Amague! Chapter 1 "Love is Dead"

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27 pages
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237 favorites
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Left to Right
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Reads left to right! Follow me on Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/TheDreamCatcherz
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Amague! Chapter 1 "Love is Dead" is part of the Amague! collection.
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Top Comments
A.I.
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 11:40 am)
+55 points
Thanks for uploading it Jacob! I'm the author guys, I'm really excited about this project and would love to be able to produce a chapter monthly(maybe even bi weekly ??) but that requires a lot of work and time, so please if you enjoy it and would love to support me on this journey just tell Jacob you want fakku to publish me!
NellAnder
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 2:41 pm)
+9 points
I like where this is going =)
Nice of you to put Fakku in.. Fakku ? OH MY GOD, FAKKUCEPTION. Yeah I know, that joke has gotten old.
Well, nevermind, keep up the good work =D
A.I.
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 2:58 pm)
+5 points
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Thanks! I really want to be able to focus myself 100 per cent on this and keep the chapters coming as fast as I can, that's why your support is important :)
GiganoRinnegan
(Wed Jul 22, 2015, 5:32 am)
+5 points
Welcome A.I.!

Please make yourself at home!

The Land of Fakku will always support you!

Gotta love where this is goin :D

YOU NEED JESUS!

Yes yes, we all do, stereotypical black cleaning lady. Yes we do.
GeneralLazerGuns
(Fri Jul 24, 2015, 6:26 am)
+4 points
One word to describe the manga...GREAT
MIKEZ007
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 2:20 pm)
+4 points
Lol I always worry when I have fakku open on my phone n someone needs to use it or takes it
tobyG123
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 5:53 pm)
+3 points
just made a Profile so this is my first time ever making a comment in FAKKU, but I've been reading FAKKU for a long time and I gotta say, I loved it and can't wait to read more

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A.I.
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 10:10 pm)
+2 points
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Then does that mean you created an account to comment and favorite/follow my story? Wow thanks man, I really appreciate it!
oppaipower
(Fri Jul 24, 2015, 12:12 pm)
+3 points
Cute. I want more. Also please tell me there will be lots of action later on!
A.I.
(Fri Jul 24, 2015, 12:40 pm)
+3 points
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That depends on what you mean with "lots of action" but either way I won't spoil a thing : o)
xHaruNatsu
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 3:05 pm)
+3 points
Hep, OP! It was a really good read! Please keep up the good work!
AquaTheFreak
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 3:52 pm)
+3 points
OMG I just loved it. The story line seems so interesting and the art is just fucking perfect (well, maybe the size of the girl in page 4 is a little bit weird). Anyway, this is great, it made me laugh xD
I'll be waiting for next chapter! :3
SpontaneousCombustion
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 6:05 pm)
+2 points
You did a good job with this, the dialogue could use a bit of cleaning up, but everything else is solid, and I'm interested to see more. Keep up the good work!
A.I.
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 6:26 pm)
+3 points
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Sorry about that...English isn´t my native language and I suck at proofreading even in my OWN native one haha. Feel free to point out the mistakes by PM or something though!
navya12
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 12:18 am)
+2 points
So far its pretty good and promising.
The only thing that kinda need improvement (in my opinion), is the text boxes/descriptions/thought bubbles seemed too long, like some of them could easily be shorten just from context clues. Overall very nice and interesting I hope to see more soon~ ^_^
animangafan342
(Fri Dec 11, 2015, 11:29 pm)
+2 points
Dude! one day i hope to be able to do what you do! looking forward to this series and i understand the struggle of working with deadlines.
A.I.
(Fri Dec 11, 2015, 11:59 pm)
+2 points
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thanks for the support! :)
mrtwitchy0
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 11:36 am)
+8 points
Holy shit this is actually super cute so far.
Recent Comments
someonehotter
(Fri Jun 17, 2016, 5:32 pm)
+2 points
This is really great! I didn't know there was still free content on here. keep up the great work! :)
A.I.
(Sat Jun 18, 2016, 9:55 am)
+1 points
Thank you!! :)
Ixel
(Fri Jan 1, 2016, 7:58 pm)
+2 points
This is still free? Hallelujah! I just found why I researched on google randomly.
luinthoron
(Sat Dec 19, 2015, 3:49 pm)
+2 points
She hates all humans? I like her already. *nods*
Cookiecolor
(Thu Aug 20, 2015, 1:09 pm)
+3 points
Oh I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
LordSeieki
(Sun Aug 9, 2015, 9:21 pm)
+3 points
Nice job man! Keep up the good work!
Nekkoking
(Fri Jul 31, 2015, 12:57 am)
+4 points
"Huuh??? You mean you nevah heard da word of Jesus??"

Lol was it wrong that I spend ten minutes laughing at that?
milkes
(Wed Jul 29, 2015, 8:20 pm)
+2 points
great artwork! also liked seeing Porter Robinson in there
Tsujoi
(Tue Jul 28, 2015, 12:43 pm)
+3 points
Always nice to see original content put up!
A.I.
(Tue Jul 28, 2015, 5:06 pm)
+1 points
nice to see a mod here! did you read it? what do you think?
Gamer squared
(Tue Jul 28, 2015, 12:01 am)
+3 points
I like where this is going. Keep going! We need more of this!
ZoRobin_for_the_win
(Thu Jul 23, 2015, 7:55 am)
+3 points
Ok so...I officially created an account so I could fave this! From the cover I could tell it was gonna be sweet adorable vanilla! But it turns out it's also real funny!! Love it!
"FAKKU, this needs to be publish!!" *screams at computer*
A.I.
(Thu Jul 23, 2015, 8:18 am)
+2 points
Wow, thanks a lot for creating an account specifically to comment and fav my stuff, I really appreciate the feedback! :)

