High School Fic
Sooo...
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Damienthedevil wrote...
Man.... the 1st two pics looks so different from my image of Yuki.... I mean she was supposed to be a nice girl with a nice personality to match. The glaring eyes doesn't suit her imageDuh. That's why I told ya to judge. It was a random image, so it doesn't really portrays Yuki.
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Lol well you draw much better than I so i don't think i have any right to judge you but i still think you should draw the eyes to be much softer and kinder looking
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Damienthedevil wrote...
Lol well you draw much better than I so i don't think i have any right to judge you but i still think you should draw the eyes to be much softer and kinder lookingI think the face already suits her except for the eyes, no? I'm already working on that
Chapter 5: 49% (>_> slow)
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Hey Uzumaki!! What's with the slacking off?! Just because i never went online for 3 months you started getting lazy and not even bothered to continue writing is it?! :evil: :evil:
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Damienthedevil wrote...
Hey Uzumaki!! What's with the slacking off?! Just because i never went online for 3 months you started getting lazy and not even bothered to continue writing is it?! :evil: :evil:OH SHIT! I FORGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!! OMGWTF STFU ROFL LMAO LMFAO ?!!@#uj!?n?
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! I HAVE COMPLETELY FORGOTTEN ABOUT THIS FIIIIIIIIIIIC!!!! *beats myself up till I can't stands no more*
Anyways, I'm thinking of transferring this to the RS forums, Damien. You could check out that site. It's mostly made up of the Random Squad (well, since FAKKU indirectly kicked them out of here)
www.Randomsquad.com/forums
There. Just register as a member and press the "home" button below your profile. I'm usually in teh chatbox using the name "Rakan-han". Call me out there, since i'm usually online.
Now for this story.... My God, how did I forget my promise _|¯|O
Anyways, i'm gonna finish this! Count on that!
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Damienthedevil wrote...
Hey Uzumaki!! What's with the slacking off?! Just because i never went online for 3 months you started getting lazy and not even bothered to continue writing is it?! :evil: :evil:I quoted you just so you could check your e-mail, lol =D. Anyways, The chapter is almost done. Just needs some finishing touches. If i'm right, you could expect the new chapter in..... 12-14 hours! I'm gonna sleep now, so expect it to come up around that time.
Chapter 5: 74% (LOL. Almost done :D)
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Ahahaha, should I be laughing right now?
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I forgot..... okay, that's a lame excuse. What happened was that, well...
I got drunk and I forgot how to finish the ending _|¯|O
But after a week, it came back to me! So now i'm gonna finish it. expect it (fo' Real!) today or tomorrow.
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Spoiler:
I forgot..... okay, that's a lame excuse. What happened was that, well...
I got drunk and I forgot how to finish the ending _|¯|O
But after a week, it came back to me! So now i'm gonna finish it. expect it (fo' Real!) today or tomorrow.
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High School Fic is officialy DISCONTINUED
For reasons, see spoiler
Ah, ah, ah. Not yet. I'm still thinking of how to lead up to that part, lol. But I DO know how the story will end. SO, that's it for now. Later :3
For reasons, see spoiler
Spoiler:
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Ah, ah, ah. Not yet. I'm still thinking of how to lead up to that part, lol. But I DO know how the story will end. SO, that's it for now. Later :3
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biglw17 wrote...
lol i gotta re-read the 4 chapters cuz i have no clue whats whatSo did I. And i'm the author, lol.
BTW, i'm not "nearly" done, but i'm getting to it.
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Bump, because i'm not done with this shit.
I'm still planning on continuing this, but no idea WHEN (life's just too hectic right now)
I'm still planning on continuing this, but no idea WHEN (life's just too hectic right now)
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Damienthedevil wrote...
Well, this is nostalgic. I guess I'll need to go back and refresh my memory on this story. Dude, you have no idea how hard i've been trying to keep up with this. But for some reason or another, I CAN'T.
It's like God's yanking my chain or something D:
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Uzumaki101 wrote...
Damienthedevil wrote...
Well, this is nostalgic. I guess I'll need to go back and refresh my memory on this story. Dude, you have no idea how hard i've been trying to keep up with this. But for some reason or another, I CAN'T.
It's like God's yanking my chain or something D:
I read up on the story again and I think:
Nagato Yuki - Nice Girl, current crush.
Karin Scarlett - Childhood friend, likes Soushi.
Ai ??? - New girl, quiet.
I couldn't find the ending that you had in mind that you sent to me years back so I can't recall it.... BTW, found some grammar and spelling mistakes in Chapter 4. Don't mind it, it was minor. Just pointing it out anyway.
I believe you were doing a date with Soushi and Yuki?
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Damienthedevil wrote...
Nagato Yuki - Nice Girl, current crush.Karin Scarlett - Childhood friend, likes Soushi.
Ai ??? - New girl, quiet.
I couldn't find the ending that you had in mind that you sent to me years back so I can't recall it.... BTW, found some grammar and spelling mistakes in Chapter 4. Don't mind it, it was minor. Just pointing it out anyway.
I believe you were doing a date with Soushi and Yuki?
Spoiler:
Yeah, pretty much.
Your advice will be heeded, but not in this chapter
But for now, here's a prologue to chapter 5. I'm almost done with it, just have to finish the action scenes
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Spoiler:
Please do not heed my last preview, as it is now invalid. It was supposed to include horses, but then I thought "WTF??? horses? In a mall? Yeah, fuck that idea"