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Being at Crossed Paths Leads to Dreamy Love
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Parody
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The prim and proper girl he's been searching for is...
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MHM-Dono
Person Of Culture
1 year ago
Page 5 ..... It was at that moment when most readers realized something about Seiji:
"HE F_CKED UP!"
"HE F_CKED UP!"
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1 year ago
Yeesh, wish I could smack the oblivious guy in the back of the head!
*Sigh* ah well, no guts, no glory.
Dude should know you miss all of the shots you don't take.
Edit: It looks like he didn't really notice her until after she started seeing the other guy. Either way, one of their hearts would have been broken (okay maybe the other guy is mostly just horny, but whatevs).
*Sigh* ah well, no guts, no glory.
Dude should know you miss all of the shots you don't take.
Edit: It looks like he didn't really notice her until after she started seeing the other guy. Either way, one of their hearts would have been broken (okay maybe the other guy is mostly just horny, but whatevs).
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HoloOnMyDick
Wolf-girl husbando
1 year ago
Ah yes. ”I can’t believe it’s not cheating!!”
Just kind of disappointing over all. If FMC had more chemistry with the NTR “best friend” I think I’d be way more down for this. I know I shouldn’t be quibbling about details but idk give the guy some more redeeming qualities! Make him more interesting!
I recall a cheating chapter recently where the guy who lost the girl did so out of Ignorance to her job “as a dancer”. Way satisfying to see him cry at the end. Idk
Just kind of disappointing over all. If FMC had more chemistry with the NTR “best friend” I think I’d be way more down for this. I know I shouldn’t be quibbling about details but idk give the guy some more redeeming qualities! Make him more interesting!
I recall a cheating chapter recently where the guy who lost the girl did so out of Ignorance to her job “as a dancer”. Way satisfying to see him cry at the end. Idk
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1 year ago
Imo, the mc should screw up a little more. The thing is he fucks up once and lose the girl, ok that's nice. But, if he builds up a lot of fuck ups along the history just to make sure you can say "well, he brought that on himself", I would give no mind to the lack of characteristics on the walking dick he calls friend.
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1 year ago
Eh, no one's perfect. He's pushy and perhaps possessive, but he isn't exactly malicious or anything. It's not like he's getting a kick out of stealing someone's girl.
That being said, *shrugs* it's only high school. Who's to say where things go after this? We only ever get a peek into these characters' lives after all.
Edit: Ooo, I reread it and I see what you mean now. Okay, perhaps a bit too pushy...and that's an understatement. Pretty horny too. Still, he seems kind natured.
That being said, *shrugs* it's only high school. Who's to say where things go after this? We only ever get a peek into these characters' lives after all.
Edit: Ooo, I reread it and I see what you mean now. Okay, perhaps a bit too pushy...and that's an understatement. Pretty horny too. Still, he seems kind natured.
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HoloOnMyDick
Wolf-girl husbando
1 year ago
My main issue isn’t the pushiness but instead the lack of other points of interest as a character. I really just don’t buy him as a human being.
Hence I’m just not a huge fan of the relationship because it’s poorly justified. Dangles painfully close to “hypnotized by cock” and therefore it’s a bit shallow. Now, again, that’s a slight nitpick bit ive read so much hentai I know you can effectively establish character in 20 pages. Hell! 5 pages. Bro literally just has the brain between his legs nothing else. And that’s fine but I don’t think the story decisions around that character compliment that idea.
Does that make sense? Lol
Hence I’m just not a huge fan of the relationship because it’s poorly justified. Dangles painfully close to “hypnotized by cock” and therefore it’s a bit shallow. Now, again, that’s a slight nitpick bit ive read so much hentai I know you can effectively establish character in 20 pages. Hell! 5 pages. Bro literally just has the brain between his legs nothing else. And that’s fine but I don’t think the story decisions around that character compliment that idea.
Does that make sense? Lol
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gammenon
Story Junkie
1 year ago
I guess this basically is what Niku to Gohan BSS is going to be - "You blew it, dude" (I almost couldn't get past Page 5). In any case, I'm just not finding their mean-spirited NTRish kick, not that I'm complaining. Not like Ishito Yuhra's I Don't Know where female MC is actually ridiculing her osananajimi for no good reason while being on the phone having sex with someone else.
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That statement is true with almost every BSS story which is why it always loops back to the same question, if your reading BSS why not just read proper ntr. The MC usually has no effect or impact on the story plus the FMC was never "his girl" to begin with so she cant be stolen, so us readers feels no sympathy for him.
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