Let's make a Hmanga!
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Freakychan wrote...
MrCantStopTheRobot wrote...
Please note that some of the pictures in this thread no longer work. You oughtta fix that sheet.
That issue is because of Photobucket being retarded and not allowing NSFW pictures. If you check out my gallery on www.mama-chan.deviantart.com I can make a little folder for just this stuff. If that helps anything. Other then that i'm not so sure what sites to upload that kind of business on. :P
What you need to do is use imgbam :)
SeriousSAM wrote...
i just ran through it fast they're pretty terrible :/page 6
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MrCantStopTheRobot wrote...
Ha, actually I love it when the guys are adonises. Having a good body is important to me, so I identify more with guys who have really nice bodies, both above and below the belt. But aye, I'll give him an average build, aside from those epic abs you gave him.Mind if I make his cock a bit oblate towards the end? Those look like they're under more tension to me, which is fuckin hot~
Keep the emo haircut! I'll tone it down a little, but I like the idea of him having some distinguishing characteristic. And tchyea, sure, like the shy emo guys don't get any sex. I was jealous of those fuckers for a couple years before I found my own stride, don't be telling me the ostensibly shy emo-types don't get any.
MANNNN, I totally love her legwear. It's stockings underneath socks! But okay, it's no biggy. I'll give her nothing but boring old stockings. :P I'm more relieved you didn't say anything about her epic long horse-ankle. XD
Your hair color preference is killing me. I love my plum~! I'll post a sheet that has all kinds of crazy color scheme changes, and we'll talk about that. I'm pretty sure that changing *just* her hair color would look bad, so something more drastic is in order. Thank you hue/saturation tool!
First of all, welcome to the team! I think everything is good, just 2 things. I find that the eyelashes are a little too hairy and it's all up to you guys since you're the drawers but i find the best hair color is dirty blond
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The new guys stuff is good. I tried making the backgrounds a little more detailed this time around. Thanks SAM for the detailed blueprint of how the stairwell should look. It sure did come in handy.
P.S. I find that my concepts are the worst out of everyone else. I will keep drawing them but now backgrounds will be given more attention this time around.
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BlackShogunFox wrote...
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P.S. I find that my concepts are the worst out of everyone else. I will keep drawing them but now backgrounds will be given more attention this time around.
I dissagree, i think yours are just as good and think it's all coming along great :)
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Thanks BlackShogunFox, and thanks Krakis. Even if you did nothing but background wireframes, Fox, it'd be a big help and a load off of the other artists down the line. I daresay you have a better grasp of perspective than Freakychan. XD
Here's my guy-sketch. I realized, both of Freakychan's name suggestions can fit. I hereby christen this guy Jean Travis. Jean-Fakkin-Travis.
http://trickyrobot.com/jean_ref.jpg
Foreseeable points of contention may be the shading under his eyes. I gave him heavy looking eyes to signify his shyness, but if it's too much, I'll consider changing it. If multiple people complain, I'll definitely change it.
I'll post differently colored schemes tomorrow. Once we have decided the hues, I'll spruce up the character sheets with a lot more information and draw a few more poses.
Cheers blokes.
Here's my guy-sketch. I realized, both of Freakychan's name suggestions can fit. I hereby christen this guy Jean Travis. Jean-Fakkin-Travis.
http://trickyrobot.com/jean_ref.jpg
Foreseeable points of contention may be the shading under his eyes. I gave him heavy looking eyes to signify his shyness, but if it's too much, I'll consider changing it. If multiple people complain, I'll definitely change it.
I'll post differently colored schemes tomorrow. Once we have decided the hues, I'll spruce up the character sheets with a lot more information and draw a few more poses.
Cheers blokes.
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I dissagree, i think yours are just as good and think it's all coming along great :)
Thanks man but I just find SAM's drawings have such a... I do not know what it is but this guy has done this a few times during his current life.
The new guy has a site and is extremely good at mixing two things together. (Spike singing I'm to sexy for my shirt pure win. Why is this not a meme yet?
