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Systematic Girl
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Parody
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16 pages
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Before my heart and my body succumb to the cold…
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AssasinZAssasin
Not Hentai Protagonist
8 years ago
...Well, it certainly had potential to be a Vanilla, if the ending was different.
But I guess the twist being that she was not only not suicidal, but is just putting up an act to hunt for guys was somewhat unexpected...Even if I had hoped for the orthodox Vanilla type story.
But I guess the twist being that she was not only not suicidal, but is just putting up an act to hunt for guys was somewhat unexpected...Even if I had hoped for the orthodox Vanilla type story.
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luinthoron
High Priest of Loli
8 years ago
Ah, what a way to misjudge the guy in the end, but then again, he probably wasn't what she wants right now in any case. Might still be a good idea to keep the card in case she does actually need his help at some point, though.
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geemaa
<3 Yuri
8 years ago
Fun Fact: Ikebukero, Shibuya, Ueno, etc are all different districts in Tokyo
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GODsHandOnEarth
(Not-so-)Grim Reaper
8 years ago
"I bet he thinks he scored himself some free pussy"
*looks at the hotel room bill* Yeah, free... And Meanwhile Ramu-Chan sits lonely at her room...
I actually want to see how he reacts when he sees her using the same trick on another guy. He definitely needs to "punish" her...
*looks at the hotel room bill* Yeah, free... And Meanwhile Ramu-Chan sits lonely at her room...
I actually want to see how he reacts when he sees her using the same trick on another guy. He definitely needs to "punish" her...
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Masayoshiii
Gone
8 years ago
Romance is dead, all women are sluts, and this girl is a prime example of what women are like nowadays. Get used to it, boys!
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luinthoron
High Priest of Loli
8 years ago
I rarely find myself agreeing with your comments here, but I definitely do with this one. We always hear how men are said to be not willing to commit and only out to get some sex, but women these days are no different.
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EddieBeInBeddie
Tea, Coffee, Glances
8 years ago
I have no doubts your beliefs make that very real for you, and I hope you enjoy the reality it creates for you. I suppose I'll have to be content with enjoy the brilliant parts of you via your writing, rather than friendship.
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EddieBeInBeddie
Tea, Coffee, Glances
8 years ago
Ah, so you've trapped yourself in a web of absolutest dogma that supports your neurosis. Sorry to hear that, I suggest some Albert Ellis.
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EddieBeInBeddie
Tea, Coffee, Glances
8 years ago
Noticing the Hamao and Homunculus beside the Shindol in your library... suuuuuuurrre.
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EddieBeInBeddie
Tea, Coffee, Glances
8 years ago
I rather like the twist. We've had at least one really sweet 'save the jumper' toned vanilla this past year, so I don't mind something more cynical.
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Genryuusai
Memer
8 years ago
There are so many directions this story can go with this ending, usual quality story from MGMEE!
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8 years ago
Well I like this was straight to the point and didn't give that happy ending BS I always read. A nice real world pace is good once in a while
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EddieBeInBeddie
Tea, Coffee, Glances
8 years ago
Happy endings aren't innately 'false'... the concept of endings, besides death, are. Whatever ending you give a story is simply where you stopped following the characters. This ending suited the story. That's what makes it work.
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