Let's make a Hmanga!
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Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote...
Hi there guys, I can't help much but here's the font that you should use...Anime Ace 2.0 <- This one is for main use in the manga
Blambot Custom <- Usually I use this for shouting bubbles
Mouth Breather <- Another one for shouting
Damn Noisy Kids <- Will be useful for those "I'M CUMMING!!" bubbles
You can download them all for free in the creator's site ( http://blambot.com/ )
Wow thanks! :D You're awesome for the help!
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hi, i thought i'll help by giving of how i see the story so far
*note that i turned it into more of a comedy if anything :/
for page one.
i see that its after school and it shows the school and the text is just the main character talking to himself on why nice guys cant get girls and he's at his locker
on page two.
he notices the girl and she is introduced and he talks about how amazing she is. then realizes she's crying
page three.
he approaches the girl to console her and asks 'why are you crying'. she then starts crying even more explaining she just broke up with her BF. the guy is happy at that development. she says she gave him everything to that the guy questions what she means
page four.
it flashbacks to the crazy sex she had with her BF in montage as she explains what they did. the guy is dying on the inside from hearing this and the girl is just mad
for the other pages i didnt like the dialogue. it felt there was to much just to lead into the sex scene :/
*note that i turned it into more of a comedy if anything :/
for page one.
i see that its after school and it shows the school and the text is just the main character talking to himself on why nice guys cant get girls and he's at his locker
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on page two.
he notices the girl and she is introduced and he talks about how amazing she is. then realizes she's crying
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page three.
he approaches the girl to console her and asks 'why are you crying'. she then starts crying even more explaining she just broke up with her BF. the guy is happy at that development. she says she gave him everything to that the guy questions what she means
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page four.
it flashbacks to the crazy sex she had with her BF in montage as she explains what they did. the guy is dying on the inside from hearing this and the girl is just mad
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for the other pages i didnt like the dialogue. it felt there was to much just to lead into the sex scene :/
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SeriousSAM wrote...
hi, i thought i'll help by giving of how i see the story so far*note that i turned it into more of a comedy if anything :/
for page one.
i see that its after school and it shows the school and the text is just the main character talking to himself on why nice guys cant get girls and he's at his locker
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on page two.
he notices the girl and she is introduced and he talks about how amazing she is. then realizes she's crying
Spoiler:
page three.
he approaches the girl to console her and asks 'why are you crying'. she then starts crying even more explaining she just broke up with her BF. the guy is happy at that development. she says she gave him everything to that the guy questions what she means
Spoiler:
page four.
it flashbacks to the crazy sex she had with her BF in montage as she explains what they did. the guy is dying on the inside from hearing this and the girl is just mad
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for the other pages i didnt like the dialogue. it felt there was to much just to lead into the sex scene :/
loving the highlighter drawings. XD But yeah, I do think you have a waaaay nicer layout.
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Yup...SAM's layout is better.
Okay SAM you sketch, I draw more detail into layout, and Freaky can change what she wants too better compensate what she wants it too look like...
Got dammit does that mean we are gonna have to strart over?
P.S. Regardless of the circumstances I will keep drawing layouts as well along with SAM.
Okay SAM you sketch, I draw more detail into layout, and Freaky can change what she wants too better compensate what she wants it too look like...
Got dammit does that mean we are gonna have to strart over?
P.S. Regardless of the circumstances I will keep drawing layouts as well along with SAM.
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I also attempted to do this twice and it failed due to lack of interest :D
And we do need user-created submissions here at Fakku.
And we do need user-created submissions here at Fakku.
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変態 wrote...
I also attempted to do this twice and it failed due to lack of interest :DAnd we do need user-created submissions here at Fakku.
So true your help and input would be greatly much appreciated...
So without further to do here is layout page seven(cannot wait to see what Freaky and SAM do with this...)
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Im back now, and I'm really happy that this is going so well. FreakyChan and BlackShogunFox, you guys are doing really well on the drawings. It's coming out, just like I imagined it. I find that the new layout is really working well, and it's looking great in page 7. I took SAM's advice (thanks a lot for it btw :)) and I wrote up some descriptions of the characters. Tell me what you think. I'm still working on the scripts and il be posting them by the end of the weekend, latest.
Guy:
Girl:
Best Friend:
Guy:
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i rough drafted the two characters
guy
girl
here's my retangle page layout thing i use to keep me in track of the pages in book form.
im going on page 5 (use the marker numbers) so when we turn the page to page 6 i want the sex scene to start. im thinking of starting with a BJ and them still talking then to penetration. but i still need to figure out page 5 first with all the dialogue
guy
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girl
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here's my retangle page layout thing i use to keep me in track of the pages in book form.
im going on page 5 (use the marker numbers) so when we turn the page to page 6 i want the sex scene to start. im thinking of starting with a BJ and them still talking then to penetration. but i still need to figure out page 5 first with all the dialogue
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Here's the next part: I started with a bj and continued to penetration. Il continue the penetration over the next few scenes, then il introduce the best friend and they'll have the threesome. Happy to hear feedback :)
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SAM and krakis this is good stuff let us keep drafting and make more concepts and layouts. Freaky is gonna flip when she sees this!
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Yeah actually this is pretty fucking awesome! I just got over a temp of like 103 or something insane. I pretty much slept through this last week, (After I got fired) soooo! I will go and start on this tomorrow morning and see what we can get done! :D
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Freakychan wrote...
Yeah actually this is pretty fucking awesome! I just got over a temp of like 103 or something insane. I pretty much slept through this last week, (After I got fired) soooo! I will go and start on this tomorrow morning and see what we can get done! :D...You got fired? For what? It is already hard enough keeping a steady flow of income as it is. Well...best of luck finding a new job as soon as possible.
On another note lets make this comic as good as possible!
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i planned the pages out but i wont get the layout or anything done until the end of the week or next week (my vacation starts next week)
but one of you can have a go at it :D
but one of you can have a go at it :D
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Freakychan wrote...
I got fired for having strep and asking for a night off after a 70+ hr week. I'm so sorry about that. At least you can relax a little now.
SeriousSAM wrote...
i planned the pages out but i wont get the layout or anything done until the end of the week or next week (my vacation starts next week) but one of you can have a go at it :D
The way you split it out into pages is really nice. When he says "Gladly", I agree with you to change it, since I wasn't sure exactly what to put. Also, whether or not the guy is naked is up to you guys :)
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So am I supposed to restart with Sam's pages, or keep going with the old ones? I'm okay with either but i'm a bit confused! Also it might be nice to add each other on skype or something in order to keep in touch easier?
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Well SAM made a layout according to what I wrote, so my guess is that we're sticking with what we already had. Black also made page 7 according to the old ones.
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guammastermind671
Da RL Lurker at FAKKU
I can come up with a lot of good stories if you need. I always had some fantasies that I told my friends about and they would comment great about it.
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guammastermind671 wrote...
I can come up with a lot of good stories if you need. I always had some fantasies that I told my friends about and they would comment great about it.PM krakis about that...
He can probably get somethin out of it.
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guammastermind671
Da RL Lurker at FAKKU
BlackShogunFox wrote...
guammastermind671 wrote...
I can come up with a lot of good stories if you need. I always had some fantasies that I told my friends about and they would comment great about it.PM krakis about that...
He can probably get somethin out of it.
Will do!