Breqaya's Art
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Hi my names Breqaya and I've been just kinda lurking here. I decided since there are a few other artists here posting their works I might as well also. I will post here whenever I finish a pieces or feel like posting something to show progress along with getting a few critiques. Anyways enjoy and Thanks in advance for your time.
http://121642.deviantart.com/
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http://121642.deviantart.com/
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Thanks guys. It's much appreciated and hopefully I'll have more stuff to post soon. Also if you guys notice something that is off with my pics please tell me, it's nice to get critiques.
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Just a WIP I've been working on so far. The characters in this are mine and my gfs OCs. I still need to add 3 more characters. Hopefully I will be able to post the finished line art soon as well as the colored version.
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good stuff good stuff... but sir try and lay off the anime and do more like the nude girl. also if you have a DA with old work then link it up so we can all see your works.
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KanuUnchou wrote...
good stuff good stuff... but sir try and lay off the anime and do more like the nude girl. also if you have a DA with old work then link it up so we can all see your works.Thanks and yeah I know what you mean with the laying off of anime stuff. It's just kind of hard when that's the style you're use to for so long. Anyways thanks once again and I've add the link to my DA on my original post.
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true true but anime is kinda simple unless you add a bit of realism to it and to not just cell shade it but instead using many colors at it so anyways good stuff and this one is still my fav from your gallery XD http://121642.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2gf6gi
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Good lord. Your stuff looks pretty pro. I definitely want to see more of you.
Also, don't listen to kanu, keep doing whatever you're doing.
Also, don't listen to kanu, keep doing whatever you're doing.
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Kuroneko1/2 wrote...
Good lord. Your stuff looks pretty pro. I definitely want to see more of you.Also, don't listen to kanu, keep doing whatever you're doing.
no one should ever listen to me I'm just an obstacle.
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Kuroneko1/2 wrote...
Also, don't listen to kanu, keep doing whatever you're doing.
Honestly this is immature, don't listen and keep doing what you are doing? does that mean that you don't want him to keep better? All Kanu is suggesting is that he tries to get out of his comfort zone to attempt different styles and to improve himself. Also the TC himself understood that he should do attempt things that are less anime, and has explained that it is hard to break that habit, never in any of his post I read that he was against what Kanu said, in fact he agreed to it. I know that you two have went against each other in the forums, but reading that just annoyed me.
Also good job, your art is solid. The only things I would recommend is having a light source so your shading is not so much all over the place. Also some of your designs (mostly the third) is hard to read and very complicated, combined with having some soft shading made it look like a very muddy piece to me. Final note from me is that you could probably make your brush strokes much more defined, and have more confidence in your shading, the shading a bit too soft in my opinion, and I believe if you make some of these changes, you would up your art several levels above my own crap. Keep up the good fight.
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MRG wrote...
Kuroneko1/2 wrote...
Also, don't listen to kanu, keep doing whatever you're doing.
Also good job, your art is solid. The only things I would recommend is having a light source so your shading is not so much all over the place. Also some of your designs (mostly the third) is hard to read and very complicated, combined with having some soft shading made it look like a very muddy piece to me. Final note from me is that you could probably make your brush strokes much more defined, and have more confidence in your shading, the shading a bit too soft in my opinion, and I believe if you make some of these changes, you would up your art several levels above my own crap. Keep up the good fight.
Thanks very much for your few words of advice I'm sure it will definitely help out. I'll try to apply what you have mentioned about the shading to my upcoming colored pieces. Anyways once again thanks for the pointers.
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the way you positioned her chin and neck makes her look a bit pudgey
also define her center of balance on the indication of her legs since shes leaning on a side
the pose is nice but make one leg stand out more
(or can make her look like shes leaning against a wall)
relax the index finger on your right arm under the boob
it makes it look like the hand is pushing into the ribs rather than hugging the abdomen
(this all conjecture on my bad eyesight so don't mind any of the mistakes i have may have said altogether)
other than that my only complaint is that its not COLORED!
also define her center of balance on the indication of her legs since shes leaning on a side
the pose is nice but make one leg stand out more
(or can make her look like shes leaning against a wall)
relax the index finger on your right arm under the boob
it makes it look like the hand is pushing into the ribs rather than hugging the abdomen
(this all conjecture on my bad eyesight so don't mind any of the mistakes i have may have said altogether)
other than that my only complaint is that its not COLORED!
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EmiyaKiritsugu wrote...
the way you positioned her chin and neck makes her look a bit pudgey also define her center of balance on the indication of her legs since shes leaning on a side
the pose is nice but make one leg stand out more
(or can make her look like shes leaning against a wall)
relax the index finger on your right arm under the boob
it makes it look like the hand is pushing into the ribs rather than hugging the abdomen
(this all conjecture on my bad eyesight so don't mind any of the mistakes i have may have said altogether)
other than that my only complaint is that its not COLORED!
Lol Thanks For the pointers. I'll see what I can do about the things you pointed out. As for the pudgy look I was kind of going for that on purpose just to try out something a bit different from most of my other stuff since most of my other characters are all pretty skinny.




