Not bad, it would have been much better if he actually would have gone in there and killed the fucking pigs though. Instead of joining them with raping the check. Not to mention , doesn't the MC want to Bang the girl all himself?Not just get a blow job out of it like come on , dude
All in all not bad definitely room for improvement hard to tell if you're actually gonna continue it or make it into a series
Not bad, it would have been much better if he actually would have gone in there and killed the fucking pigs though. Instead of joining them with raping the check. Not to mention , doesn't the MC want to Bang the girl all himself?Not just get a blow job out of it like come on , dude
All in all not bad definitely room for improvement hard to tell if you're actually gonna continue it or make it into a series
Parallel world stories are all the rage now, huh. Getting all meta on us.
Hmm, still, a magic power is focused entirely on his crotch...Makes me think he'll probably save the world by fucking all his enemies into submission or something...
Was what I thought, but then he ended up just helping the orcs when they were raping the adventurer rather than actually saving her? Interesting application of his powers, though. I mean, basically making their lust so insatiable that their bodies can't keep up, KOing them eventually...
I kind of want to see a sequel to this, actually.