Better Half

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Embraced in a fluffy feeling...
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carrie_ +12 points Discord Mom
May 23, 2017 at 1:05 pm
This chapter is... really, really tough. Sorry I couldn't find a way to tag it to communicate how not vanilla, how sad, and how troubling it is.

Please join me in hoping that Kanoko can find a better partner because she is a good girl and deserves better.
Feronen +1 points mmw that NTR sh-
May 23, 2017 at 2:12 pm
Dude just needs a solid kick in the nuts to wake him up from his self-serving attitude. Not that I'm a fan of NTR or anything (note my tag), but maybe a little infidelity on her part might get the point across.
carrie_ +5 points Discord Mom
May 23, 2017 at 2:40 pm
Yeah, I'd actually love a sequel to this where she falls in love with a nice man who cares for her. Those are the kinds of cheating chapters that I really love.
GODsHandOnEarth +6 points (Not-so-)Grim Reaper
May 23, 2017 at 1:04 pm
The guy seemed a little bit crazy and disappointed that life is not like one of the hentai stories he drew (at least I assume that he is a hentai artist). And the whole "no speaking to other men" thing - not cool, man...
carrie_ +6 points Discord Mom
May 23, 2017 at 1:09 pm
I think he's a novelist. The impression I get from him is that he's sorta like... a star intellectual who's really full of himself and arrogant.
GODsHandOnEarth +4 points (Not-so-)Grim Reaper
May 23, 2017 at 1:17 pm
And he has anger issues...
Recent Comments
Dependable_Skeleton +1 points
May 28, 2017 at 4:49 am
came here to fap, left sad.
luinthoron +1 points High Priest of Loli
May 27, 2017 at 7:02 am
Ah, so many negative comments here... Well, they're true to an extent, and the husband's behavior throughout most of the chapter really is far from good, but the main problem here is really a lack of communication. The wife tries to appeal to him by being the "perfect wife", while he sees it as avoiding him and flirting with his editor. And while this leads to one troubling situation that could very well spell the end of their marriage, once they've cleared the misunderstanding, the last part of the chapter has them both on their way to happiness together.
RandomChoice +5 points
May 23, 2017 at 8:47 pm
I just want to point out that this an amazing work of fiction. I know porn isn't judged on its literary chops, but this is a really special story. It isn't a happy story, but it gives an amazing view into dysfunctional couple and really presents it from their view. I could write a paper on this, but FAKKU won't allow comments that long.
AssasinZAssasin +2 points Not Hentai Protagonist
May 23, 2017 at 4:01 pm
...Cute cat.
The protagonist seems to have a real jealous streak, I mean, all she really did was talk to the guy and give him some homemade food. Getting a bit jealous is one thing, but getting kind of angry and just holding her down like that might be a little uncalled for...
If she's okay with it, then no problem though, I guess.
SummerSpike69 +2 points
May 23, 2017 at 4:00 pm
Good for him he got someone that loves him even tho he's a piece of shit.
carrie_ +4 points Discord Mom
May 23, 2017 at 3:31 pm
Fun fact about this chapter that I should have mentioned earlier:
The Japanese title is "Household Cherry Tree," which is a cute term for "wife." Before reading the chapter, I suggested "better half" as a localized replacement. When I finished the chapter, I felt pretty confident about the suggestion.
Smuggins +2 points Just Some Guy
May 26, 2017 at 12:59 pm
Love the translator participation, very cool!
Tesuno +2 points
May 23, 2017 at 2:29 pm
She was cute n shit but man was he an asshole. I get that some people feel jealousy and it's only natural to want to be favored, but fuck man... He needs to learn how to trust
OtakuMike +2 points
May 23, 2017 at 2:28 pm
It was going okay until the rape scene. Poor girls needs a better man.
エロカワ +2 points Sexy & Cute
May 23, 2017 at 1:15 pm
Man, the girl is great but that guy is a real asshole. Felt too much like domestic abuse...
Smuggins +1 points Just Some Guy
May 26, 2017 at 1:01 pm
Ya, seemed weird, but I guess it could fall into domination, since it seems consensual?
GODsHandOnEarth +2 points (Not-so-)Grim Reaper
May 23, 2017 at 1:21 pm
It's like he tries to be the Michael Jordan of being a jerk...
carrie_ +4 points Discord Mom
May 23, 2017 at 1:21 pm
Yeah, to me... this IS a domestic abuse chapter. He's totally taking advantage of poor Konoko's innocence, youth, and desire to please somebody who is older and way cool and successful.
GODsHandOnEarth +2 points (Not-so-)Grim Reaper
May 23, 2017 at 1:24 pm
His creepy face on top of page seven says it all..