Tsujoi Posts

Before I say anything, let me just remind you two that you are both among the most awesome people ever.

I don't think there's too much need to worry about people being idiots and changing information for fun. For one thing, we will only be allowing people with a certain amount of reputation (perhaps 5) to change the information. Furthermore, if anyone thinks they can try and be smart and mess up the info for fun, the banhammer will fall no matter the excuse.

So, I think the relative difficulty of getting a certain amount of rep, combined with the fact that you could be banned from the site for being an idiot, should be enough to ensure this system is not taken advantage of.

Not bad at all. The progression of events felt very natural, and I really liked how you handled their reunion. The only thing I would have to say is that the change in viewpoints (when you change from the man's narrative to the woman's narrative and back) felt rather awkward.

Decent, although a couple of basic writing errors (spelling, grammar) are present.

I'm not a great fan of prose about the military (never liked Tom Clancy's Rainbow Six series despite a few of my friends going nuts over them), so my criticism is perhaps unfair, but I feel it's missing some momentum. At the moment, it reads like a bunch of discontinuous events strung together. I understand you're perhaps trying to capture the feeling of rushed time when under attack or something, but it doesn't capture the reader.

I hope these comments help; I'm not trying to discourage you in any way, but trying to provide some pointers as to how you might want to improve your writing.

And yes, I noticed what you did with the names. Is there some underlying biblical reference in the story?

I doubt many of you noticed, but I had one hell of a event-heavy week (and still have lots to go) and thus was away for a bit. This past week has left me extremely deprived of sleep, and honestly, when you've been rehearsing on stage for 11 hours every day along with a disrupted meal cycle, things suck. But all is worth it on show nights, and we totally blew the roof on opening night. In other words, I'm enjoying the heck out of myself.

I'm still as busy as blue balls right now, but I'll spare a bit of time to get a new [color=darkred]FAKKU[/color] release out to you guys.

Anyway, here we go! This is the Kenichi doujin that I put a sneak preview up for months ago. For our twentieth release, FAKKU-Subs presents: Miumiu!



This doujin took so long to do. It's not that it was difficult to do or anything, but we got held up at various stages, redid entire stages, people busy, etc. Which is why it's a big relief for the team that this one is finally over and done with. We may or may not release a Spanish and/or German version in the future, depending on how time and resources go.

Again, the usual: leave your appreciation. The more awesome we feel, the more motivated we become, and the quicker we release things. And trust me, you'll want that; I'd say that among the doujins we're working on right now, one of them is among the best I've ever seen.

Thanks go to:
Ershin, f0dd3r, Nekojin, Nikon, and Hibia (for the German version which may or may not be released).

You can download and discuss the release here.

Normally I'd throw up a number of other stuff too, but call time is in an hour, and I need to get some studying done. Maybe later.

I remember reading the first part of this a while ago.

It's so GOOD.

OK. Reading what Nikon wrote in the front page pissed me off, and now you've just proven to me that some of you out there are indisputably stupid.

Do you (in the plural sense) think we, as a scanlation team ourselves, don't know how much effort and time it takes to do a scanlation? We know, and therefore, unless we were the biggest fags on the internet, we won't do something that amounts to stealing. And, before someone tries to be a smartass, we are not the biggest fags on the internet.

But let's look at the issue in a different way. What about our releases? I don't mind if you rename our releases and rehost it or something, but I've already lost count on how many of our earlier releases had been reposted with the credits page removed, and someone even went as far as to remove the watermarks in one of our releases. And before you attack us on this issue, it is precisely because of you people out there that we watermark our releases. Without the credits page, how else could we leave our mark? I have no idea what's happening with the newer releases (I'm making it a point to stay away from the land of trolls that is 4chan, and rarely visit other English hentai sites), but I doubt things have improved.

All the [FAKKU] means is that you downloaded it from FAKKU. Nothing more, nothing less. It's just like other hentai sites tagging on their site name or url at the end of their filenames. If it's really that hard for you to wrap your head around it, then too bad. This format will not change.

The H-scenes in FHA are to DIE for.

