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Doujin works by Mycstea

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braintist
17 years ago
NICE @.@
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loliconstory
16 years ago
crackpot wrote...
Wow, gorgeous. O_O;

I feel like I wasted many years on just learning how to draw shonen-style men. T_T

I need to get myself another hot girlfriend and force her to let me draw her nude repeatedly.

PS: I think the bulge on the panties owns. The hip-placement seems ok to me, though the almost impossible turn seems common with Chinese gymnast, so I think it's forgivable. :3

I love your smooth curves. The lines all flow into eachother wonderfully and never look forced. (Unlike someone...*coughs*me*coughs*)


Hehehe ^^. Don't abuse her now.

Keep up the good work, mycestea.
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Mycstea
16 years ago
Haha you spelt my name wrongly. It's Mycstea. Anyways, i've updated my doujin group site on the stuffs that i said earlier.

Have a look here:
http://www.collateralds.com/
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Mycstea
16 years ago
Forum Image: http://i35.tinypic.com/2vwbw5g.jpg

Just made this stuff. All my doujin works are ready for AFA08 (www.afa08.com)! HECK YEAAAAAAAAA
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Techeese
16 years ago
Mycstea wrote...
Forum Image: http://i35.tinypic.com/2vwbw5g.jpg

Just made this stuff. All my doujin works are ready for AFA08 (www.afa08.com)! HECK YEAAAAAAAAA


wow very awesome mycstea

i've seen all your works in this thread and they are amazing

i hope i can become as good as you :oops:
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Mycstea
16 years ago
Thanks for the compliments.

And guess what. The Sheryl one got signed (though the art is not by me)!
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luciferu
16 years ago
Colorwork is nice, drawings are cute but anatomy should redone, obviously on Sheryl's waist and butt.
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Ranguren
16 years ago
amazing work.
Reminds me of another artist's work
it's amazing how the colors are brought out, any tips on how to get anatomy and hair flow? hair, i just can't feel the flow and body i just can't get it to look correctly as well as the clothes D:
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HigeHyde
16 years ago
Very nice...i wish i have 1/10 ur skills =D
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Mycstea
16 years ago
Ranguren wrote...
amazing work.
Reminds me of another artist's work
it's amazing how the colors are brought out, any tips on how to get anatomy and hair flow? hair, i just can't feel the flow and body i just can't get it to look correctly as well as the clothes D:


Hmm... stare at the real thing. It helps. For hair, try to think of them as layers. Easier to understand.

Let me post up something...

Forum Image: http://i38.tinypic.com/121vi8x.jpg

Something i should earlier, only digital form =3
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Temcor
16 years ago
You always go for the DFC do you?

I know the character from the new Macross series but I kinda forgot her name (too busy to watch anime this year) Still I admire your colouring style. The colouring have a soft feeling to it yet it comes out nicely and pretty.
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tkhnoman
16 years ago
It's something wrong here and there at that Ranka. But you did a good job by covering it with your color skill. I think what need to do is refining your drawing.
Anyway, DFC!! OxO

And about Macross Frontier, that means one thing for me. Lighting effect that makes your eyes sore. @_@
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Engel
16 years ago
Pretty awesome stuff, I wish I could do stuff like that. ):
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Mycstea
16 years ago
tkhnoman wrote...
It's something wrong here and there at that Ranka. But you did a good job by covering it with your color skill. I think what need to do is refining your drawing.
Anyway, DFC!! OxO

And about Macross Frontier, that means one thing for me. Lighting effect that makes your eyes sore. @_@


Care to enlighten me what's wrong?
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tkhnoman
16 years ago
Mycstea wrote...

Care to enlighten me what's wrong?


I care, but i'm afraid that i am is the wrong one.
Well, i will say it all anyway, but this might be just some opinion, so don't take it to serious(lol, like hell you won't, that's why i'm afraid).

Spoiler:

First expression is kinda off. I think you need to train to draw expression eyes. I got trained well for these because i do doujin manga.

Her...
:Left Eyes: I don't think exceeding face will always good, in this case, there is face lineart that exceed going to the eyes in odd way.

:Mouth: Maybe that's how you draw, but the shadow inside the mouth still seems weird.

:Right hand: Elbow of the hand is drawn in wrong curve, that you can see if you flip the image horizontally. And the... what that called anyway. palm.. (Ukh, bad english). Try to look at your hand.(This.. i might wrong)

:chest: i think the ligthing effect is off. And also, if you going to put nipple.. Where it might be? >.<

:left area of skirt: just feel not match for me..

:leg: i dunno how to say it..

i think this is all just lack. (I'm sorry that i said it's wrong.)

From what i observe from all of your arts, the main problem of your lack is leg? O_O
EDIT: Sheryl have more lack. Too much for me.. But it's not by you...
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Mycstea
16 years ago
Temcor wrote...
You always go for the DFC do you?

I know the character from the new Macross series but I kinda forgot her name (too busy to watch anime this year) Still I admire your colouring style. The colouring have a soft feeling to it yet it comes out nicely and pretty.


DFC FTW forever yo DFC! And her name is Ranka Lee, same surname as me!

tkhnoman wrote...
Mycstea wrote...

Care to enlighten me what's wrong?


I care, but i'm afraid that i am is the wrong one.
Well, i will say it all anyway, but this might be just some opinion, so don't take it to serious(lol, like hell you won't, that's why i'm afraid).

Spoiler:

First expression is kinda off. I think you need to train to draw expression eyes. I got trained well for these because i do doujin manga.

