My Big Booty Succubus Clown a.k.a Ass-Clown
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Uhm... ok, let's check specifically what is wrong. Could you write a short auto biography of the character? that way it would be easier to find out what is missing and what not.
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Vjeko wrote...
C13R-66Y wrote...
You'r doing great, just that this is not something that fits my tastes.
I completely understand as I've seen subject matter I am not impressed bye but its execution is done well. I think if I do make a doujin series about this character it will most likely appeal to big butt fetishists.
You mentioned that my drawing style looks American. I always wondered about that since when I first started I was heavenly influenced by anime and manga and then adapted some other styles so I always wondered how people would categorize my stuff.
Your art style kind of reminds me of these badasses on CA.org.... If you're looking for a more diverse critique base i'd make an account over there and start poking around. They have some really solid folks there. Not that Fakku isn't FULL OF BADASS it's just there's going to be a much smaller spectrum covered here. I mean it is an Anime/Manga central site after all.
http://conceptart.org/?artist=hussar
http://conceptart.org/?artist=hurricane
http://conceptart.org/?artist=the+black+frog
Keep on trucking broseph.
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C13R-66Y wrote...
Uhm... ok, let's check specifically what is wrong. Could you write a short auto biography of the character? that way it would be easier to find out what is missing and what not.I do have a short bio but it's not much of a story other than she is an extremely slutty, depraved, sex crazed high school slut. I mostly just have all the nasty things she does in the bio. So if it was a comic series or animation I guess it would just focus on the various sexual things she does.
