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Wanting the world to break

deathgod72 · 2013-06-30T08:23:44+00:00

this is a long poem(I guess) that I wrote I grew up strong had high morals tryed to protect others would have willingly given my life for the safety and happyness of another and thats alot for a child to do, eventually it just became expected of me and expected of the others to devalue there own life to be used as a shield by others I followed the strong respected and admired the loyal and disciplined, there wasn't very meny of us to start with now there are even fewer left alive, good guys all of them, just hearing people (women mostly) talk of there being no good men left, almost hurts to think of the fact that there are more "good men" in the smallest of gravyards then there are in even the largest of cities. I always wanted to be a symbol of hope of protection but in the aspect of being challanged I never backed down naturally gifted in strength having a overdrive of an aggressive nature from primal homocidal desires mixed with the rage of my upbringing all made stronger by training both tactically and physicly even held back and heavily sedated my movements and attacks can be considered lethal, in a few moments of trash talk and a flash of bloodshed that I called self defence and others called assault with lethal intent, everyone gone silent and i became a symbol of hope and protection to some but a symbol of fear, bloodshed and brutality to meny more, originally it branded me a protectior of the weak, a savior of the wounded, a hero then it all just branded me remorseless soldier, a monster, a demon, a killer.... and as such even though I stilll want to serve the world protect it but even more I want to teach it and thats why when I die and the others of my kind are wiped out I want the world to break just alittle bit not to create another set of groups of both honor bound and rage driven soldiers and killers like us or worse the ones driven by revenge and hatred, but to create a generation of people that can learn and adapt enough to solve there own problems both as an individual and a community after all doing nothing and waiting to be saved by a hero of some sort is almost like inviting death for a cup of tea just before he guts you or even worse waiting, being beat down while watching your hero fall into a pool of his own blood. for those of you who have the intelligence or the patience to read this far you can take this at face value if you like or you can try to read into it see if you can find any subliminal messages or to see what this view of life and the world means to you if your hardset on your own view of life then so be it atleast you can get a glimpse into a different perspective and gain a second opinion on your views, if your view is similar then at least now you know there are others who still believe in honor and still have some faith in humanity, as for the subliminal messages I can say what it means for me but some of what I learned and what I benefited from may not benefit you everyone learns something different varying on age knowledge experience and many other factors just listen to your thoughts trust your instincts you'll be fine ^^

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Leuconoe

12 years ago

Medzy wrote...

Leuconoe wrote...

OP, I am more new than you, and I can find the writing section.

You gotta lurk.

Dis newguy knows his shit.

Why thank you, Medzy.

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