Another Debut Work here ... APPROVED!
8 years ago
Behold the Tsundere x Tsundere Mating Ritual ..... AND IT IS GLORIOUS!
8 years ago
"POW - RIGHT IN THE KISSER!" End-Result: Homunculus Wins; FLAWLESS VICTORY ... LOVE-TALITY!

APPROVED!
8 years ago
(insert jarring musical chord) "No-One Expects The Homunculus Goodness!" (those who recognize the sentence will understand)

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One Word makes an appropriate comment on this IMHO ... "DAYUM!"
DAT ENDING was truly SOMETHING COMPLETELY DIFFERENT!

P.S. Just add "Vocational" to the title of this work = Instant Masterpiece.
8 years ago
All Together Now, With Feeling:

"You 'n' Me, Baby, ain't nothing but mammals, so let's do it like they do on the Discovery Channel." (repeat ad infinitum)
8 years ago
It's possible that somewhere out there IRL, a world-renowned adult film star is probably giving a manly salute as if to say: "Good Work, Taiki-kun."
Upright Morals Committee Member during school hours; anal-addicted, potty-mouthed slut outside that time.

There Can Be Only One way to describe all that ... "DAYUM!!!!!
Wild delinquent & (a-hem) top-heavy senpai appears and in response to young protagonist invoking "rescue romance" flag, abandons her delinquent ways and wears a maid outfit for him. What should he do now?

THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE Thing to do, young protagonist ... MARRY HER (you Lucky Bastard)!
Haruka-san provided "Ultimate Motivation" ... IT'S SUPER-EFFECTIVE!!!!!
Perfect Combination ..... APPROVED!
... so long as (according to her dialogue) the man remains a loser.

... Wait, What?
8 years ago
Better than just "Over Time" ..... in the words of Ah-nuld: "IT'S PAYBACK TIME!" (under breadth, Abe-kun, you lucky bastard {grr}).

... wait, what? "Etou-Senpai" ... did our author do a shout-out to a character from "Ichiban Ushiro No Daimaou"?
8 years ago
Page 2 - call it the action of a Higher Power imposing "Divine Punishment" for Futayama-kun's lecherous ways.

By the end, even after his almost beast-like advances, Harue-san is still willing to pamper him (lucky bastard).

Conclusion ..... APPROVED!
My feelings towards this can be summed up in one word ... DAYUM!!!!!
8 years ago
Put Simply ... "IT'S GOOD TO BE THE CHILDHOOD FRIEND/MANAGER!" (under breadth, the Lucky Bastard).
8 years ago
Protag-kun gets not just one wife, but two ... SUPER JACKPOT!
DAYUM!!!!! ... entrapment aside, It's Good To Be The Stay-At-Home Dad.
8 years ago
Like the male protagonist in a classic h-manga story said: "My Virginity ... I Bid Thee Farewell.", ... and he never looked back thereafter. And it seems that the girl ... wait for it ... APPROVES of his "little friend", seeing what is depicted in the last panel of Page 18.

(under breadth: Lucky Bastard {grr}).