Mommy's Boy (New Direction) (Announcement, January 2)

You did a great job Yama-Kun, no doubt about it.

If a threesome had a sound it would sound like the doorbell at the end. I really need to buy some twister games now. (Semi-related). I came across my old Bop-It toy. Thinking about it now its alot like instructions on how to play with balls. Another solid chapter Randomness! My favorite part was where Ashley said "What streets did we pass?" and Jack is speechless. Gotta love that style of humor.

Thanks, Brok3n! Ahh, Bop-It, now I feel dirty for having played it. Hell of a difficult game to boot also.

When is the next chapter coming up?

I'm gonna try for tomorrow or Wednesday. Sorry about that, haven't been piled up with homework like this for a while. But I will also update it this coming weekend.

Chapter 11 is ready! Again, I apologize for the delay, everyone! Hope you all enjoy the lovely couple!

Blonde? Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't you describe Rachel as having blue and black hair from that early dream?

Either way, another hot chapter. Sorry for the late review. Keep 'em coming! I wanna see how this ends! :D

It's gotten to the point where even i forgot lol, I might keep it blue, retcon it or just say she changes hair colors for some reason.

Thanks for being a longtime fan, Art! Truly appreciate it! I'm a fan of Nova Chasers also, I got a Mass Effect/Star Wars vibe off it.


Also, everyone, I'm sorry about not updating the story this past weekend, I got sick over the weekend and still am sick right now, hopefully by this weekend I will already be fine and update it.

I didn't want to say anything because it was so good, but weird. Weird that the father would want to do a three way competition with his son and his wife. O.o

But it was good, and I really didn't have any comments for it, and you take your time to get better Random. I know how it feels to get sick (and way too often for my tastes [me getting sick that is]).

Thanks Zandorf! Yeah, a little friendly rivalry between them both.

Thanks for the wishes, Zandorf. I just hope I get over it soon.

No chapter 12?...It's been a while since you updated

I'm going to update it this weekend, I was sick last weekend and just started feeling better yesterday.

I haven't actually read it, kinda skimmed it along the way; but I noticed the improvements. From the script-like text, to the actual story with paragraphs. I'll leave my review later on, but save to say you did a great work for this story.

Thanks for the support, Seishiro! Just in time for the new chapter too. I tried getting a story in and glad to see it pulled off.

All right, everyone, new chapter out today! Gave it a shot at BDSM and see how it turns out. Hope everyone enjoys reading it!

Again, I apologize for the late release, as for I was sick. I will try to stay within the deadline with the upcoming chapters and finish this off next month.

Alright chapter 11 and 12. (I was expecting 12 to be the end up until now so I was holding a post on 11).

Chapter 11

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Chapter 12



Both chapters are funny, clever, and fappable. I love this series.

Props to Yama-Kun for a great side story.

Since this is Fakku I dont feel too bad saying something this chessy.

"Dont push yourself". I was sick until just recently myself.

Good luck with what's looking like the final chapter in "three more days". At this point Jack could do a total 180 and steal Ashley then disappear to Antarctica and I would still love the ending. Thanks for all your hard work!

P.S

I thank you for the support Brok3n, truly means a lot to me. I plan on making 14-17 the best yet with the story involved. Again, I truly appreciate your support.

As for the statement, it is "Koko kara sakini wa ikasenu!" Roughly translated as: "You shall not proceed further from this point." I would suggest to take a class in Japanese, it is pretty hard self-learning. I took some classes and would gladly help you out.

Hope you get well soon, Brok3n.

I havent studied kana at all. Didnt realize "wa" is written as は(ha). Yeah at some point I will need to take that class. "You shall not pass"! You're very welcome.

That's the particle version. Things like these you have to watch out for and it helps to know when は is either "wa" or "ha" for example.

Poor Mark, he didn't even get to fuck his own wife together with Jack. I was hoping for a DP chapter....again.

Yeah, sorry about that. I kind of tried, but doing I just didn't find a way.

Also, I'll update the story tomorrow.