I’m of two minds on this series. While I like the NTR and hypnosis elements, and the fact that Deep Valley has unique and interesting art style; I’m not a big fan of how wordy the stories are, or why the author felt the need to add all this reproductive terminology. I mean, I’m here to read hentai, not to get a biology lesson!
I enjoyed the first chapter and now I’m a big fan of the artist! Also if you haven’t read my title for this review you have been warn this series is for anyone who enjoys NTR so no vanilla here! Over 70 pages of great sex scenes!
Great Continuation of Deep Valley's Dick Note Series
This work is a sequel to Deep Valley's first Dick Note work. It's a loosely a parody of the premise of Death Note, but instead of death, the person whose name is written in the notebook gets dicked. This doujin's heroine is a daughter of a famous family. Despite being a virgin, her kimono does little to hide her busty body and she quickly falls to carnal pleasure. I really like how her kimono was used in the manga to emphasize her figure. The manga also has a subplot where she's cheating on her fiance. There's also a shot of her hymen in the manga if that's something you're into. I feel like the art is good albeit a little on the rough side at times, but the story and dialogue is well done. There is a lot of dialogue and narration in this work compared to your average doujin, so that could be a positive for you. Hopefully we'll get a another sequel soon.
I love the cartoony elements of this story. Reminds me of a less serious version of AIUE OKA's work. The boyfriend is so oblivious I could not stop laughing. Hope part 3 is translated soon. Keep up the good work.
Ever wanted to see the sakura flower made of flesh and BLOOD?.....sorry. I am not lying however. The heroine has a hymen in the shape of the sakura flower. You can forget all the NTR, Video Recording, Engagement, Etc. The Hymen is the real highlight.