9 years ago
And next time in the maiden series: their brother comes to look after them and because of his timid look the group thinks they could make him a sex toy like his sisters. What they don't know is that he is a Yakuza member and likes to rape his enemies...
I normally don't like Yaoi, but this chapter would go straight to my favorites!
I normally don't like Yaoi, but this chapter would go straight to my favorites!
9 years ago
I know what you mean! I was like "Great, 40 pages!!!" and one moment later I recognized the girl by her hairstyle...
9 years ago
I'm not a fan of genderbender stories but the preview pages and the promise of a succubus lured me into buying this...
9 years ago
The author thought "Shit, now I made him a rapist, better cover it up with her enjoying it..."
9 years ago
You know a artist is great if his first story is released for only 14 minutes and he already has 44 followers...
9 years ago
If you think about it, there are people who sell a kidney in order to get a phone so trading sex with your kind of childhood friend for a phone is not the worst idea...
9 years ago
I don't simply like the story because the girl is single (although this is a plus) or because I think it is right what he did (I know that was wrong). I like the story because I think it shows quite well that people would abuse powers if they had any and every reader would have done the same. Most people will say "No, I would use my powers to do good" but that's bullshit. You would abuse them, I would abuse them, most likely every reader of this story would abuse them. Men would abuse them. Women would abuse them. Maybe one person in a million wouldn't. But only maybe. And in regard what he could have done, he was pretty tame. He manipulated some poeple, but his main goal was to manipulate the girl he loves into thinking that she loves him too. And we only have one chapter of this, it still could turn out that the girl can't be manipulated by him and faked it in order to be together with him because she secretly is in love with him but is afraid of what her friends would think (or he could do a Killgrave and begin to kill people). And if we begin to argue about rape: have in mind that a lot of stories in your and mine favorites could be described as rape stories as one partner is relucant to do something, the other one does it nontheless and we like such stories because in the end both enjoy it and we hide behind the belief that this makes the forced act acceptable. (Damn, I better stop writing, I already sound like a stereotipic feminist - and I'm a guy...)
9 years ago
With such a cover and the words "mind control" in the title I was pretty sure that this chapter would be the mother of NTR...
Am I a jerk because I like what he did with his powers?
Am I a jerk because I like what he did with his powers?
9 years ago
Definitely! Let's just hope that the girl won't be stolen away by another guy with the same powers...
9 years ago
Well, techincally "The Great Escape" wouldn't be so far away from your idea as the girl in the story banged a lot of dudes...