Until Mimomi-san Falls
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Case and Point Example: all of “Maid Education”.
We don’t need to flash back to how Rurikawa’s family fell or how she ended up in her position because she behaves in such a way that we believe her when she says she was a part of a noble family, has pride, etc. meanwhile Poiman just exudes this whole: “I got this.” Attitude. Even when he’s being retardedly horny he’s got G status so it works when he forces his maid to pleasure him. Here? What is this? She folds just like that? Because of some vague debt her husband has? Really? Okay.
And the art is all right. Mimomi is cute but none of the guys have any appeal whatsoever. They ain’t even ugly to contrast the cuteness!
And tropes aside it’s jut not amazing set up, pay off or scenario. I can find better gangbang, better NTR and MOST DEFINITELY better “maid corruption” stories.
Come on, the whole point of a maid outfit is for it to be modest so it can be torn apart later in the story. What is this, amateur hour?
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Last Modified Fri Dec 13, 2024, 3:24 am
Anytime I come back to one of these sober it's like reading a drunk text. But I think I can repackage effectively:
Hentai needs to be Sexy, Intriguing and believable. In that order.
Sexy = top priority. IF the art is good enough I will suck down NTR like it's my favorite genre.
Intriguing = second priority. Again, if it's interesting enough I'll tolerate almost whatever. (Baby play is out, there are limits.)
Believable = last priority because who the fuck cares? When I start writing about why a scenario isn't believable, it's because the first two lines of defense, "sexy" and "intriguing" have both broken down.
That's the problem with this comic. Not sexy enough, not intriguing enough to keep me from making a stupid rant about how unbelivable the scenario is.
And now I need to take care of my horniness so I don't keep writing this tripe.
Last Modified Sun Dec 22, 2024, 7:21 am