ClothoBuer's Art Work((C&C please) Momoka!!! XD )
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                ClothoBuer wrote...
ty sorrow ^^np just giving credit where credit is due
Edit: just went through the thread and wholly shit I had to +rep you for that Luna it looks Fukken great
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                        Sora_chan: hmmm all is done in SAI or a slight chance I may do like a special effect in photoshop... but I rarely do that now so its all SAI for me XD
np just giving credit where credit is due
Edit: just went through the thread and wholly shit I had to +rep you for that Luna it looks Fukken great
arigatou!!!! XD
glad you liked it
                Sorrow Bloodmist wrote...
ClothoBuer wrote...
ty sorrow ^^np just giving credit where credit is due
Edit: just went through the thread and wholly shit I had to +rep you for that Luna it looks Fukken great
arigatou!!!! XD
glad you liked it
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                        Hahaha, I haven't noticed that before on your SAI drafts. Owe you a lot man, it does provide some bullseye about layering, coloring, and some other important stuffs.                    
                
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                        you're improved a lot !! I especially like your " Cloche " one but like Kuroneko said, Kimono's shading folds are wrong !! Her hair's color is so good !! Ruu...                    
                
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                        can't wait ti see the final copy who know may be better than the original                    
                
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                        Yeah but at least you are willing to improve which means that with some constructive criticism and what not you can get better each time                    
                
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                        That is some pretty clean lineart right there. Do you lineart it relatively fast (each line takes 3 strokes at most to get right) or do you redo till you get the desired curves?                    
                
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                        Kuroneko1/2 wrote...
That is some pretty clean lineart right there. Do you lineart it relatively fast (each line takes 3 strokes at most to get right) or do you redo till you get the desired curves?thx i usually play with the line till I get how thin or think i want along with the pressure. My process takes a lot of time but It satisfies me at the end XD
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                        Looking good! Momoka is a pretty neat character to draw, and I think you've done well to represent her in your own style. :)
I feel like you can push the colors a bit more, but this could also be a problem with my monitor, so don't just take my word for it. The skin tone you've given her just seems so close to white- it could probably use a bit of hue, or maybe a colored background will help tone things down a little and keep the two from looking too similar.
Proportion-wise, I feel her head is too small for her body, but this can be easily solved by enlarging her head or shrinking her body.
Nitpicking aside, I think you have a nice piece here. Your lines are nice and clean and I think once you finish up the shading and details it will look quite nice. Keep up the good work! ;)
                I feel like you can push the colors a bit more, but this could also be a problem with my monitor, so don't just take my word for it. The skin tone you've given her just seems so close to white- it could probably use a bit of hue, or maybe a colored background will help tone things down a little and keep the two from looking too similar.
Proportion-wise, I feel her head is too small for her body, but this can be easily solved by enlarging her head or shrinking her body.
Nitpicking aside, I think you have a nice piece here. Your lines are nice and clean and I think once you finish up the shading and details it will look quite nice. Keep up the good work! ;)
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                        yagaminoue wrote...
Looking good! Momoka is a pretty neat character to draw, and I think you've done well to represent her in your own style. :)I feel like you can push the colors a bit more, but this could also be a problem with my monitor, so don't just take my word for it. The skin tone you've given her just seems so close to white- it could probably use a bit of hue, or maybe a colored background will help tone things down a little and keep the two from looking too similar.
Proportion-wise, I feel her head is too small for her body, but this can be easily solved by enlarging her head or shrinking her body.
Nitpicking aside, I think you have a nice piece here. Your lines are nice and clean and I think once you finish up the shading and details it will look quite nice. Keep up the good work! ;)
thanks yagami I appreciate for you taking the time to C&C it XD
Ill try and enlarge her head a bit but with the colors I have on might be too much for me to tweak...
I'm hoping to get a pen tablet soon so my work wont take as long as they do now.
 
                         
                         
                         
                     
                         
                         
                     
                     
                         
                    