g-money Posts
ohoho. Another Good read! No typos (Awesome xD) and both the important and small, petty details were shown nicely. Descriptions were nice too. I'd vote you to be an Author for the first chapter (although it felt like a prologue... without Anthony's background), but i'd like to read more of your chapters before deciding.
Although Angelus was right in both of his suggestions.
“No, I’m being perfectly honest,” Jamie replied whilst shaking her head softly, yet still staring out the window with a melancholic look on her beautiful face.
Did you do that on purpose or you did you just forget to put on the commas?
Also, The whole "Each time someone new says something, it is supposed to begin another paragraph" is right too, but after reading your story... I dunno, it's up to you. Personally, it confused me quite a bit but I still understood what they were talking about (If you're a writer, i'm a reader xD).
So for now, I can't vote. hope to see more of your stories!
...I wonder where Damien is? He'd love to read a detailed story =)
Although Angelus was right in both of his suggestions.
flln723 wrote...
“I’m glad we’re in the same class this year,” she stated. You know, Jamie, if you sigh and stare out the window with that depressed face, you won’t seem very sincere at all about your being †˜glad’. Perhaps you should work a bit on your honesty?“No, I’m being perfectly honest,” Jamie replied whilst shaking her head softly, yet still staring out the window with a melancholic look on her beautiful face.
Did you do that on purpose or you did you just forget to put on the commas?
Also, The whole "Each time someone new says something, it is supposed to begin another paragraph" is right too, but after reading your story... I dunno, it's up to you. Personally, it confused me quite a bit but I still understood what they were talking about (If you're a writer, i'm a reader xD).
So for now, I can't vote. hope to see more of your stories!
...I wonder where Damien is? He'd love to read a detailed story =)
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Is this Jacobs doin again? Although you have to admit, the sound is catchy xD
Is this Jacobs doin again? Although you have to admit, the sound is catchy xD
Yeah. For some people who are waiting for the 5th chapter. I'm sorry.
Lots of projects needed to be done and (the saddest part) the quarter of my writing the 5th chapter.... well, I kinda lost the notebook in which I was writing it. BUT DON'T WORRY!
As soon as I find the notebook, I'm gonna continue it. If I don't.... i'm gonna have to start from scratch. :?
But with sem break here and the projects are done... I'm gonna start searching RIGHT NOW!
...well, tomorrow, since it's midnight already here. So for now, the 5th chapter is postponed until I write here again...
Again, i'm soo sorry :?
Chapter 5: ?% (uh-oh... better start searching now!)
PS
While the notebook was gone, I was imrpoving my drawing of Hands and Shoes/Feet. I'm still hopeless when it comes to eyes though...
Lots of projects needed to be done and (the saddest part) the quarter of my writing the 5th chapter.... well, I kinda lost the notebook in which I was writing it. BUT DON'T WORRY!
As soon as I find the notebook, I'm gonna continue it. If I don't.... i'm gonna have to start from scratch. :?
But with sem break here and the projects are done... I'm gonna start searching RIGHT NOW!
...well, tomorrow, since it's midnight already here. So for now, the 5th chapter is postponed until I write here again...
Again, i'm soo sorry :?
Chapter 5: ?% (uh-oh... better start searching now!)
PS
While the notebook was gone, I was imrpoving my drawing of Hands and Shoes/Feet. I'm still hopeless when it comes to eyes though...
3:23... lol xD
Smooth Indian Dancer!!!
I always wondered why the girl never ran while they were dancing, even in the original Thriller.
Smooth Indian Dancer!!!
I always wondered why the girl never ran while they were dancing, even in the original Thriller.
Togawa wrote...
When I was younger and were watching Detective Conan regularly, I was a bit in love with Ran Mori. :roll:Ahh, Metantei Conan. I still Love to watch that Anime...
Even as we speak right now, i'm waiting for the next episode and especially the 12th movie to come out xD
GourmetPrince wrote...
Uzumaki101 wrote...
GourmetPrince wrote...
2 Hours of strength training each day. Excluding Sunday.2 Hours of cardiovascular exercise a week.
Not only am I Mr. Vain, but also a personal trainer. I was planning on making a thread about this sooner or later, but you beat me to it! Though, I was planning to offer advice more so than poll about it.
Anywho, Great topic. I want to hear more!
For the record TS, "Strength toning" is a loose term and makes no actual sense. x]
Wait a minute... don't tell me... THAT'S YOU?! THE GUY IN THE PIC IS YOU?!?
Yes ma'm. I paid $159 for TWO body shots to submit to an agency.
Nearly $80 each. Worth it? You decide!
Quite xD
Also, I kinda lol'd when I first saw your pic. I thought "What the- where the hell did he get that pic? Does he like other guys?". Sorry man, my fault xD
GourmetPrince wrote...
2 Hours of strength training each day. Excluding Sunday.2 Hours of cardiovascular exercise a week.
Not only am I Mr. Vain, but also a personal trainer. I was planning on making a thread about this sooner or later, but you beat me to it! Though, I was planning to offer advice more so than poll about it.
Anywho, Great topic. I want to hear more!
For the record TS, "Strength toning" is a loose term and makes no actual sense. x]
Wait a minute... don't tell me... THAT'S YOU?! THE GUY IN THE PIC IS YOU?!?
FrozenAngel wrote...
Naruo maybe? xD noooo, CAN'T be that...WHAT?! 900-
uhh, let me repeat...
WHAT?! NARUO?! Noooo, It can't possibly be from NARUO!!! But it does starts with an "N" xD
hydrocortisone wrote...
g-money wrote...
Don't forget about the karaoke bars because they're a great facet of modern culture of Japan to experience. People who've gone to Japan without karaoking is missing out a lot because that's where a huge portion of the Japanese populace hangs out after school/work.don't let the scores from a karaoke machine encourages yourself to enter (insert a country name) idol,or any singing contest for that matter.
Words from experience?
Walking towards the University is an exercise? I dunno, it usually takes me around 15-30 min. But I sometimes take the long way and it takes me around an hour or so...
But I do exercise sometimes. A few Push ups, squat thrusts and Sit ups, 2-4 times a week is what I usually do. If i'm really in the mood to exercise, I do each of them towards 100 and above.
But here's the funny part. When i'm feeling crazy and and I wanna do exercises, I do the kind of indoor exercises that I see in History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi, Full Contact and other mangas.
Oh yeah. I also did Badminton and once won third place, doubles in a contest. After that, badminton became one of my fave hobbies, third to Surfing the net and Reading xD
Yeah, I know. It's hazardous and physically impossible.... some of them xD
But I do exercise sometimes. A few Push ups, squat thrusts and Sit ups, 2-4 times a week is what I usually do. If i'm really in the mood to exercise, I do each of them towards 100 and above.
But here's the funny part. When i'm feeling crazy and and I wanna do exercises, I do the kind of indoor exercises that I see in History's Strongest Disciple Kenichi, Full Contact and other mangas.
Oh yeah. I also did Badminton and once won third place, doubles in a contest. After that, badminton became one of my fave hobbies, third to Surfing the net and Reading xD
Yeah, I know. It's hazardous and physically impossible.... some of them xD
