I decided to write a porn/hentai show

Seems while the majority sees this a pretty ok, there seems to be a lot of room to improve on this.
If this does get made it will more than likely be animation since I have the tools for it [but crap tier drawing outside scenery and even then..].

I'm sure there are people here who can help, myself included.

I'm completely fine with it. I can't really picture just one person doing the voices and animation for it. lol

I just got to save up a bit more to get ahold of a more powerful setup than I have now if this is it get anywhere.

I can work on concepts and voices.
The only animation I have every was a handful on a DSi (including a little hemtai one as well), so my skills with animation aren't exactly refined.

Are you open to tro-, I MEAN constructive criticism?

I'd say no to Ghost Head as a title.
The rest sounds viable!

Maybe something as a pun on carnal knowledge? Since it's a book and all.

sauce?

I think that would work a lot better. Just gotta stay away from using foreign words/phrases. They only work for a very small handful of hentai.



Lawls implying that you could troll

good luck bro

it sounds very interesting!! I'll watch it!