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swordmanXIII
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Cinia Pacifica wrote...
swordmanXIII wrote...
Cinia Pacifica wrote...
No special plot-ideas sparked up yet?Well there are 3 ideas I have thought up.
1st
A poem about the freedom of summer and how a man wishes he had it but he is stuck at home with nothing but a laptop.
2nd: A otaku at the beach, The compare and contrasting of an average person and an otaku.
3rd: The wonders of a swimsuit. both male and female
Third option seems better. But you're the judge of your own ideas and writing.
I feel that I need to mix the 3rd Idea with the feel of freedom.
swordmanXIII
FAKKU's Breaker
high_time wrote...
swordmanXIII wrote...
Well that's just it. I don't now, I nee to pic a topic and describe it to make you feel like your seeing it with your own eyes, you can feel it, or taste it. Like one of the ideas I was thinking of doing was describing a swimsuit. I could first write about the feel, the difference between suits, and basic info of the suit. I just need to use the write word play to make you feel the image.
I hope this makes sense.
Ah yeah, I got the picture =)
For the images like that you can find many of them at Nosebleed lol~
Yeah but Hmm I might just go with that topic about swimsuit and mix it with a whole sense of freedom. You know the freedom of not haveing to where proper cloths and mix that with the freedom of summer.
swordmanXIII
FAKKU's Breaker
Cinia Pacifica wrote...
I see.Also, that's the reason why Tsuyo is a judge. He's good with poetry.
Yay I have a rival.
swordmanXIII
FAKKU's Breaker
high_time wrote...
swordmanXIII wrote...
Well I am going for more of a image based poetry. Not really a rhyming scheme. I just need to make a good image. Basically I just need to paint a picture with words. I just can't drown the reader in paint. Hmm..what kind of picture? Is it kinda related to anime artworks?
Well that's just it. I don't now, I nee to pic a topic and describe it to make you feel like your seeing it with your own eyes, you can feel it, or taste it.
Like one of the ideas I was thinking of doing was describing a swimsuit. I could first write about the feel, the difference between suits, and basic info of the suit. I just need to use the write word play to make you feel the image.
I hope this makes sense.
swordmanXIII
FAKKU's Breaker
Why so tired?
swordmanXIII
FAKKU's Breaker
high_time wrote...
When it's about poetry my mind automatically turns in towards Tsuyoshiro~
I'm pretty familiar with song lyrics though, many of these lyrics are also poetic. But it's not really my expertise, at least not as much as my tendencies on storywriting~
Well I am going for more of a image based poetry. Not really a rhyming scheme. I just need to make a good image. Basically I just need to paint a picture with words. I just can't drown the reader in paint.
swordmanXIII
FAKKU's Breaker
Cinia Pacifica wrote...
No special plot-ideas sparked up yet?Well there are 3 ideas I have thought up.
1st
A poem about the freedom of summer and how a man wishes he had it but he is stuck at home with nothing but a laptop.
2nd: A otaku at the beach, The compare and contrasting of an average person and an otaku.
3rd: The wonders of a swimsuit. both male and female
also
Azlle: yes the are quite...colorful but hey it pays Jacobs bills so oh well.
swordmanXIII
FAKKU's Breaker
I don't know about you guys but I am going to try my hand at poetry. Maybe a hybrid of short story and poetry. It just depends,I really don't know my demographic. Do I do comedy, emotional, tragedy. Plus I am facing people with different styles and forms and skill. I just don't know how to go about this.
swordmanXIII
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OH please let me haunt her. every day 7 days a week.
swordmanXIII
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Cinia Pacifica wrote...
'Sup Swordy?Hello, I am doing fine. Just you know trying to write about.......summer.
man I try to think of topics and I just think they might be a little cheesy or not make enough impact.
@AzelleFans : Hello nice to meet you. Don't mind me I am an old man who just got back from a trip of soul searching..... did not end well
swordmanXIII
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10/10.....damn
swordmanXIII
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okay.......
swordmanXIII
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So lets talk
swordmanXIII
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also blond, currently.
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fgd49
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An old war buddy.... still fights the good fight though.
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9/10
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Just burned me I think.
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Thinks I was part of the joke.
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Tsundere
