[Locked] [Community Project V2] Shadowblaze Chronicles
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Spikedpikes wrote...
===Chapter 7: Now that's a feat:===OH NO! Well, it's too late to say "Chapter 6 isn't finished!" because it was already posted, but we still had some things to work on... I guess I'll PM Yanker and let him know it's his turn... Thank you for your chapter, and I'll take the time to review it thoroughly tomorrow once I've read it.
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LoliCreamPie wrote...
OH NO! Well, it's too late to say "Chapter 6 isn't finished!" because it was already posted, but we still had some things to work on... I guess I'll PM Yanker and let him know it's his turn... Thank you for your chapter, and I'll take the time to review it thoroughly tomorrow once I've read it.Yeah, yeah. I didn't rush it at all, I've been working on it since 'Chuck' PM'ed me chapter 6 a few days ago. Progress is progress, and I hate it when there's none. Sometimes you have to take risks to turn the wheels of progress.
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Spikedpikes wrote...
Yeah, yeah. I didn't rush it at all, I've been working on it since 'Chuck' PM'ed me chapter 6 a few days ago. Progress is progress, and I hate it when there's none. Sometimes you have to take risks to turn the wheels of progress.Fair enough... though, I'd ask that you respect the wishes of other people whose characters you're using, please. If they ask for some changes, please make them when you can.
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So, basically, was my chapter skipped over or something? I was waiting for reviews and stuff as well.
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JustGiveMeLove wrote...
So, basically, was my chapter skipped over or something? I was waiting for reviews and stuff as well.Oh, I'm very sorry, I did get ahead of myself there. I'll review your chapter as soon as I can. Then later, I'll review chapter 7.
On an important sidenote: Is there anyone willing to take over as project manager soon? I start college in one week, so I won't be able to manage/review chapters in the thread after I leave.
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Yanker wrote...
Chapter 8 – To Defeat a GodSpoiler:
Wow. While not much SEEMED to happen, it advanced the story by a TON. With so little text, you advanced the story several chapters in one. That was very good. Also, you gave us all more insight into Elgaraf's personality. I can't wait to see what he'll do when he meets the ice dragon.
It's pretty much set in stone at this point that Elgaraf isn't an arcane arts user, but is combat arts reliant, and will stick to his path, even if it's more difficult. You've shown he's aiming to become stronger, so strong that not even a god would stand against him.
Though, I won't spoil anything about the 'gods' of Erakuni.
Also, there are just a few typos I'd appreciate if they were fixed. 'Vastenroark', is actually 'Vastenarok'. No big deal though if you don't have time. There are other typos, but I understand you wrote this fairly quickly, so I don't really mind those.
As for the sad parts of this chapter - it's saddening that Elgaraf will part from the party this early on, but I do look forward to how much he's changed and improved when he meets Masayoshi next.
Despite the two slowing Elgaraf down, he did a lot for Marie and Masayoshi. Their relationship isn't the best, even just as acquaintances, so Elgaraf was a good moderator, a very good third party to step in when problems became too large or blown out of proportion.
This loss will surely affect their journey, I wonder how they'll make do? Though they're getting a (temporary) third party member during chapter 10, the majority of their journey for quite a while will be just the two of them.
Excellent work, and a very bold way to advance the story. I am pleased to say the only problems I had with this chapter was the minor typos, and it fits well into the story, especially since you're revealing more about what the common populace knows about what's going on.
Anyway, I'll let CH know it's his turn to write, and I hope to see more from you after you're on break from uni.
Your chapters are my favorite to read (even more so than my own). That's not to say other peoples' chapters are bad, most are pretty good, but none of us except you have been able to advance the story so well with a smaller chapter.
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So, like, what was the point of me swapping chapters if it ends up being my turn again so damn quickly? Bah, whatever. I'll write chapter 9 now. I'll take my time with it, since everyone else rushed their chapters.
Edit: I take back taking my time with it, though I didn't exactly rush it either. I spent several hours working on it already, it should be done tonight or early tomorrow.
Edit: I take back taking my time with it, though I didn't exactly rush it either. I spent several hours working on it already, it should be done tonight or early tomorrow.
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Complete Horizon wrote...
So, like, what was the point of me swapping chapters if it ends up being my turn again so damn quickly? Bah, whatever. I'll write chapter 9 now. I'll take my time with it, since everyone else rushed their chapters.Edit: I take back taking my time with it, though I didn't exactly rush it either. I spent several hours working on it already, it should be done tonight or early tomorrow.
Okay, sorry for it coming up so quick, and I look forward to reading your chapter. Also, since you posted in my other thread, I take it that you'll be the new project manager while I'm gone?
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LoliCreamPie wrote...
Okay, sorry for it coming up so quick, and I look forward to reading your chapter. Also, since you posted in my other thread, I take it that you'll be the new project manager while I'm gone?No worries, I would have probably lost the time to do it later anyway. Yes, I'll take over your project while you deal with college.
I'll make this post a placeholder, and all updates to the character list and chapter reservations will be kept in this post from now on.