EDIT: Nice concept MrCantStopTheRobot. So the guys name is Jean Travis? Did I miss the girls name as well?
I like the new concept so far looking forward to the girls concept update from you.
Krakis your writing is damn good. I can imagine exactly what I want the panel to look like.
Freaky's drawings and color scheme are all around damn good.
P.S. Sweet Jebus I like the way this is turning out.
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MrCantStopTheRobot wrote...
Thanks BlackShogunFox, and thanks Krakis. Even if you did nothing but background wireframes, Fox, it'd be a big help and a load off of the other artists down the line. I daresay you have a better grasp of perspective than Freakychan. XDHere's my guy-sketch. I realized, both of Freakychan's name suggestions can fit. I hereby christen this guy Jean Travis. Jean-Fakkin-Travis.
http://trickyrobot.com/jean_ref.jpg
Foreseeable points of contention may be the shading under his eyes. I gave him heavy looking eyes to signify his shyness, but if it's too much, I'll consider changing it. If multiple people complain, I'll definitely change it.
I'll post differently colored schemes tomorrow. Once we have decided the hues, I'll spruce up the character sheets with a lot more information and draw a few more poses.
Cheers blokes.
BlackShogunFox wrote...
I dissagree, i think yours are just as good and think it's all coming along great :)
Thanks man but I just find SAM's drawings have such a... I do not know what it is but this guy has done this a few times during his current life.
The new guy has a site and is extremely good at mixing two things together. (Spike singing I'm to sexy for my shirt pure win. Why is this not a meme yet?
EDIT: Nice concept MrCantStopTheRobot. So the guys name is Jean Travis? Did I miss the girls name as well?
I like the new concept so far looking forward to the girls concept update from you.
Krakis your writing is damn good. I can imagine exactly what I want the panel to look like.
Freaky's drawings and color scheme are all around damn good.
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BlackShogunFox wrote...
So the guys name is Jean Travis? Did I miss the girls name as well? Thanks a bunch again. Glad you browsed through everything. :)
The name isn't official until we get everyone's input, of course. I defer somewhat to Freakychan since she was the project's progenitor.
If we did a Momoka themed project, I'd give some credit and deference to Crimson875, since he posted the idea in the thread.
I figure the girl doesn't have an official name until we decide on her design. I chose "Plum" due to her purple hue (and also because I love plums). Freakychan suggested the name "Scarlet," though, so we'll see. I'm not a huge fan of Scarlet, but meh it's all up in the air until we choose a hue.
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MrCantStopTheRobot wrote...
BlackShogunFox wrote...
So the guys name is Jean Travis? Did I miss the girls name as well? Thanks a bunch again. Glad you browsed through everything. :)
The name isn't official until we get everyone's input, of course. I defer somewhat to Freakychan since she was the project's progenitor.
If we did a Momoka themed project, I'd give some credit and deference to Crimson875, since he posted the idea in the thread.
I figure the girl doesn't have an official name until we decide on her design. I chose "Plum" due to her purple hue (and also because I love plums). Freakychan suggested the name "Scarlet," though, so we'll see. I'm not a huge fan of Scarlet, but meh it's all up in the air until we choose a hue.
I would gladly help crimson875 however I have alot on my plate. I am doing animations, comics, third dimensional renders and games,concept art, image manipulation, sound designs and etcetera. As for the name of the girl. Well lets call her Plum Scarlett or Scarlett Plum.
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Color swaps for your perusal:
http://trickyrobot.com/color_test.jpg
FF-2400 was a joke. I don't expect anybody to pick her. But if you do, you're awesome.
Revised Jean:
http://trickyrobot.com/beefy_jean_ref.jpg
Haha, yeah I was thinking the same thing, Fox. Scarlett Plum sounds nice to me. I'll be sure to include that extra "t" at the end.
http://trickyrobot.com/color_test.jpg
FF-2400 was a joke. I don't expect anybody to pick her. But if you do, you're awesome.
Revised Jean:
http://trickyrobot.com/beefy_jean_ref.jpg
Haha, yeah I was thinking the same thing, Fox. Scarlett Plum sounds nice to me. I'll be sure to include that extra "t" at the end.
