ClothoBuer's Art Work((C&C please) Momoka!!! XD )
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Love the detail done on hand and hair. Also judging from the sketch, I guess this will be a rendition of Kallen with a big chest.
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@Kaho17: thank you ^^ rep you back XD
@lelouch20: thanks umm... yeah her chest is gonna be massive XD
@lelouch20: thanks umm... yeah her chest is gonna be massive XD
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Jmac
"I'm a boob man"
This may be a stupid question or I wasn't paying any attention to the posts, but did you start with pencil drawings or did you use a wacom tablet to draw the image? Thanks!
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to answer your question I sketch with mouse first, then vector and last but not least I color XD
I'm doing 2 versions of this one with her suit and this one where she is nude.
I'm doing 2 versions of this one with her suit and this one where she is nude.
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The color of the shadows you have on her body is too saturated. You should study some shadows in real life and notice how they differ from the midtones in terms of temperature (warm/cool) and saturation.
I think you did the hair quite well though. Good job. :)
I think you did the hair quite well though. Good job. :)
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yagaminoue wrote...
The color of the shadows you have on her body is too saturated. You should study some shadows in real life and notice how they differ from the midtones in terms of temperature (warm/cool) and saturation.I think you did the hair quite well though. Good job. :)
^ i second the smart dude's opinion
and also where's her vagina? >3>
i am a retard when it comes to line art, some secret advice to share, puhlease? ;3 thanks, man
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Kallen Kozuki by ~kururugiZuzaku on deviantART
Heres the nude version
@yagami: Ill look into the skin tone in my next one so I can get it more accurate.
@colonel: Umm i used the vector layer and my lines are about x0.8 to x2 sometimes I may use bigger depending on what I may be doing... hope this answers close to your question.
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https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?p=1027079#1027079
Her name is Orifushi Akina. Orifushi Mafuyu is the younger sister.
Anyway, nice stuff. Better than what I can do.
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something that isn't fan art... well kinda gonna be my own oc of an operator in the game i play called exteel
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kinda getting disappointing not seen much C&C in this thread but can't force it lol anyways heres a new piece I'm working on
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ummm why is his right arm just awkwardly hovering in the air above his right leg.... something tells me they should be in contact, the midpoint of the forearm need to rest on the leg. I feel like his head is just a tiny bit smaller, but maybe that would fix itself with coloring. And the girl's butt? Kinda flat, maybe... The composition is good although i wish her left hand was not cut off so abruptly. I think this drawing would look awesome if you try to desaturate your color and maybe use more mellow shades- you work is predominantly bright, a change in the color scheme might be good XD
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ColonelāSovalkova wrote...
ummm why is his right arm just awkwardly hovering in the air above his right leg.... something tells me they should be in contact, the midpoint of the forearm need to rest on the leg. I feel like his head is just a tiny bit smaller, but maybe that would fix itself with coloring. And the girl's butt? Kinda flat, maybe... The composition is good although i wish her left hand was not cut off so abruptly. I think this drawing would look awesome if you try to desaturate your color and maybe use more mellow shades- you work is predominantly bright, a change in the color scheme might be good XDtried fixing some of the issues and Ill take an approach at mellow shades so here is the final sketch before I move on to line-art and coloring.
