Present For You by Mokufuu

Present For You

Artist
Parody
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20 pages
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Description
Toying with a maiden's bashful heart. ♥
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Comments on Present For You
Top Comments
Rowdy69 +5 points
June 07, 2018 at 5:58 am
How does this get a vanilla tag when other more deserving stories don't? Hell, this could almost count as forced. Not to mention the shitty defloration with a toy while she was practically dry. But somehow she ends up fine with it all, just like the girls in netorare stories. Really, this is a pretty terrible story.
Smuggins +3 points Just Some Guy
June 07, 2018 at 7:04 pm
Ya, I hear you. On the last page, I was hopeful for a split second that they would address that, but they dived back into macho-fantasy land, where women don't mean 'no' and enjoy dry vaginal rape.
adix22 +1 points
June 07, 2018 at 10:12 am
"pretty terrible story" - Calling it a terrible story just because there is something there that bothers you... If you don't like it , you just stop reading it, nobody is forcing you, also . Also comparing this to netorare? really? Have you ever read a netorare story to make such comparison; this is nothing like netorare, there is nothing in it that is remotely close to Ntr...
adix22 +2 points
June 08, 2018 at 10:16 am
@Rowdy69
I've read your comment and I've understood it well , you said it it's a terrible STORY just because of act of defloration with a toy which is stupid. "It is pretty terrible because, as I said, this is pretty much forced/rape territory" - so you are saying that something that has forced/rape automatically makes it terrible story? Not lackluster cardboard cut outs off characters that are in the most vanilla stories? not inconsistencies in writing? Wow, just because something is out of your comfort zone, doesn't make it bad, also resorting to name calling, really? I haven't insulted you even once (I didn't try nor I don't I did). You are calling me an ignorant douche , which is kinda ironic given that you are saying that story is terrible just because it's out of your comfort zone.
Rowdy69 +2 points
June 08, 2018 at 6:36 am
It is pretty terrible because, as I said, this is pretty much forced/rape territory. And I only compared the girl to the girls from Ntr stories, because they completely give in to what's being done to them by the end of it all. If you had properly read my comment then you may have actually understood, rather than making yourself sound like an ignorant douche.
TheMicrowave +2 points
June 08, 2018 at 4:00 pm
Rowdy sounds like a youtube commenter
Rowdy69 +1 points
June 09, 2018 at 5:09 am
But it is terrible, because this act of pretty much rape is being portrayed as fluffy vanilla. If this was actually a rape story I wouldn't be calling it terrible because then it would have actually done its job properly.

Is it out of my comfort zone? Yes. But that's because the theme or moral of it is clearly not thought out very well.

And I am a bit sorry for the name calling. The way I read your comment it seemed very condescending in terms of you just assuming what I have or have not read. Why would I compare something to Ntr if I hadn't read it before? That would be pretty stupid.
Unnamed_Shadow +3 points
June 06, 2018 at 11:26 pm
little sister needs to join the fun too!
MHM-Dono +1 points
June 06, 2018 at 5:07 pm
Suppose it could be argued that the sister (Reina) had sincere intentions ... nonetheless, the whole "first time" could have gone worse. Ah, well, notwithstanding that she seems to have gone a bit 'tsundere' about it, Rika likes it enough to want it like that, next time. Do Your Best, Akito-kun
AssasinZAssasin +1 points Not Hentai Protagonist
June 06, 2018 at 5:37 pm
Ooh a present. A sweet, Vanilla filled present for us.
Man, his sister really knows her brother well. Like, she knew if she made it out to seem like Riku wanted a dildo, her brother would...well, jump her, essentially.
Well it turned out perfectly alright in the end, so she was quite the wingman indeed.
I must say I was kind of hoping she'd get some action too...
Recent Comments
GODsHandOnEarth +1 points (Not-so-)Grim Reaper
June 06, 2018 at 9:42 pm
Presents given with love and passion are the best ones!
Smuggins +4 points Just Some Guy
June 07, 2018 at 7:02 pm
Real love means using lube!
GODsHandOnEarth +2 points (Not-so-)Grim Reaper
June 07, 2018 at 10:58 pm
And cuddling afterwards!