ClothoBuer's Art Work((C&C please) Momoka!!! XD )
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Hmm anything that seem's odd or wrong point it out so I may be able to fix it, might post one more of progress.
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catfish wrote...
Her chest. :| It looks really flat.Otherwise, very nice. Dem legs.
Hmmm I started having something for flat chested girls... idk y but I just do now XD
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ClothoBuer wrote...
Hmmm I started having something for flat chested girls... idk y but I just do now XDWell it's not that she's flat-chested, it looks like she started out normal and that her boobs were smashed and kept flattened like a pancake lol
Now that I look at it more, I kind of agree with CoffeePrince about the head but it's really not bad at all. Just veeeery minute issues.
catfish wrote...
Otherwise very nice. Dem legs.
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I think I can see why people say she looks flat. I think the stripes on her breasts should be curved. Although I think my advice might be kinda late, right? lol Well, I've been looking through this thread,.. really nice work. =]
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Have you tried colouring your lineart? I think your work will look more cohesive if you do it. Lock the transparency on your lineart layer and just fill the lineart black with a dark shade of the area you're doing, like the hair with a slightly darker palette then your darkest shade of hair.
Other then that, keep it up =)
Other then that, keep it up =)
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Mycstea wrote...
Have you tried colouring your lineart? I think your work will look more cohesive if you do it. Lock the transparency on your lineart layer and just fill the lineart black with a dark shade of the area you're doing, like the hair with a slightly darker palette then your darkest shade of hair.Other then that, keep it up =)
Oh... I don't think I've tried that before but I will try some in the next one thx for the help Mycstea XD
I may come into trouble and if I do I may ask you for help.
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No problem, just pm me if you have any problems... I'm more into experimenting the Water tool in Sai now...
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Mycstea wrote...
No problem, just pm me if you have any problems... I'm more into experimenting the Water tool in Sai now...thx XD hmm that tool is really fun tho I don't know too much on how to use the tools in sai well.
your my inspiration to keep drawing :)
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Well, don't set your sights this low! I'm pretty n00b you know... I personally look up to Kantoku from 5å¹´ç›®ã®æ”¾èª²å¾Œ, or After School of the 5th Year for composition, while i look up to Makoto Shinkai for his backgrounds and lastly Goto-P for his awesome character colouring skills.
Check them out if you have the time =)
Check them out if you have the time =)
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Mycstea wrote...
Well, don't set your sights this low! I'm pretty n00b you know... I personally look up to Kantoku from 5å¹´ç›®ã®æ”¾èª²å¾Œ, or After School of the 5th Year for composition, while i look up to Makoto Shinkai for his backgrounds and lastly Goto-P for his awesome character colouring skills. Check them out if you have the time =)
Your still really good and thanks Ill look into those to pick up some stuff XD
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kinda disappointed in fact at the moment because I could not remember my account pass and the Forgot your pass gives me an error so I was forced to make new one and the avatar uploading doesn't work proper....
anyways.. Misuzu Kamio from Air for a friend.
thx for the advice Mycstea I found so many useful reference to use XD
anyways.. Misuzu Kamio from Air for a friend.
thx for the advice Mycstea I found so many useful reference to use XD
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Sabers Praetor
Unlimited Lewd Works
cant you just have your password emailed to you?
and looks nice very eye pleasing.
and looks nice very eye pleasing.
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unfortunately it didn't work because i got an error and would lead me to the suggestions part of the forums which doesn't help at all.. my comp was recently reformatted so this was my only option
