I don’t think there’s anything wrong with the first two drafts, it’s just that the third one is more… interactive and dynamic: a skewed angle, and a sense of movement from the smooshed boobs. If you look at the first one, it’s more static, and the second one looks kind of like it could be a set up for a selfie. EDIT: And if you look at the final cover, it’s implied that the POV is of the senpai right on top of her
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