Pure Love Advantage

Yep, it totally is. Will try and fix that. Thanks!

Yeah, it was great after it got going, but that was a _really_ rocky start. It was clear that she liked him, but his reaction seemed to be pretty much like he'd just remembered that she was a girl, so he decided to have sex with her now that the girl he wanted was unavailable. So, not only did he go after her just because the girl he actually wanted wasn't available, it's like he hadn't even been aware that she was a girl before that. But I guess that it works out for her in the end, and past that nonsense, it was really sexy.

It's not just you I also felt the same after their first kiss.

The two first pages that usually set up the relationship of the main characters was more spent showing how this story tied to another one written years ago. That threw the rest of the pacing off.

However, the creator needs to get paid to make a living. This story probably would more time than it's worth to fix, or there is another project more meaningful or valuable the author wants to work on.