[Locked] Should I do poetry or books?
Should I do books or poetry - help me decide!
Voting for this poll has ended.
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bakapink wrote...
opanihuya wrote...
so much for a rap battle huhif a rap battle can be fought by a single person, sure!... (dam, i seriously want to see that now!!!!! with a crowd and everything!)
https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=64609
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opanihuya wrote...
bakapink wrote...
opanihuya wrote...
so much for a rap battle huhif a rap battle can be fought by a single person, sure!... (dam, i seriously want to see that now!!!!! with a crowd and everything!)
https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=64609
This was going so good until later on page 3...
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animefreak_usa
Child of Samael
Tirayuki wrote...
GiantBeardedFace wrote...
animefreak_usa wrote...
Endless hopes gone away.
Pasting by a post in a wall.
The wall is hell.
Welcome on this ride.
Anal sex will be had.
Hurts of a butt will cry.
Virgins will rage.
Some dude with a knife,
sitting in the corner.
Glee on his face,
a fucking terrible waste of space.
Playing with his knob.
No luck.
Can’t give a fuck.
Gone on his merry way.
Pokes his head.
See nothing can be done.
Writes mental deranged ramblings on google docs.
Because his workstation lacks a word processor app.
Can’t do anything about that.
Sitting with a cat.
The state monitoring the line.
Seeing if i’m downloading child porn or that new Ben Affleck flick.
Still playing with my dick.
Everyone here is a prick.
Fuck i just rhymed.
Welcome to the asylum.
The place made for us to realm.
I have nothing else to type.
Here a cat.
meow
Pasting by a post in a wall.
The wall is hell.
Welcome on this ride.
Anal sex will be had.
Hurts of a butt will cry.
Virgins will rage.
Some dude with a knife,
sitting in the corner.
Glee on his face,
a fucking terrible waste of space.
Playing with his knob.
No luck.
Can’t give a fuck.
Gone on his merry way.
Pokes his head.
See nothing can be done.
Writes mental deranged ramblings on google docs.
Because his workstation lacks a word processor app.
Can’t do anything about that.
Sitting with a cat.
The state monitoring the line.
Seeing if i’m downloading child porn or that new Ben Affleck flick.
Still playing with my dick.
Everyone here is a prick.
Fuck i just rhymed.
Welcome to the asylum.
The place made for us to realm.
I have nothing else to type.
Here a cat.
meow
Beautiful. Moved to tears.
Too bad it took more than 5 minutes to produce, which was the time limit. So much failure.
Under that. I wasn't counting but i finished before US bombs- In and out was done playing. Which is 2:53.
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That was pretty funny to post this on IB when there's already this place to bitch whenever you want =)
Oh well, back to lurking I guess?
Oh well, back to lurking I guess?
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Tirayuki wrote...
First - You say it's horrible but each poem was written in 5 minutes or less - what did you expect?
Second - You say you're better but expect me to believe it without proof? You're right, you don't have to prove it, but good luck if you want me to believe you without doing so.
Third - All I've seen so far is flaming. Not one bit of 'constructive' criticism. That's probably because this topic is IB but those links in the opening post lead to the topics which are not and have never once been in IB.
Fourth - If someone did nothing but flame your work without looking at the amount of time it took you per piece, and then called it trash repeatedly, wouldn't you be a little pissed off?
Fifth - If you have honest feedback or constructive criticism to give I'll be glad to hear it and open minded as long as it has a purpose other than to demean my work without just cause.
With that, I report this topic for lock.
Sweetheart, this is IB. Nobody gives a fuck, and the harder you work to make us give a fuck, the less of a fuck we will give.
also, if you actually wanted to impress --anyone-- then how about showing us something you apparently didn't 'shit out in under 5 minutes'? :3
