My Big Booty Succubus Clown a.k.a Ass-Clown
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This is an original character of mine. I was wondering what people though about her and if I feel like this character can get a following I might do a doujin based on her. So feel free to give me feedback negative or positive. Here is a little info from the character bio.
She goes by the alias of Ass-Clown. Her real name is Kelly, a high school slut who comes across a clown costume left behind by a succubus from the demon world. When Kelly dawns the costume she inherits supernatural succubus-like abilities. She uses her new getup to perform as an ass-clown doing various tricks with her ass. Some of the tricks she uses in her act include farting confetti, swallowing sausage links and pulling them out through her ass, using her big butt-cheeks like bongos to play music, and blow balloons with her bunghole. Kelly uses her new-found abilities to rake in profit as she is constantly booked for birthday and private parties due to her unorthodox method of entertainment.
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IvIajoi2n wrote...
I'm going to say this because i know someone else will at some point and i want to be the first to say it."Dat Ass"
That aside that's some clean lineart you have there, you should color it.
I'm glad you like it. I will be adding color and a background soon.
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Sabers Praetor
Unlimited Lewd Works
You asked for positive and negative feed back so here goes.
From what I can tell you can draw pretty decently but I do not find the character in question attractive at all it seems like you are going more for a dark feel so I guess being unattractive isn't all that bad but I find it unappealing.
From what I can tell you can draw pretty decently but I do not find the character in question attractive at all it seems like you are going more for a dark feel so I guess being unattractive isn't all that bad but I find it unappealing.
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Sorrow Bloodmist wrote...
You asked for positive and negative feed back so here goes.From what I can tell you can draw pretty decently but I do not find the character in question attractive at all it seems like you are going more for a dark feel so I guess being unattractive isn't all that bad but I find it unappealing.
Yeah I wanted her look to be a mix of freaky and sexy but I guess she just looks more like a freak lol Thanks for being honest. So I'm just curious, what about her do you find unappealing?
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Nightmares. Just Nightmares.
The art's good and all but it still gives me the creeps.
Try a Ty Lee ( the flexible girl from Avatar The last Airbender ) feel next time dude.
The art's good and all but it still gives me the creeps.
Try a Ty Lee ( the flexible girl from Avatar The last Airbender ) feel next time dude.
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Sabers Praetor
Unlimited Lewd Works
Well she looks like a clown which, save for the select few, are just plain creepy and/or ugly also she looks a bit overly muscular and that is a turn off for me. and last her ass seems a little weird particularly that line in the middle.
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Vjeko wrote...
what about her do you find unappealing?One word, clown. There are few (if any) men in the world who can find a clown sexy. Succubi themselves are designed to look both demonic and sexy. Clowns are just creepy. Add creepy to demonic and sexy and you end up loosing the sexy part, and you're just left with Demonic and Creepy.
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I wouldn't fap to it. Her legs look a little large, plus she's a clown... I hate clowns.
But my main problem with this is the legs...
Other than that, its very well drawn. You've got a lot of talent for that =)
But my main problem with this is the legs...
Other than that, its very well drawn. You've got a lot of talent for that =)
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oneshott wrote...
Vjeko wrote...
what about her do you find unappealing?One word, clown. There are few (if any) men in the world who can find a clown sexy. Succubi themselves are designed to look both demonic and sexy. Clowns are just creepy. Add creepy to demonic and sexy and you end up loosing the sexy part, and you're just left with Demonic and Creepy.
lol Yeah I figured her being dressed up as clown would make her take a hit in the sexiness department. Oh well I tried.
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Sabers Praetor
Unlimited Lewd Works
well the good thing is you are getting feed back if you like it I guess continue drawing it how you have been but if you are wanting to get people to like your work then you will need to take all the critique and use it to make your art more suitable to others interest the hard part is to keep it in your own style but I look forward to seeing what you may or may not do in the future.
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Sorrow Bloodmist wrote...
well the good thing is you are getting feed back if you like it I guess continue drawing it how you have been but if you are wanting to get people to like your work then you will need to take all the critique and use it to make your art more suitable to others interest the hard part is to keep it in your own style but I look forward to seeing what you may or may not do in the future.I prefer honest critiques so I don't take any offense to anything said about my work I just see what people think. I may post some of my other more traditional looking female characters on here sometime as this was a freaky experiment of mine. But that's the great freedom that comes with drawing.
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[font=Courier New] The line art is fantastic, and while I don't find it attractive, I think it's a very unique and odd premise you have going on there. It could definitely lead to several humorous scenes. I'm curious to see what else you have up your sleeve![/font]
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nagatohacker477 wrote...
[font=Courier New] The line art is fantastic, and while I don't find it attractive, I think it's a very unique and odd premise you have going on there. It could definitely lead to several humorous scenes. I'm curious to see what else you have up your sleeve![/font]Thanks. I'm still messing around with getting the line weight down. The clown is just an alter ego I was messing with for the original character. She is just an extremely depraved high school slut. I'm currently animating her in walk cycle in her normal outfit and doing some character design sheets for her. I'll post them in forum when I'm done if anyone wants to see.
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KanuUnchou wrote...
too ugly that's all I can say... So is the chick on your avatar so that makes two of us haha
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The style is fine actually. Just that the concept of clowns is always unsettling to say the least.
Still, it's done good though the thighs are a little huge :3.
Still, it's done good though the thighs are a little huge :3.