ClothoBuer's Art Work((C&C please) Momoka!!! XD )

ty sorrow ^^

do you do your drafts in "Sai"??

np just giving credit where credit is due

Edit: just went through the thread and wholly shit I had to +rep you for that Luna it looks Fukken great

Sora_chan: hmmm all is done in SAI or a slight chance I may do like a special effect in photoshop... but I rarely do that now so its all SAI for me XD



arigatou!!!! XD
glad you liked it

Momoka... Himeko's character XD

Hahaha, I haven't noticed that before on your SAI drafts. Owe you a lot man, it does provide some bullseye about layering, coloring, and some other important stuffs.

you're improved a lot !! I especially like your " Cloche " one but like Kuroneko said, Kimono's shading folds are wrong !! Her hair's color is so good !! Ruu...

thx guys ^^

yeah.. i use lots of layering lol
ill work on kimono's more kaho XD

line art almost complete XD

look gr8 ^___^ I cant wait for the colored version !! Ruu...

It looks amazing, even more thinking you done that all with mouse.

can't wait ti see the final copy who know may be better than the original

thx guys ill do my best with colors even tho i do fail in the area a lot.

Yeah but at least you are willing to improve which means that with some constructive criticism and what not you can get better each time

gotta work on my colors so i can get them right...hopefully copying my idol's techniques helps.

That is some pretty clean lineart right there. Do you lineart it relatively fast (each line takes 3 strokes at most to get right) or do you redo till you get the desired curves?

thx i usually play with the line till I get how thin or think i want along with the pressure. My process takes a lot of time but It satisfies me at the end XD

C&C on colors and what i have so far would be great.

Looking good! Momoka is a pretty neat character to draw, and I think you've done well to represent her in your own style. :)

I feel like you can push the colors a bit more, but this could also be a problem with my monitor, so don't just take my word for it. The skin tone you've given her just seems so close to white- it could probably use a bit of hue, or maybe a colored background will help tone things down a little and keep the two from looking too similar.

Proportion-wise, I feel her head is too small for her body, but this can be easily solved by enlarging her head or shrinking her body.

Nitpicking aside, I think you have a nice piece here. Your lines are nice and clean and I think once you finish up the shading and details it will look quite nice. Keep up the good work! ;)

thanks yagami I appreciate for you taking the time to C&C it XD

Ill try and enlarge her head a bit but with the colors I have on might be too much for me to tweak...

I'm hoping to get a pen tablet soon so my work wont take as long as they do now.