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Dread151
(Wed Jul 22, 2015, 11:46 pm)
+2 points
Non-H tease!
A.I.
(Thu Jul 23, 2015, 12:59 am)
+2 points
(☝ ՞ਊ ՞)☝ (ી(΄◞ิ౪◟ิ‵)ʃ)
Dread151
(Wed Jul 22, 2015, 11:43 pm)
+2 points
Finally a new art style. Fakku art diversity always amazes me. :)
Fail2stahp
(Wed Jul 22, 2015, 8:49 pm)
+2 points
I liked the whole story, how the girls personality is still, same for the guys. He's a mostly pure guy, with some perverted desires (hentai) that truly wants a clear look to the girl he likes. The girl herself seems to only like Fei because he's honest and a nice person (starving dog). Just as long as you don't try to throw any overused cliches in, and keep it your own. But do please keep it ecchi, or make it hentai. I don't like non-h but ecchi is fine. As is, the story itself so far is great so I'll keep reading anyway.
MissM
(Wed Jul 22, 2015, 10:48 am)
+4 points
Oh my god, that cleaning lady hahahaha
I love the backgrounds (odd detail, I know, but it sets it apart from a lot of amateur* work)!
Since you've said English is not your native language (and there are a few points where that can be seen, but it's not a major detractor from the story), I'd be happy to humbly offer my services if you ever need a native-speaking English grammar checker/proofreader.


*I mean amateur in the French meaning of the word, i.e. "non-paid professional" or "skilled hobbyist," not the English way which usually has a somewhat negative connotation that implies that the subject is a beginner
A.I.
(Thu Jul 23, 2015, 3:03 am)
+2 points
Thanks for the offer :) feel free to pm me any grammar mistakes you may find.
Blackmagic666
(Wed Jul 22, 2015, 12:23 am)
+3 points
I have to say this is very promising, I really like the art style. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

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Thanatos616
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 5:11 pm)
+3 points
I am genuinely interested in seeing where this story is going. I myself like to dance and I'm happy to see that it's going to be a main subject for once. Keep up the good work!
gdw1999
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 4:55 pm)
+3 points
Should this be non-h
Robin997
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 11:55 am)
+2 points
Porter Robinson? Can't blame her. I wouldn't be able to hold myself, either. I got so hard that I'll have to listen to the whole album and all the remixes now.
A.I.
(Wed Jul 22, 2015, 2:15 am)
+3 points
Good catch!

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ZikenDendou
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 9:58 am)
+2 points
lmao...the descriptions...i guess there still n00bs who've just first read these books...


that comment i put? ignore it. appearly, the artist is into JPN styles manga, but made it from left to right...and i can't tell my left from my right...:(

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LinkOfKalos
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 12:00 am)
+3 points
I like this
AndSoSheFades
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 11:55 pm)
+4 points
I really like this style. The proportions seem more... honest? I'm not sure, but I like it!
Maekuo
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 10:01 pm)
+2 points
I noticed right away from the art style this was probably gonna be a gem. And I was right. xD Ugh I'm still so hype from this, its just the right amount of eroticism, humor, and plot to keep me interested.

For the love of god if you ever need help with anything -ANYTHING- don't be afraid to ask. If you ever plan on making any bigger projects after this or anything that is. Haha. And very much looking forward to more work. YOU earned yourself a sub my friend.
A.I.
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 12:50 am)
+3 points
Thanks a lot! I have other stories I plan on continuing some day(you can read them on batoto or mangafox) but I want this one to be a big project, that's why I need support!(so I can keep a consistent update sheddule and make this my job so I can concentrate 100 percent on it!) I don't want to spoil anything but the story will be much more complex than people are probably expecting, and will be a mix of slice of life and fantasy/supernatural.
Xenon
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 8:20 pm)
+3 points
Wow, I actually love the character design. Very cool and a clever title! I can see the inspiration for it. Seeing that the Amague is an Argentinian dance and the other references to Southern American culture like a latino Christian/Catholic cleaning lady, and our MC's name, I want to say I found this very intriguing. I hope to see more of this on here in the future. Best of luck and I hope you will continue to get better and share those improvements with us.

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A.I.
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 12:57 am)
+2 points
I love when readers pick up the details of the story, but I don't want to spoil the fun for both parties so I will let you guys discuss it without saying anything :3
And I'm really glad you mention the character design, I really like it too.
G0t0man
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 7:16 pm)
+3 points
His expression on page 13 was seriously funny
fakku user 69
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 7:12 pm)
+3 points
Is it just me or is there somenthing with his name?



Ok being honest this is really really good and i want MORE...


GIVE ME MORE, MOR..."cough"...


Sorry about that.



Pleas keep on with that GOOD work ;)

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A.I.
(Tue Jul 21, 2015, 12:52 am)
+1 points
I laughed a lot reading this comment xD thanks for the support man! ;)
showmeyourbean
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 5:46 pm)
+4 points
Substance!!! Sweet, delicious substance!!! Its been so long since a Ive found a story that attempts to provide an actual story!
ManlyMinataur
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 5:17 pm)
+2 points
I love your expression work!
TheGermanMaverick
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 4:21 pm)
+3 points
Nice begginning for a story, even though the dialogue seems a little stiff at some points, but still, nice art, good job with the clothes, expressions and details. you can really tell you put a lot of effort in this. looking forward to the next chapter!
RobbinHood16
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 4:19 pm)
+2 points
Ah Man! This is an awesome story! The art work is awesome too. I would love to read more of this story.
AssasinZAssasin
(Mon Jul 20, 2015, 3:49 pm)
+2 points
Well, that was a nice FAKKU drop in there, on his phone.
I like the protagonist already.
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