ClothoBuer's Art Work((C&C please) Momoka!!! XD )
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                        good stuff
that sketch though...
guys right shoulder doesnt look like its forward enough the way it should be when your sitting hunched
and the way you drew it a bit it looks like he has a smaller left shoulder
the little ladys right shoulder looks like its pushed out a bit
make the guys deltoid a little more noticeable on his right shoulder even though its
clothes unless your aiming for thicker clothing
his trapezoid on the right side needs to be bumped up a bit even though the way you drew his body build medium small-medium
and this is just my comment at midnight burn...
if im wrong im wrong :P
                that sketch though...
guys right shoulder doesnt look like its forward enough the way it should be when your sitting hunched
and the way you drew it a bit it looks like he has a smaller left shoulder
the little ladys right shoulder looks like its pushed out a bit
make the guys deltoid a little more noticeable on his right shoulder even though its
clothes unless your aiming for thicker clothing
his trapezoid on the right side needs to be bumped up a bit even though the way you drew his body build medium small-medium
and this is just my comment at midnight burn...
if im wrong im wrong :P
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                        good job fitting her hand in the frame. that makes a great difference \^w^/  I'm kinda excited to see your new color palette. 
Emiya is dead on with his critique too. I agree. I still cant feel any weight from his arm.
                Emiya is dead on with his critique too. I agree. I still cant feel any weight from his arm.
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                        I hafta say, I'm really jealous with your overall drawing skills.
But when I see your drawing backgrounds, I just think : Just submit your drawings at here already!
...sugee
                But when I see your drawing backgrounds, I just think : Just submit your drawings at here already!
...sugee
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                        bit of update with the the drawing... some colors seem to shinny lol anyways... too tired to do anything so imma sleep so enjoy XD
 
                    
                 
                    
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                        @kaethe: thx ^^
hmm this is a new one im working on.

and this I got side tracked so decided to do this as well.
 
                    
                hmm this is a new one im working on.

and this I got side tracked so decided to do this as well.
 
                    
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done both the sketches so gonna line art and coloring imma delay to idk when... until my coloring is more accurate and stuff XD
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                        The colouring for the kimono looks wrong, man. Very wrong. Try to google some picture references.
edit: Be sure to take attention to the creases as well, as they look rather strange.
But everything else looks really nice. Good job.
                edit: Be sure to take attention to the creases as well, as they look rather strange.
But everything else looks really nice. Good job.
 
                         
                         
                         
                     
                         
                         
                     
                         
                        
 
                    