I'm interested to see the third chapter and just essentially show where they are. Mostly want to see how broken she has become and how my boy has moved on. That would probably be the final straw that crumbles her mind.
First chapter kinda explains the scenario, but honestly the little summary on pg 2 does the job just as well. I'm serious, the first chapter is just her getting fucked by the rich dude and talking to her boyfriend on the phone.
Me: "A dream worth achieving"
Shia Labeouf: "Don't let your dreams be dreams!"
Me: "I think this needs a Vanilla tag"
Fakku: "Maybe later"
Shia Labeouf: "Just Do It!"
Wait...are you going to release individual chapters of a tank for purchase!?! If not, you should. Buy the whole redone tank in Fakku Books for one amount or buy separate chapters of the tank for a smaller amount.