Systematic Girl by MGMEE
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Systematic Girl

Parody
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Magazine
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Pages
16 pages
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214 favorites
Description
Before my heart and my body succumb to the cold…
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Comments on Systematic Girl
Top Comments
MHM-Dono
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 4:09 pm)
+5 points
No "vanilla" ending this time around ... but still ... IT'S MGMEE!. Now to practice for that day when a tank by this artist is available ... CHA-CHING!!!!!
luckydog001
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 4:43 pm)
+8 points
It's Available! Hopefully it will be on FAKKU soon!

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Unnamed_Shadow
(Sun Feb 5, 2017, 7:00 am)
+1 points
dunno, maybe a sequel can fix it. I feel the guy might not be a bad one. What if this guy is actually the one she was waiting for?
Tskune_702
(Sun Feb 5, 2017, 10:58 pm)
+1 points
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That must mean she'd be getting hit on at another bridge that he happens to see and "saves" her, or he just runs into her again and she sees the genuine concern on his face. I'd be cool with either one.
loliconlover321
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 8:47 pm)
+3 points
yea.. finally loose whore schoolgirl.. fap time has come!
Recent Comments
luinthoron
(Fri Feb 10, 2017, 3:47 pm)
+1 points
Ah, what a way to misjudge the guy in the end, but then again, he probably wasn't what she wants right now in any case. Might still be a good idea to keep the card in case she does actually need his help at some point, though.
geemaa
(Sat Feb 4, 2017, 2:31 am)
+2 points
Fun Fact: Ikebukero, Shibuya, Ueno, etc are all different districts in Tokyo
black_cat1
(Sat Feb 4, 2017, 12:57 am)
+2 points
Ha ha, Wani Magazine :))
GODsHandOnEarth
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 11:32 pm)
+2 points
"I bet he thinks he scored himself some free pussy"
*looks at the hotel room bill* Yeah, free... And Meanwhile Ramu-Chan sits lonely at her room...
I actually want to see how he reacts when he sees her using the same trick on another guy. He definitely needs to "punish" her...
正義
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 9:54 pm)
-3 points
Romance is dead, all women are sluts, and this girl is a prime example of what women are like nowadays. Get used to it, boys!
luinthoron
(Fri Feb 10, 2017, 3:49 pm)
+1 points
I rarely find myself agreeing with your comments here, but I definitely do with this one. We always hear how men are said to be not willing to commit and only out to get some sex, but women these days are no different.
EddieBeInBeddie
(Sat Feb 4, 2017, 9:00 am)
+1 points
I have no doubts your beliefs make that very real for you, and I hope you enjoy the reality it creates for you. I suppose I'll have to be content with enjoy the brilliant parts of you via your writing, rather than friendship.
EddieBeInBeddie
(Sat Feb 4, 2017, 8:24 am)
+1 points
Ah, so you've trapped yourself in a web of absolutest dogma that supports your neurosis. Sorry to hear that, I suggest some Albert Ellis.
正義
(Sat Feb 4, 2017, 8:47 am)
+3 points
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You mean realism?
EddieBeInBeddie
(Sat Feb 4, 2017, 1:56 am)
+1 points
Noticing the Hamao and Homunculus beside the Shindol in your library... suuuuuuurrre.
正義
(Sat Feb 4, 2017, 8:19 am)
+3 points
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My dick can dream, but my mind cannot ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
EddieBeInBeddie
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 6:50 pm)
+2 points
I rather like the twist. We've had at least one really sweet 'save the jumper' toned vanilla this past year, so I don't mind something more cynical.
Genryuusai
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 5:23 pm)
+3 points
There are so many directions this story can go with this ending, usual quality story from MGMEE!
MidoriMinori
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 4:36 pm)
+3 points
Hes hungry for pussy. Shes hungry for cocks. Thats all about it.

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AssasinZAssasin
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 4:33 pm)
+3 points
...Well, it certainly had potential to be a Vanilla, if the ending was different.
But I guess the twist being that she was not only not suicidal, but is just putting up an act to hunt for guys was somewhat unexpected...Even if I had hoped for the orthodox Vanilla type story.
FAKKUbecomeREALITY
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 4:07 pm)
+3 points
Well I like this was straight to the point and didn't give that happy ending BS I always read. A nice real world pace is good once in a while
EddieBeInBeddie
(Fri Feb 3, 2017, 6:52 pm)
+3 points
Happy endings aren't innately 'false'... the concept of endings, besides death, are. Whatever ending you give a story is simply where you stopped following the characters. This ending suited the story. That's what makes it work.

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