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mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
i'd sooner dedicate my life to a dorodere than a tsundere. especially one as wonderful as who i'm thinking of.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
dorodere ftw.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
How true. Yet I still feel like testing it. Dammit, me.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
should come to skype
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Who here has some usable skill in C++? I need some nudges to loop this thing.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Chapter 2.
'...[the] armor...' I think. And 'inn'.
Cyinin Merc. Intended? Seems weird since the name is Cytinin.
Ok, so I like this chapter. Vividly written as expected from you, and there's also a nice suspense. Like how Ratana got the task to murder the hell out of the bandits, one of which claimed that her father was their leader. Either he was part of a group of traitors or else, I'll see in later parts.
Ryxor turned her aside as gently as he was capable of while wearing armor and pumped with adrenaline. Ignoring the people gaping at him, he charged out of the in.
'...[the] armor...' I think. And 'inn'.
“I am called Ratana Cytinin. My father is Vincent Cytinin, the leader of the Cyinin Mercenaries.”
Cyinin Merc. Intended? Seems weird since the name is Cytinin.
Ok, so I like this chapter. Vividly written as expected from you, and there's also a nice suspense. Like how Ratana got the task to murder the hell out of the bandits, one of which claimed that her father was their leader. Either he was part of a group of traitors or else, I'll see in later parts.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
LUCIA, GIMME FULL PIC.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Do share what you learn.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Ramza is horribly broken near the end. With Mettle to boost all the time, and permanent Haste and and Protect from equipping photon cannon Excalibur and Save the Queen, he really had too much advantages going for him.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Playing it for another 40 hours to grind and arrive at that point again doesn't sound very appealing since I don't keep the skills/equips but yeah, it was a great experience. Excellent story.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
So, I finished FFT. I wished I had made a separate save but I didn't so I can't play the extra dungeon (dammit) but it was a great game. Glad I bought it.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
These vulgar people.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
lovely avatar again. want.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Lizlet L. Chelsie wrote...
What's so worrisome? :cThat you're piling dislikes on me!
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Uh oh. Now that's worrisome.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
More chapter 1.
I think this sentence is weird. Could be just me, but it seemed like you forced what should be two sentence, separated by a comma or 'and' into one.
You mean reins?
Period missing.
...what.
To.
Okay, so I like this chapter. There wasn't much detail other than introduction of some characters and the relationships between them, but it was a nice read nonetheless. Very well written and ample descriptions. The curiosity stirred by the strange assignment makes me look forward to reading more.
And no, I didn't try to proofread it. I just mentioned mistakes I happened to notice lol.
The trip from the palace to his manor in the city was short one made all the shorter on horseback.
I think this sentence is weird. Could be just me, but it seemed like you forced what should be two sentence, separated by a comma or 'and' into one.
Scarcely an hour had passed by the time he was handing the reigns in at his own private stable.
You mean reins?
“Yes, my lord?” The reply came shortly
Period missing.
“That won’t be necessarily.”
...what.
She never spoke up unless she had too
To.
Okay, so I like this chapter. There wasn't much detail other than introduction of some characters and the relationships between them, but it was a nice read nonetheless. Very well written and ample descriptions. The curiosity stirred by the strange assignment makes me look forward to reading more.
And no, I didn't try to proofread it. I just mentioned mistakes I happened to notice lol.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
You're a fan of Tilia, so congrats.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Lizlet L. Chelsie wrote...
@MibYou must know there's this line between adorable and annoying, and I just crossed to the latter.
There is, of course, and as I said earlier I'd love to find out on which side your joke attempt would fall~
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Lizlet L. Chelsie wrote...
Impossible...I'm never good at cheering anyone up... If anything, I made a total mess yesterday and made someone pissed with my lame somekind-of-jokes when they wanted to be cheered up....
Dammit, I know I wouldn't mind the risk of getting pissed if only to find out if this is as adorable as I think it is.
mibuchiha
Fakku Elder
Nothing, of course. But words born out of thoughts are fun.