Tirayuki wrote...
First - You say it's horrible but each poem was written in 5 minutes or less - what did you expect?
Second - You say you're better but expect me to believe it without proof? You're right, you don't have to prove it, but good luck if you want me to believe you without doing so.
Third -
All I've seen so far is flaming. Not one bit of 'constructive' criticism. That's probably because this topic is IB but those links in the opening post lead to the topics which are not and have never once been in IB.
Fourth - If someone did nothing but flame your work without looking at the amount of time it took you per piece, and then called it trash repeatedly, wouldn't you be a little pissed off?
Fifth - If you have honest feedback or constructive criticism to give I'll be glad to hear it and open minded as long as it has a purpose other than to demean my work without just cause.
With that, I report this topic for lock.
Sweetheart, this is IB. Nobody gives a fuck, and the harder you work to make us give a fuck, the less of a fuck we will give.
also, if you actually wanted to impress --anyone-- then how about showing us something you apparently didn't 'shit out in under 5 minutes'? :3