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It is pretty terrible because, as I said, this is pretty much forced/rape territory. And I only compared the girl to the girls from Ntr stories, because they completely give in to what's being done to them by the end of it all. If you had properly read my comment then you may have actually understood, rather than making yourself sound like an ignorant douche.

But it is terrible, because this act of pretty much rape is being portrayed as fluffy vanilla. If this was actually a rape story I wouldn't be calling it terrible because then it would have actually done its job properly.

Is it out of my comfort zone? Yes. But that's because the theme or moral of it is clearly not thought out very well.

And I am a bit sorry for the name calling. The way I read your comment it seemed very condescending in terms of you just assuming what I have or have not read. Why would I compare something to Ntr if I hadn't read it before? That would be pretty stupid.

@Rowdy69
I've read your comment and I've understood it well , you said it it's a terrible STORY just because of act of defloration with a toy which is stupid. "It is pretty terrible because, as I said, this is pretty much forced/rape territory" - so you are saying that something that has forced/rape automatically makes it terrible story? Not lackluster cardboard cut outs off characters that are in the most vanilla stories? not inconsistencies in writing? Wow, just because something is out of your comfort zone, doesn't make it bad, also resorting to name calling, really? I haven't insulted you even once (I didn't try nor I don't I did). You are calling me an ignorant douche , which is kinda ironic given that you are saying that story is terrible just because it's out of your comfort zone.

Rowdy sounds like a youtube commenter

And cuddling afterwards!