high_time wrote...
I don't have much confidence in my art but well, let me know how do you guys think of this one, or some bits about what specific point should I focus on to get better on my future artworks~
Hey high time, glad you could join us, we mostly operate on Skype nowadays. I have quite a bit to say, so this is going to be a bit of a read. If you throw me your skype i can invite you to the skype group and go over it in more detail.
Also i have a lot of PDFs i can send you that would be very helpful.
I would look into gestures and basic shapes/forms, mainly gesture for now. the pose is very static which gesture can help with. The picture itself lacks depth, one of the key things artists of all types do is to essentially create the illusion of 3d on a 2d medium. When drawing a girl/woman, instead of thinking of the body itself, break it down into simpler three-dimensional shapes. Interpret the character in 3d. This'll be the biggest hurdle to get over.
I'd look into studying some basic anatomy at the same time. You don't need to push for a realistic figure, but Anime is an exaggeration of the figure. So the more you know about how the actual human body works, the more you can push your anime girls.
Another thing to note, Before you start drawing make light marks on the paper to kind of get an idea of what you want it to look like. You set in dark lines only when you look what you see on the paper. Use stick figures and simple shapes to construct the figure and the pose.
Lastly, make sure you observe and analyze. You can basically do this 24/7, i assume you watch anime or read manga. If you see a cute girl think to yourself "why do i think she looks cute? how can i create that feeling in my art". Anime and Manga art has a language to it, eyes that are large with big bright highlights are inviting, it creates an aura of innocence (example below).
There's alot of body language involved as well, that's something to look for. Know before hand what kind of character you're drawing. What i like to do is to write down 3 - 4 keywords which best describe the character i'm drawing.
Also i did a red-line over your original piece, it's kind of a messy job i did but it gives you a general idea of how the figure can be improved. I modeled the proportions on a standard Anime Girl measurement.