Her...
:Left Eyes: I don't think exceeding face will always good, in this case, there is face lineart that exceed going to the eyes in odd way.

:Mouth: Maybe that's how you draw, but the shadow inside the mouth still seems weird.

:Right hand: Elbow of the hand is drawn in wrong curve, that you can see if you flip the image horizontally. And the... what that called anyway. palm.. (Ukh, bad english). Try to look at your hand.(This.. i might wrong)

:chest: i think the ligthing effect is off. And also, if you going to put nipple.. Where it might be? >.<

:left area of skirt: just feel not match for me..

:leg: i dunno how to say it..

i think this is all just lack. (I'm sorry that i said it's wrong.)

From what i observe from all of your arts, the main problem of your lack is leg? O_O
EDIT: Sheryl have more lack. Too much for me.. But it's not by you...


Thank you for the feedback. Let me try to answer you...

Spoiler:

What kind of expression is good then? I'm trying to draw her being happy and not overly excited - how is it wrong then? How should i train to draw "expression" eyes? I cry foul on this "mistake". You yourself however, should learn the basics of eye balance yourself too, if i may say so.

Left eye: Exceeding the face... maybe. But i've always drawn it this way, i will see if i can work this out.

Mouth: Yes its the way i draw. Don't think so much into it.

Right hand: I cry foul on this "mistake" too. Sometimes you don't look at an image from the other angle cos it's not Meant to be seen in the other angle. It'll become totally unbalanced when the orientation is not what its supposed to be so. There are many cases where the reflected version is just weird and it doesnt really matter. The only reason why the reverse is looked is to see if the proportions are balanced, and not the composition. Besides, this is my stylized version of drawing hands.

And the palm, is fine. I drew it from my hand in the first place and i just double checked.. I would like to note that i DID spot a mistake on the left forearm as it's a few milimeters too long. Interesting you didn't spot that instead.

Chest: Hmm what lighting effect. This image is almost no light source so im just painting normal shadow effects. Also, regarding the nipples, that's the point, i want to almost show the nipple (yes it's JUST blocked).

Skirt: It can't be helped. Her skirt is the kind that never goes down or compresses or sways. The whole skirt is swaying to her left.

Legs: as i said, the skirt makes the whole area weird. It's proportioned correctly but the movement made it weird.


Besides, the overall picture is fine. Nickpicking on things that are stylized... is a little weird imo. You should probably hound more on why there isn't a background in this image. Or that the hair is the wrong colour (yep). Next time you critic art, please provide possible solutions you think are correct. What you've done is basically listing mistakes yet not telling me how to change it, or what you think needs to be done. That is not being a good critique. That's just being a spotter.

And who cares if the Sheryl is lacking. It's signed by May'N and that's all that matters now (lol, that one isn't drawn by me anyways)

Finally, don't mind my attitude here cos i just don't get what you're trying to say to help me improve.
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tkhnoman
16 years ago
Sorry, and Thanks.. Really thank you very much.
Actually this is my first time to try to comment other's art. And i tell what i do think, and now i know that i am wrong.

This is also the result of not going to the art school i think. Possibly what i treat is more too stupid for real artist. But yeah, now i know, and i think i must change how i think, listing mistake/bug is just for tech...
The most lol think is i never learn any basic, of whatever to draw. I just draw what i can, without any learning things. Just try and try. Let's see if i can take some basics. And i do need to learn from other like this.(Since i never meet an artist in my real life, i mean it)

And so on, if you think the picture is fine, then it's fine. It's just my opinion. If you said about background, i know that the purpose of this art is for banner. Then sometime, it not needed, right?

And last, thanks again, for responding to my stupid comment #^^#.
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Mycstea
16 years ago
tkhnoman wrote...
Sorry, and Thanks.. Really thank you very much.
Actually this is my first time to try to comment other's art. And i tell what i do think, and now i know that i am wrong.

This is also the result of not going to the art school i think. Possibly what i treat is more too stupid for real artist. But yeah, now i know, and i think i must change how i think, listing mistake/bug is just for tech...
The most lol think is i never learn any basic, of whatever to draw. I just draw what i can, without any learning things. Just try and try. Let's see if i can take some basics. And i do need to learn from other like this.(Since i never meet an artist in my real life, i mean it)

And so on, if you think the picture is fine, then it's fine. It's just my opinion. If you said about background, i know that the purpose of this art is for banner. Then sometime, it not needed, right?

And last, thanks again, for responding to my stupid comment #^^#.


I don't have any former art education neither. I'm only enrolled recently and nothing much is being taught in this aspect of drawing too. Constructive critique is critique with suggestions. Try again next time you critique ya?

Hmmm BG... i complain its too plain
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tkhnoman
16 years ago
I do want to give suggestion, but don't know how to say it. (Let's see, sometime English can be very hard, for fail person)
But yup, I will try next time.

And yeah, if i fail again, then you can kill me with FALCON KICK!!! >.<
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Mycstea
16 years ago
Artwork for the calender. In low res of cos

Remastered version of Kyou and Ryou for March
Forum Image: http://i37.tinypic.com/10h8tja.png

Rin Natsume for June
Forum Image: http://i38.tinypic.com/1zzkx6s.jpg

Noumi Kudryavka for December
Forum Image: http://i36.tinypic.com/2w1z4i1.png


Random/Rejected stuff

40min sketch for a friend and NO THIS IS NOT KAGAMI
Forum Image: http://i35.tinypic.com/2l8973o.jpg

Fate Testarossa rejected sketch
Forum Image: http://i35.tinypic.com/fp9wfa.png

That's about it for now haha
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