The Mistress of Snow ; Chapter 02.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
This is the series of 'The Mistress of Snow' a story which was written for the 'Seasonal Writing Contest', I always planned and wanted to turn it into a series so here it is.
Edit: The title has been changed back from Japanese, sorry for all the inconvenience caused.
If you find any typos of mistakes then don't be shy and be sure to PM me the mistakes (just bold the mistakes on the story and then PM me).
Everyone, Rise-chan presents, The Mistress of Snow:
Chapter 00 - Their Meeting at the Park.
Chapter 01 - Her First Day at High school.
Chapter 2 - After School.
Oh, and Kobatsu High School (No idea what Kobatsu means, just made it up), is something that I came up with myself and according to my research, there's no such thing as Kobatsu High School in real life.
Hope you guys enjoyed it.
Edit: The title has been changed back from Japanese, sorry for all the inconvenience caused.
If you find any typos of mistakes then don't be shy and be sure to PM me the mistakes (just bold the mistakes on the story and then PM me).
Everyone, Rise-chan presents, The Mistress of Snow:
Chapter 00 - Their Meeting at the Park.
Spoiler:
Chapter 01 - Her First Day at High school.
Spoiler:
Chapter 2 - After School.
Spoiler:
Oh, and Kobatsu High School (No idea what Kobatsu means, just made it up), is something that I came up with myself and according to my research, there's no such thing as Kobatsu High School in real life.
Hope you guys enjoyed it.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
I rather enjoyed this one, it made me feel the warmth with the adorable character interaction. Splendidly done.
Ah, delicious Tsun-Tsun~!
Ah, delicious Tsun-Tsun~!
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
If you ask me, there's quite a lot of things that I couldn't get to flow nicely, if only the word limit would be somewhere at 2k or close to it.
But I guess we need give the judges a break.
But I guess we need give the judges a break.
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TwilightEngel wrote...
Aww, the ending was really cute. I was so glad that Mira took the initiative. :)I'm not a fan of Tsunderes but I think this was a good read. Nicely done. ツ
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Thanks you both of you, receiving words and praise gives me strength and confidence.
@Twilight, you got a special role on my second entry, do keep it in mind.
@Twilight, you got a special role on my second entry, do keep it in mind.
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Once again, not really my cup of tea, but very readable, both in terms of language skills as well as it being a nice, little story. There were a few errors here and there, but they didn't stop me from enjoying it. Would you like me to point them out, nonetheless, for the purposes of fixing it up?
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Yes please, I'm planning on re-checking for the sole purpose of that, but I'd prefer it if you PM me, its kinda embarrassing to have my mistakes shown out like that, even though everyone saw them. For some reason, I feel that the errors are related to my silly mistakes though but still, do PM me.
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Rise-chan wrote...
Like I'm gonna feel sad about anything about say.I know what it takes to when the hearts of these worthless peons.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
I wonder about that, plus I think writing properly will be a good start to take the hearts of the so-called peons.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
He's a troll, I know, but he's talking about my entry, so he kinda got me arguing, sorry...
*hugs back*
You're the first person I hugged though.
*hugs back*
You're the first person I hugged though.