7b54e1b00d1e994f955ee4d60 Posts
I'm fine doing it for free but money is nice. But ya my main objective wasn't to get money out of helping people. First of all I'm not a trained professional. So as much it is tempting, my consciousness won't allow it. I will need some time to think it over, 100 pages is a lot. But at the same time I'm very curious at what kind of story that is going to be like.
I will get around to it some time this week, working on Reno's Shawn of Fakku story at moment. Expect either a pm or a post, actually just choose one. But ya sorry, I'm going to be very busy this week with my intern and all so I will try my best to get to your story HT.
That was my 2nd thought Jericho, but I was hoping it wasn't about such a theme. Guess I'm just too naive and wish for a better ending..
I guess no one is requesting any random doodles, so I will request a doodle of your best interpretation of a Spy.
Spoiler:
Spoiler:
Spoiler:
Spoiler:
Another issue you tend to have is something that many tend to do, including myself. That is, you misplace your commas or add too many commas. Which in turn create fragments for the long thought you are trying to convey. One good example is this excerpt:
Spoiler:
You are very good with descriptive words. You may have forgotten at times to be a bit more descriptive, however the thought you are trying to convey to your readers is sent out. I encourage you to continue writing.
[Edit] Before anyone points I noticed errors in my own suggestions so went and fixed them. Having a headache while reading is really not a good thing to do.
I may be wrong, but from reading your poem, I can project an image where I'm being chased by people. This is my guess but at the end of your poem the protagonist (Me, since I was using a visual image while reading this) seems like he was able to escape but now, he can't return to the peaceful life he had.
I can if you want me to Zeph, my grammar isn't pro level but it will be enough to help people with common grammar mistakes. But I have a schedule since I will do an internship soon on top of my classes. So ya I can help when I got time.
Use third one, and I did point out that was more like a cheap way. But I like your new improvisation, it is more concise now.
when i became 16, I started to have more interest in this matter thanks to some of my school mates lol.
Was surprised to find people who like this group. I'm pure Korean btw, but haven't really listened to much K-Pop lately. But I like So Nyeo Shi Dae, I find the girls to be pretty and cute and I like their singing voices. But just curious how many of you non-Koreans actually understand what SNSD is singing?
Spoiler:
I use this sauce for almost any kind of food in my house lol. It's especially good with fried rice and noodles.
Spoiler:
I think they just trying to be more modern and shit. The new design looks simple and all but it looks modern to me.
One quick way you can make that thought complete but it will be poorly done is to add the words, "able to", after the the word "before".
