
All Right I Call It: FMC (Yoshigaki-senpai) is only slightly older than MC (Manabe). It still maķes for an ultra-cute story featuring a Sexy Onee-san who has trouble communicating clearly.

But In The End, that hurdle seems to have been overcome.

NOICE one, Tianoblue-sensei!

Last Modified Mon May 26, 2025, 7:09 pm

7 months ago
Not quite a "Flawless" Victory, there, but ..... a "WIN" is a "WIN"!

CAN U DIG IT, SUCKA?

Last Modified Mon May 26, 2025, 2:10 pm

Kouhai FMC engaged Entrapment Strategy on Senpai .....

IT WAS "SUPER-EFFECTIVE!"

Last Modified Sun May 25, 2025, 7:42 pm

7 months ago
This Delightful, Delicious and Delectable Display of Young Adults At Play, was brought to you, courtesy of the letter "D" .... which also happens to be the first letter in the word:

"DAAAYYYUUMMM!!!"

Last Modified Sun May 25, 2025, 7:15 pm

7 months ago
I'm only basically aware that some readers do go for the "Mommy" fetish, and it's not my place to judge that. Personally, I'd have preferred MC selecting a Big Sister/Onee-san package (assuming it was also available). And as might have been expected, he managed to activate the "Ara-Ara" Super Upgrade, with somewhat predictable results.

It's still a pleasant enough Debut Work, so I'll look to see what this artist delivers in the future.

Last Modified Sun May 25, 2025, 11:09 am

Curious (or perhaps not so) that as all of the others took their leave of Kibayashi's apartment, no-one noticed (or seemed not to) that Satake wasn't with them.

Multi-person wingman squad? Could be, could be.

Whatever the particulars were, it lead to a Most Excellent Vanilla-Flavored consumation of a new relationship .....

"AND IT WAS GLORIOUS!"

Last Modified Sat May 24, 2025, 11:30 pm

IF YOU SMELLLLLLLLL, ..... What The Artist ... Is ... Cookin'?

IMHO, it smells like a one-way trip to "Death By Snu-Snu"!

EDIT: Even more disturbing is the possibility that the one who reaches the chest thinks they have won the quest and are now enjoying a life of riches, power, pleasure, etc., when in actuality, ..... They Are Already Dead.

"DAAAAAYYYYYUUUUUMMMMM!!!!!"

Last Modified Sat May 24, 2025, 9:43 pm

Personally, I may try this artist out again if another work one day gets posted.

As for their debut work here, I say:

(Insert sound of toilet flushing, such as was once made popular by a certain 1990s comedy TV series featuring a shoe salesman as the MC)

Say-No-More.

Last Modified Sat May 24, 2025, 12:17 pm

7 months ago
I personally quote the song lyrics (some might also recognize them):

"I had a dream, But it turned to dust
What I thought was love That must have been lust"


From my p.o.v., there's no love (or at least now right now) ..... it's pure teenage lust on overdrive.

But they both like it that way, so ..... I'LL ALLOW IT!

Last Modified Fri May 23, 2025, 11:08 pm

Verily I say unto thee: "It's GOOD To Be The KING!"

Last Modified Thu Oct 2, 2025, 7:50 pm

Another Sexy Onee-san Succubus story? APPROVED with the (proverbial) force of a thousand suns!

Last Modified Fri May 23, 2025, 11:17 am

7 months ago
"Dayum, son ... that was some Deep Shit."

Perhaps later, I'll add more to this comment.

Last Modified Fri May 23, 2025, 1:23 am

7 months ago
Looks to me like Touma-sensei has definitely joined that group of artists who could be called: "Gods Of Sexy Onee-sans".

As for this story, a follow-up chapter might be needed to (so-to-say) "seal the deal" for these siblings.

Go For It, Touma-senseu

Last Modified Thu May 22, 2025, 7:19 pm

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