Hiroto and Kyoko have loved each other for a long time, but when things finally make it to the bedroom, one of them winds up disappointed. An upperclassman forces his way into the mix and tests Kyoko's loyalty. How long can she last when he's driving her crazy in ways her boyfriend never could?
I personally dislike full color, but I won't subtract points for that. Honestly, even though it was 70+ pages of content, it wasn't worth the purchase. It felt like they were going for quantity over quality. 2/5
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The real kicker is the ending. One of the first things every writer learns is to never start your story with an alarm clock and never end it with "it was all a dream." It completely ruins the entire story for no reason at all. Why show that Hiroto enjoyed being cucked? Why go through all these story beats, just to completely nullify them?
It's such a cop out, just to set up a possible sequel.
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