Character List, updated at my convenience:
Note: All characters belong to their respective creators, I don't have time to update this list with every creator, so if you don't own the character, don't introduce them. For future chapters, anyway.
Vastenarok
Etheria Eradica
Evan Darfolza
Samantha Desmond Fitzgerald
Natalya Ludmilla
Emil Jörg Baumhauer
Huǒyà n Bà ofēngxuě
Hitobashira Masayoshi
Elgaraf Moonshade
Aremet
Andrew V. Lithum
Quarrala Solshine
Ikawa Rocan
Terack Norfel
Carant Wortun
Cardigan V. Lithum
Deon Crescent
Vicrosta Mandol
Chapter Reservations:
Prologue: @masayoshi
Chapter 1: @complete-horizon-4579257
Chapter 2: @yanker-7487918
Chapter 3: @justgivemelove-9645460
Chapter 4: @spikedpikes-7014049
Chapter 5: Masayoshi
Chapter 6: JustGiveMeLove
Chapter 7: Spikedpikes
Chapter 8: Yanker
Chapter 9: Complete Horizon
Chapter 10: Masayoshi
Chapter 11: @mylaststand-6103278
Chapter 12: @the-equalizer
Chapter 13: Spikedpikes
Chapter 14: Yanker
Chapter 15: Complete Horizon
Chapter(Anything ending in 0): Masayoshi
Chapter(Anything ending in 5 starting chapter 15): Complete Horizon
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The Equalizer wrote...
So, is it too late, or can a newcomer join the project? o.oFeel free. Do you want to write chapters, submit characters, or both? In any case, I recommend reading the first few posts in this thread to get a feel for what the project's about, and at least reading the prologue tonight if you can.
Welcome to the project, feel free to help out, or even just hang out.
In case you were wondering, I'm temporarily the head of the project, since the OP is going back to college for this term. He apparently will be going to college while working full-time, so it's understandable he needed help.
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Complete Horizon wrote...
The Equalizer wrote...
So, is it too late, or can a newcomer join the project? o.oFeel free. Do you want to write chapters, submit characters, or both? In any case, I recommend reading the first few posts in this thread to get a feel for what the project's about, and at least reading the prologue tonight if you can.
Welcome to the project, feel free to help out, or even just hang out.
In case you were wondering, I'm temporarily the head of the project, since the OP is going back to college for this term. He apparently will be going to college while working full-time, so it's understandable he needed help.
Okay, thanks a bunch for the info. I think I'll want to write, but make characters too. I'll read all that today, hopefully I'll be up to speed soon.
Also, how do I do the quote people without quoting myself?
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The Equalizer wrote...
Okay, thanks a bunch for the info. I think I'll want to write, but make characters too. I'll read all that today, hopefully I'll be up to speed soon.Also, how do I do the quote people without quoting myself?
To quote just the person you intend to, you start at the beginning of the text of the target person's post, and delete all the text before that, except for [quote="username"], because that's the start of the quote.
Also, if you want to multiquote, you can use the @user function, and it will show that @lolicreampie and @yanker-7487918 had been mentioned in a post by you in their notifications. Of course, you have to copy/paste their username from their profile page's url verbatim, for example, mine is 'complete-horizon-4579257', without the apostrophes, so you'd say @complete-horizon-4579257 if you wanted to quote me.
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Complete Horizon wrote...
To quote just the person you intend to, you start at the beginning of the text of the target person's post, and delete all the text before that, except for [quote="username"], because that's the start of the quote.Also, if you want to multiquote, you can use the @user function, and it will show that @lolicreampie and @yanker-7487918 had been mentioned in a post by you in their notifications. Of course, you have to copy/paste their username from their profile page's url verbatim, for example, mine is 'complete-horizon-4579257', without the apostrophes, so you'd say @complete-horizon-4579257 if you wanted to quote me.
Thanks for the tips! I've read the introductory posts, and I understand what I have to do, for the most part. May I reserve chapter 12?
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The Equalizer wrote...
Thanks for the tips! I've read the introductory posts, and I understand what I have to do, for the most part. May I reserve chapter 12?Of course. I'll write you in when I update my post from before.
Also, I just finished this:
<><>Chapter ä¹ - The Lonesome Hitobashira Masayoshi:<><>
Spoiler:
I pass the baton back to you, @lolicreampie so that you can finish chapter 10 before you have to return to school. I hope you succeed in all of your endeavors this term.
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Complete Horizon wrote...
I pass the baton back to you, @lolicreampie so that you can finish chapter 10 before you have to return to school. I hope you succeed in all of your endeavors this term.So... yeah. I totally get the 'already done' feeling now. The pressure's on. But, I'll persevere, and I'll get chapter 10 finished before next Monday ^_^.
Feel free to update the character list and reservation list, you can copy/paste what's already there to save some time if you wish ^_^.
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So, since we're already reserving chapters, can I reserve chapter 13? I want to get the wheels greased again, since I'm sure at least one of the three next in line will slow down progress.