ClothoBuer's Art Work((C&C please) Momoka!!! XD )

Sorry, but this is Mafuyu.



Akina is correct, though.



I love the Kanojo characters :D Great drawings!

Gahhh!!! I feel so dumb now got it mixed up...

thx for correcting me XD

Sarah operator from EXTEEL

look gr8 !! Color it ^^ !! Ruu...

thx Kaho!! ^^ I'm gonna try drawing mech again and add in Background or something XD

So far it looks like it's coming along nicely. Can't wait to see the end result with colors. Btw what is that triangle figure on the girl's left foot.

thankyou XD hmm that's supposed to be the line under your foot kinda like the ones on your palm I maybe wrong but correct me if I am ^^

Well I get what line you are talking about, if you don't feel like removing maybe don't make the two lines connect like leave a gap. But this is purely my own opinion, so you don't have to take it at heart. However I have found that most cases not connecting or completing a line fully creates interesting results. Take for example the line for a mouth :3

got it Ill give that a try then XD

Update on progress XD

Dude, for the love of god, redraw her right foot (and leg too). Aside from that, you're good to colour. Good luck.

ps: Wanna know a cool trick to do smooth long lines? You see that option on the top that says stabilizer? Try choosing a higher value than 3. That is, if you didn't know it already.

Yea I was told to fix that right foot ill be getting to that XD

Was wondering if you were gonna put clothes on her or not, guess this answers my question. Anyways can't wait to see the end result, also as Kuroneko said get to work on the foot lol :3

shes gonna wear clothes most likely her uniform just got to fix her top and add her skirt and maybe along her high heels XD

Nice stuff! I can't wait to see how your latest picture turns out. :)

One small tip- when shading the body, don't just shade the edges. Try to work out a light source and shade from there. It'll help your characters look a lot more defined. :)

enjoy ^^


Sarah by ~kururugiZuzaku on deviantART

You chose a pretty difficult pose to work with, but the end result is not too bad. Perspective is always a pain, and trying to convey such extreme foreshortening is quite difficult. Try to think of the body in terms of shapes, then draw those shapes in perspective to help you get the desired results. As of now, her right foot seems to be the iffiest part of the drawing, but I think you did a pretty good job overall. :)

Make sure you get some contrast in your colors as well, and don't just use the dodge and burn tools for that either.

Thx yagami ^^ Ill try and not use the burn tool much but don't think there is one in SAI either way thx for C&C XD

guren lagann drawing of Yoko

Her shoulders seem a bit odd, but that's about the only issue I see right now. She looks really cute otherwise- nice job. :)

By the way, you should definitely do a rough sketch on a separate layer before lining over it if you don't do so already. It really helps resolve a lot of the problems that come from drawing free handed. :)