- Sex with Saber in the bathroom.
- Sex with Rin in her PJs (is she not the greatest 2D babe ever?)
- Sex with Sakura in her room (which isn't dark and gloomy for once).
- Threesome with Rider and Sakura, with periodic flashbacks to the Sakura H-scenes in FSN.
- Sex with Caren, although this one was kinda creepy.

FHA is basically a kind of spiritual sequel to FSN; the plotline isn't really too interesting, but what makes this game worth playing is it's full of great comedy scenes of life with all those Fate girls (Saber, Dark Saber, Rin, Sakura, Rider, Caster, Ilya, Taiga, and to a lesser extent, Bazett and Caren). But in all honesty, if you don't play it, you're not really missing out on too much. FSN, on the other hand, is a MUST play.

Now, you'll have to admit uploading 5GB+ worth of data is no fun, not to mention distribution of games like this is illegal. I'll point you to Tokyotosho to find a torrent, and good luck on finding seeders.

FAKKU Admin - Jacob, Nikon, and me. We run the site. And no, we're not interested in any more admins right now.
FAKKU Scanlator/Subber - Members of the sub/scan team. The highest non-admin rank.
FAKKU Uploader - Members who have made significant contributions to the FAKKU community over a period of time. Admins decide on who to give this rank to.
FAKKU Elite - Members who have 250 posts or more.

I'm thinking of adding some more ranks, such as a scaled rep-point ranking system and defining ranks such as FAKKU Artist and FAKKU Writer etc., but still very unsure about this atm.

I was actually quite surprised when I first saw the topic, but after watching it, I realized something.

If you think about it, all anime OP sequences are timed to their respective OP music anyway, so of course it has to follow the same sequence of Opening-Verse-Chorus with sets of 8 measures per section that is typical of Asian Pop music. So we have:

Opening (8 bars)
Verse 1 (16 bars)
Lead into Chorus (8 bars)
Chorus (16 bars)
Ending (8 bars)

So really, all the guy did was change the frame rate of the video to match the music. The reason everything seemed to fit perfectly is because the graphics are timed to change only when it reaches a new measure.

Oh god. I think I just came. Inside.

True. In fact, when I had my first relationship and experience at age 14, I was quite the loser. *shudders*

However, if the protagonist is able to act this way despite his age, it tells us a few things about him:

1) He is extremely frustrated with his relationship with the girl. As is stated, he has a massive crush on her, but she acts like he doesn't exist.
2) This rape was more about the protagonist trying to force himself into her life; he wanted so much to be noticed by her that he even misinterpreted her actions as acts of seduction. It was also about dominance; again, to prove to the girl he actually exists.
3) The fact that he swore using language that better fitted an adult also suggests that he is a very intelligent boy, which he is.

With Chapter One, the story will jump forward about three years ahead, when the characters are around 17 years old, the final year of secondary school/high school.

Oh wow. That was a good read.

Indeed this really speaks out to the damage we as human beings are doing to this planet. Nature is trying to wipe us out too in a sense, through those earthquakes, tsunamis, and hurricanes. Of course, these natural disasters won't really have too much of an effect if we hadn't gone around building cities, multiplying uncontrollably, and taking control over all the other living things in this world, all in the name of those "bits of paper and metal".

I will be saving a copy of this on my HD.

Oh, you little tease, you. XD

I'm looking forward to more! It is a little short though isn't it.

Alright, here's the rest of the prologue. I still need to proofread it, but I hope it meets expectations.

*Prose removed*

I hope the hair is shoulder length. XD

That being said, it's AWESOME you'll be drawing art of my characters! Here's a few pointers for you.

She's supposed to have a moe look. Later in the story, there will be another girl that comes in, and that girl needs to be extremely beautiful. In other words, female lead is cute, and latter female is beautiful.

This prologue is set when they're not very old at all, so be careful about that. The main part of this story will take place at the last years of secondary school life (years 7-13), so the age of the characters in the prologue is around 13-14.

Please PM or email me if you want to draw the other characters, so I can describe them to you before you do it. XD