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I was looking at the colors and I honestly can't decide. I like them all x-x! Maybe we should just have a vote on it or something? I don't know but I know that Its just insanely hard for me too choose out of those color schemes.
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Freakychan wrote...
Maybe we should just have a vote on it or something?Hyar hyar hyar, myess.
Actually yeah I was thinking a vote would be ideal. (Now watch as we get an even split between three colors! XD) Anyway I love using the poll function in projects like this, because I'm always worried about marginalizing other team members or getting marginalized myself.
What do you think of the beefed up Jean? And are you okay with calling him Jean Travis, and with calling the girl Scarlett Plum?
I like yer sketch, SAM. Is good. I see you toned down his hair even more, save for the sideburns.
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Yeah liking the beefed up jean, and I think the names are great. xD It's a good compromise. As far as the poll goes, should we actually put a poll on the thread or just have people say their favorites?
Forgot to say, I do like Sam's hairstyle. Maybe we should go with that?
Forgot to say, I do like Sam's hairstyle. Maybe we should go with that?
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T.T alright. I'll tone down the hair even more. What a bummer. XD
I'm not going to wait for krakis and Fox to weigh in since it's a quick alteration and I imagine they'd agree with you and Sam. Also I do keep old versions.
I love polls, and would set it up myself, but it might be quicker to just have us post.
I'll post my final revisions and character sheets once we have four or five votes to decide our heroine's hue.
I'm not going to wait for krakis and Fox to weigh in since it's a quick alteration and I imagine they'd agree with you and Sam. Also I do keep old versions.
I love polls, and would set it up myself, but it might be quicker to just have us post.
I'll post my final revisions and character sheets once we have four or five votes to decide our heroine's hue.
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It's funny because most of the pages are going to be black and white anyway, I assume. Unless you guys always wanted and assumed it'd be full color. Up to y'all.
I vote for Scarlet Plum.
I really like FF2400 but I think that hair color should be reserved for a wilder/kinkier/edgier character. Like an enthusiastic masochist. :drool:
(Although my heart truly lies with Original Plum <3)
Also I believe this song adequately summarizes our project:
I vote for Scarlet Plum.
I really like FF2400 but I think that hair color should be reserved for a wilder/kinkier/edgier character. Like an enthusiastic masochist. :drool:
(Although my heart truly lies with Original Plum <3)
Also I believe this song adequately summarizes our project:
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I vote for Scarlett Plum. Also, I really don't mean to sound like a jerk when I say this but for the female character, I find that the eyes that freaky drew on the girl sketch are more attractive, but the rest of mricantstoptherobot is really nice. I prefer SAM's male character over mricantstoptherobot's. It's not that yours aren't good or anything though :)
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It's no offense. I like to know everyone's preferences, even if it's not a perfect match with mine.
Hmm. The way I see it, my eyes are sexy/aggressive, Freaky's eyes are accommodating/friendly. I could easily change the eyes if it's necessary.
While I like SAM's drawing on its own, I find the proportions too child-like for a male vanilla H-mag star, and I prefer more detail or definition in the face.
Hmm. The way I see it, my eyes are sexy/aggressive, Freaky's eyes are accommodating/friendly. I could easily change the eyes if it's necessary.
While I like SAM's drawing on its own, I find the proportions too child-like for a male vanilla H-mag star, and I prefer more detail or definition in the face.
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MrCantStopTheRobot wrote...
It's no offense. I like to know everyone's preferences, even if it's not a perfect match with mine.Hmm. The way I see it, my eyes are sexy/aggressive, Freaky's eyes are accommodating/friendly. I could easily change the eyes if it's necessary.
While I like SAM's drawing on its own, I find the proportions too child-like for a male vanilla H-mag star, and I prefer more detail or definition in the face.
I agree with you however SAM's drawings add a nice comic relief style to the overall feel of this manga. That and he knows how to make the pages have a manga feel to them. My pages so far have a very heavy comic influence to them which is bad.