Starshark's doodlebook
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Yaaay finally working out of my art block! Revamped the first post to put all new artwork at the top with descriptions on top of the art instead of beneath.
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Ooh, pretty character design. I don't normally look at furries but this one is gosh darn cute.
I think the hybrid dog/human qualities are very consistent, save for the hands. The hands seem a little too human-like, dwarfed by the larger anatomy of the hind legs and feet. Her overall figure might look more proportional if her hands more closely resembled paws. I also had a difficult time recognizing that she was a shiba inu because of the color choice. A suggestion is to use brighter, warmer hues, to help offset the washed-out color of her fur.
The mini milk shirt's very cute! The only tiny gripe I have with it is that there isn't enough pettanko to do the shirt justice. Execution aside, I'd love to see the idea used more often *v*
Keep up the good work.
I think the hybrid dog/human qualities are very consistent, save for the hands. The hands seem a little too human-like, dwarfed by the larger anatomy of the hind legs and feet. Her overall figure might look more proportional if her hands more closely resembled paws. I also had a difficult time recognizing that she was a shiba inu because of the color choice. A suggestion is to use brighter, warmer hues, to help offset the washed-out color of her fur.
The mini milk shirt's very cute! The only tiny gripe I have with it is that there isn't enough pettanko to do the shirt justice. Execution aside, I'd love to see the idea used more often *v*
Keep up the good work.
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hyphen wrote...
Ooh, pretty character design. I don't normally look at furries but this one is gosh darn cute.I think the hybrid dog/human qualities are very consistent, save for the hands. The hands seem a little too human-like, dwarfed by the larger anatomy of the hind legs and feet. Her overall figure might look more proportional if her hands more closely resembled paws. I also had a difficult time recognizing that she was a shiba inu because of the color choice. A suggestion is to use brighter, warmer hues, to help offset the washed-out color of her fur.
The mini milk shirt's very cute! The only tiny gripe I have with it is that there isn't enough pettanko to do the shirt justice. Execution aside, I'd love to see the idea used more often *v*
Keep up the good work.
Thank you for the critique!!
Her hands are terrible and I know it, I was having such a shit time with them and just spat them on without much of a care cause I was SO DONE with them after like 10 minutes of putzing around and didn't wanna get discouraged from the entire piece.
And I actually don't like anthros with animal-like hands, even when they have digitigrade feet, but that's a personal preference.
I didn't think the fur looked washed out necessarily, more on the pastel side. Because shibas aren't always super bright ruddy brown. ouo I really exaggerated on the details anyway, like for example her tail looks more like a pomeranian's. XD But where are you suggesting to use the brighter hues?
I wish I could own a mini milk shirt man. And I thought she was small chested enough for it, really. She's only about a B cup. o_o Compared to the, like, DDD/E's the character wearing the Mega Milk shirt has, after all.
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starshark wrote...
Thank you for the critique!!Her hands are terrible and I know it, I was having such a shit time with them and just spat them on without much of a care cause I was SO DONE with them after like 10 minutes of putzing around and didn't wanna get discouraged from the entire piece.
And I actually don't like anthros with animal-like hands, even when they have digitigrade feet, but that's a personal preference.
I didn't think the fur looked washed out necessarily, more on the pastel side. Because shibas aren't always super bright ruddy brown. ouo I really exaggerated on the details anyway, like for example her tail looks more like a pomeranian's. XD But where are you suggesting to use the brighter hues?
I wish I could own a mini milk shirt man. And I thought she was small chested enough for it, really. She's only about a B cup. o_o Compared to the, like, DDD/E's the character wearing the Mega Milk shirt has, after all.
Agreed, extremities are really fucking hard to draw. I suggested a brighter hue to replace the sand-like color of her fur, only because I've never seen a shiba inu with that color. In the end, I wouldn't want my subjective taste to mask your better judgment. I got nothing against pastels and fluffy pomeranian tails.
10/10 would wear a mini milk shirt.
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hyphen wrote...
Agreed, extremities are really fucking hard to draw. I suggested a brighter hue to replace the sand-like color of her fur, only because I've never seen a shiba inu with that color. In the end, I wouldn't want my subjective taste to mask your better judgment. I got nothing against pastels and fluffy pomeranian tails.
10/10 would wear a mini milk shirt.
Late reply is late, sorry.
I've seen some white/cream coloured shibas, they're just a lot less common than the super ruddy or orange ones. :3
If someone would make the mini milk shirt I would buy it in a heartbeat
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Phew, lots of updates today.
Goddamn I've actually been seeing my art improve steadily compared to the crap I posted back in February and March. Can def tell I was getting into a block.
Goddamn I've actually been seeing my art improve steadily compared to the crap I posted back in February and March. Can def tell I was getting into a block.
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Embracing_Fear wrote...
Wow! :oYou are so good! x.x
I think I am in-love :I
o-oh jeez /)/////(\
thank you
